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的外貌和性格。2. 介紹和你朋友之間發(fā)生的一件令人難忘的事;3. 你是怎樣看待你們之間的友誼的要求:1. 語句連貫通順,文章銜接緊密2. 詞數(shù)801003. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實校名及姓名Friends are very important in our life. They always help us when we are in need.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】My best friendFriends are very important in our life. They always help us when we are in need. Everyone needs friends to talk with and get confidence from.My best friend is Jenny. She is a quiet girl. She is always friendly and helpful. She is a tall girl with long hair. She does well in all the subjects and gets on well with others at school.I was weak in maths. One day, I failed in maths exam. I was so sad that I couldn’t help crying. Jenny encouraged me a lot. From then on, she helped me with my maths, With her help, I got an A in the next maths exam. I was really thankful to her.I think friendship is a necessary part of our lives. I want to keep our friendship forever.【解析】【詳解】試題分析:這是一個提綱作文。題目給出了標(biāo)題及寫作要點。根據(jù)題目要求可知,人稱以第三人稱為主。時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時。我們要做的就是用正確的英語句子來組織這些材料,在描寫外貌和性格時,會用到系表結(jié)構(gòu),注意主謂一致關(guān)系。介紹發(fā)生的一件難忘的事情,要用到一般過去時態(tài)。另外在寫作時可以適當(dāng)使用一些連詞,使之上下連貫,合乎邏輯。【點睛】人物介紹是記敘文中常見的一種寫作類型。內(nèi)容可以是介紹自己也可以介紹他人,包括姓名、年齡、外貌特征、興趣愛好,有時也可以包括日?;顒印r態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)。在介紹長相時用“be+形容詞”來描述人物的身高、體重、身材等;用“have/has + (straight/curly) hair / (big/small) eyes/nose/mouth”來描述頭發(fā)或五官。用“wear + 某種衣服”來介紹某人的穿戴。用be good at doing ,用like sth./doing “My/His/her favorite + 名詞+ is …”來介紹某人的最愛。當(dāng)主語是第三人稱單數(shù)時,注意主謂一致關(guān)系。10.書面表達(dá)為感受母愛情深,弘揚(yáng)知恩圖報,某英語網(wǎng)站正在舉辦以MyMother為主題的征文活動,請根據(jù)下列思維導(dǎo)圖所提供的信息,寫一篇短文,介紹你的母親和你之間的故事。參考詞匯:givemuchto…,It39。smyturnto…,trymybestto…提示:1)短文內(nèi)容須包括所給內(nèi)容,含母親曾為你所做的事和你將為母親所做的事各一件,并闡述原因;2)請注意短文結(jié)構(gòu)層次、時態(tài)運(yùn)用和卷面整潔度;3)詞數(shù)80個左右,短文開頭已給出,不計入總詞數(shù);4)文中不得出現(xiàn)學(xué)校和個人的相關(guān)信息。MyMotherWeneedlove.Wealsoneedtoshowlove.ThepersonIlovemostismymother.___.【答案】My motherWe need love.We also need toshow love.The person I love most is my mother.My mother is 41 years old.She is of medium build with long black hair.She is quiet.She is a history teacher in a middle school.She likes dancing.She can cook delicious food.She did a lot for me when I was a child.She bought whatever I needed for my study,even though she didn39。t have much money.She sent me from piano lessons to dancing lessons at the weekend.She cooked delicious and healthy food for me.When I grow up,I will do what I can to make my mother happy.I will find a good job after I graduate from college.I39。ll save money and buy beautiful clothes that make her look still young.I39。ll take her to wonderful sights around China.Most importantly,I will stay with her when I have free time.That39。s what she wants most,I think.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇給材料作文。為感受母愛情深,弘揚(yáng)知恩圖報,要求以MyMother為主題寫一篇短文介紹你的母親和你之間的故事,參加某英語網(wǎng)站正在舉辦的征文活動。在寫作時,注意文章文體、人稱和時態(tài);注意連句成篇,保持文章的連貫性,要層次清楚,要點分明,中心突出。同時要注意語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu),造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣;盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式,最好不要寫太長的復(fù)合句;盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞,確保正確率;詞匯、句式要豐富多樣,可以為文章增色添彩。【點睛】首先認(rèn)真審題,看清題目中的要求和要點;然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容,列出寫作要點及每個要點中可能要用到的表達(dá);然后緊扣要點,動筆寫作,在寫作過程中,要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡,必要時可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞,使文章過渡平穩(wěn),自然流暢;同時注意語句要通順,詞匯書寫無誤,不要出現(xiàn)語法錯誤。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查,確保正確無誤。