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【答案】It’s spring now. Many people like to go out for some activities. I think it’s a good way to get close to nature.When we are outdoors and in the natural world, we can not only breathe fresh air and enjoy the beautiful scene, but also relax ourselves for the ing study or work.There are many different ways we can get out into the natural world, such as hiking, cycling, camping and climbing. Cycling is my favourite. I join a cycling club, and often go out with other members. While cycling, we can forget our worries and have fun together. Also, we can learn to be a part of a team and help each other.Whatever you do, remember to stay safe. When you’re outside, it’s better to be with your parents or friends.【解析】試題分析:本篇書面表達以“outdoor activities”為話題,結合所給的寫作材料,寫一篇報刊征文稿。根據(jù)內容提示可知本文會使用到一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài),注意一些常見句式的應用。寫作中注意連詞、固定短語的交替使用,使文意連接緊密,還要注意使用豐富的語句,注意敘述順序,符合邏輯關系,最后最好要表達出人物的感想和看法。寫作亮點:本文結構緊湊,語言簡練、要點齊全。文中in the natural world, not only…but also, get out, such as, also等詞(組)的恰當使用,使上下文意連接緊密;本文還采用了豐富的句型,比如:It is +形容詞+(for sb.) to do sth.;There be句型;時間狀語從句等復合句,大大增加了信息的容量,使文章增色不少,這是一篇不錯的范文。10.4月23日是“世界讀書日”,你校英語俱樂部正在開展主題為“多讀書,讀好書”的活動。假如你是李華,請你寫一封倡議書,向全體同學發(fā)出號召。內容包括:應該讀什么樣的書,以及讀書的意義。提示詞語:story, novel, knowledge, improve, important提示問題:● What kind of books should we read? ● Why do we read?Dear students, the World Reading Day is ing. So I’m here again to call on all of us to read more books and read good books. Li Hua【答案】例文Dear students, the World Reading Day is ing. As a middle school student, everyone should read books. Firstly, reading increases our knowledge and we can learn the world affairs without going out. Secondly, reading is a good way to improve reading and writing skills. Finally, reading can broaden our knowledge and horizon, which is important to job hunting in the future. Therefore, start to reading, no matter how old you are and what you are doing. So I’m here again to call on all of us to read more books and read good books. Li Hua【解析】【詳解】題干解讀:該題目屬于應用文寫作,但寫作時要按照應用文格式寫,寫作時承接短文開頭,寫出對學生的倡議。例文點評:例文采用的是一段式,寫的是閱讀的好處,時態(tài)采用的是一般現(xiàn)在時,描述倡議時,描寫細致,條理清晰。高分亮點:短語:Firstly;Secondly;Finally;a good way to do sth;broaden our knowledge and horizon。句型:reading is a good way to improve reading and writing skills;reading can broaden our knowledge and horizon, which is important to job hunting in the future。