【正文】 三年來的收獲；感謝老師的培養(yǎng)、父母的支持、同學的幫助；祝愿，在寫作中適當發(fā)揮，語句通順，符合邏輯，符合發(fā)言稿的格式，沒有出現(xiàn)自己的真實姓名。9．近期某英文報紙就“Snowplow Parents（掃雪機式父母）”這一話題展開討論?！皰哐C式父母”的特征是不惜一切代價為孩子掃除他們生活中遇到的一切障礙，解決一切困難，以便他們可以輕松擁有成功的人生。請從下表的兩種觀點中選擇一種觀點，并結(jié)合此觀點闡述自己的看法，用英文寫一篇短文投稿。觀點理解不理解父母出于對孩子的愛才這么做。父母控制一切，孩子沒有自由。自己的看法自己的看法要求：詞數(shù)：6080詞。短文應(yīng)包括所選觀點中的要點，可適當發(fā)揮。短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文I really can39。t understand the snowplow these parents,they control clean all the obstacles in children39。s this case,they think children have a successful life ,Children have no freedom to do is the worst thing in their life.In my opinion,parents shouldn39。t do all the things for they also need the experiences in their these experiences play an important role in a successful this way,they know that they need to try their best to solve the problems by themselves when they are in ,they sometimes can gain friendship and more love in their lives.【解析】【詳解】：本文是一篇話題作文，要求就“Snowplow Parents（掃雪機式父母）” 這一話題展開討論，并根據(jù)表格中所給出的提示內(nèi)容選擇一種觀點，結(jié)合此觀點闡述自己的看法。在解答寫作這類試題時，要根據(jù)短文的中心思想考慮如何開頭、展開和結(jié)尾，將主要句型、關(guān)鍵詞語草草記下，形成提綱，然后再動筆寫作。： 本文時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱主要為第三人稱，輔以第一人稱。文章首先說明不理解掃雪機式父母的原因，接下來說明自己的觀點，并闡述自己觀點的原因。：短語：in one39。s lives，in this case，in this way，in trouble。句型：高分句型一：Inthiscase，theythinkchildrenhaveasuccessfullifeeasily．Inthiscase在這樣的情況下；這句話意為：在這樣的情況下，他們認為孩子會更加輕松擁有成功的人生。高分句型二：they know that they need to try their best to solve the problems by themselves when they are in trouble.beintrouble陷入麻煩，這句話意為：當他們陷入麻煩時他們知道他們需要他們自己盡力去解決問題。10．書面表達?！癏ow can a teenager have a successful life?”的討論，為此你采訪了一些同學（結(jié)果見下表）。請據(jù)上經(jīng)用英語寫一篇短文參與討論，并闡述你的觀點。同學主要觀點你的觀點努力學習尊重父母服務(wù)社會計劃未來……（至少兩條）注意：（1）短文必須包括表中所有內(nèi)容，可適當增加細節(jié)；（2）你的觀點至少兩條；（3）詞數(shù)：80—100；（4）短文首句僅供選擇使用，不計入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：尊重respect短文首句：I have recently done a survey about how a teenager can have a successful life.【答案】I have recently done a survey about how a teenager can have a successful life.Most students believe it’s necessary to study hard. After all, study plays a key role in their life. They also agree they should respect their parents, who look after them every day. Besides, they’re ready to serve the society and in their opinion it’s really meaningful. What’s more, they think each teenager is supposed to make a good plan for future.From my point of view, we need to make some good friends so that we can learn from each other. Also, we must be active and exercise more to keep healthy because it’s important to a successful life.【解析】試題分析：英語教育網(wǎng)站開展主題為“How can a teenager have a successful life?”的討論，采訪了一些同學參與討論，寫出他們的觀點及自己的觀點。因為是敘述同學的現(xiàn)在的觀點，所以句子應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時，敘述同學的觀點用第三人稱，敘述自己的觀點用第一人稱。注意不要遺漏要點，所寫的句子應(yīng)該符合英語語法，不能是漢語式的句子，要使用一些高級詞匯及句式。寫作亮點：短文用了一些短語和句式，如：do a survey about sth關(guān)于某事做調(diào)查；respect their parents,尊敬他們的父母；look after照顧；make a good plan for sth為某事做一個好的計劃；make some good friends交一些好朋友；keep healthy保持健康。用了賓語從句，如：Most students believe it’s necessary to study hard. What’s more, they think each teenager is supposed to make a good plan for ，如：Also, we must be active and exercise more to keep healthy because it’s important to a successful ，也是提分的經(jīng)典句子?？键c：材料作文。