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rents are living a happy and healthy life in the the way, could I have a photo of Sulin taken on her third birthday? Thank you very much in truly,Li Hua【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】本文寫(xiě)作的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下:。這封信格式正確,行文規(guī)范,描述有條不紊,稱呼、正文中的開(kāi)頭及結(jié)尾、結(jié)束語(yǔ)均表達(dá)到位。文章行文活潑,感情真摯,語(yǔ)言表述準(zhǔn)確,洋溢著作者因大熊貓得到精心照顧而對(duì)美方人員的感激之情,以及希望自己愿望成真,得到照片的希冀之情。長(zhǎng)短句運(yùn)用合理,結(jié)合了簡(jiǎn)單句和復(fù)合句,流暢自然,不露痕跡,的確是一篇佳作。積累卡片英漢互譯 ,快樂(lè)的 birth to ,生育好句I’d like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the ,正是你們的努力工作讓蘇琳和它的父母在美國(guó)過(guò)著幸福和健康的生活?!救珖?guó)卷II】【試題回放】一家賓館新開(kāi)業(yè),為吸引外國(guó)賓客,希望在互聯(lián)網(wǎng)上進(jìn)行宣傳。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)為其 寫(xiě)一篇文字介紹。主要內(nèi)容包括::距白山入口處500米。:?jiǎn)稳碎g(共20間),100元/天。雙人間(共15間),150元/天。熱水淋浴。:餐廳(中、西餐),咖啡廳(茶、咖啡)。:全天免費(fèi)開(kāi)放。注意:,開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已為你寫(xiě)好。,以使行文連貫。Wele to Baishan Mountain Hotel!Baishan Mountain Hotel is now open for meters far from the entrance of Baishan Mountain, it provides singleperson room, of which the price is RMB100 yuan per day and the number is 20, and 15 double person rooms, with a price of RMB 150 yuan per also provides hot water bath can enjoy both Chinese and western food in the restaurant and drink coffee and tea in the swimming pool is open for free the whole these services can bring great convenience to you and are very e to enjoy yourself!Wele to book rooms in Baishan 免費(fèi)答疑解題熱線 053186969606 :1044738198 希望更多老師加入到公益教學(xué)中【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】本文開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山,首先點(diǎn)明了主旨。本文最大的特點(diǎn)是應(yīng)用了很多比較復(fù)雜的句式,使文章比較出彩。開(kāi)頭使用了獨(dú)立結(jié)構(gòu)交代賓館位置。which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句的使用也很正確??偟貋?lái)說(shuō),文章句式精煉,是篇不錯(cuò)的滿分作文。積累卡片英漢互譯好詞 好句All these services can bring great convenience to you and arevery ,并且非常的愉快。評(píng)析:bring great convenience,帶來(lái)便利?!局貞c卷】【試題回放】據(jù)報(bào)道,7歲的美國(guó)女孩Amy Bruce得知自己身患肺癌(lung cancer)后處于極度的痛苦之中,美國(guó)抗癌協(xié)會(huì)(ACS)決定,每當(dāng)Amy收到一封慰問(wèn)信,就給她增加3美分的治療款。假如你是新華中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華,請(qǐng)你用英文給Amy寫(xiě)一封慰問(wèn)信,主要內(nèi)容包括:自我介紹得知的情況表示鼓勵(lì)打算為她做什么祝她早日康復(fù)注意:。Dear Amy,I’m Li Hua from Xinhua Middle School of ’m sorry to hear that you got the lung cancer which brought you great you should realize that you are young and have a promising great , stand up and fight against the disease!I’m sure you will is reported that the America anticancer association will donate three cents upon every fort letter you I will tell your situation to all my friends and ask them to write to that way, you will get enough money for you to be you can be well ,Li Hua[名師點(diǎn)評(píng)]本文依照要求,涵蓋了所有要點(diǎn)。文章使用了高中常見(jiàn)的句式,如I’m sorry to hear that..., It is reported that...等,都比較好。作者對(duì)定語(yǔ)從句的使用恰到好處地修飾了文章,行文自然而通順,值得學(xué)習(xí)。積累卡片 m sorry to hear that you got the lung cancer which brings you great ,給你帶來(lái)了巨大的痛苦。好處:which引導(dǎo)限制性定語(yǔ)從句。, stand up and fight against the disease!因此,堅(jiān)強(qiáng)地與疾病做斗爭(zhēng)吧!李老師滿分課堂 免費(fèi)答疑解題熱線 053186969606 :1044738198 希望更多老師加入到公益教學(xué)中好處:擲地有聲,語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確。,句式準(zhǔn)確【江蘇卷】【試題回放】2007年4月29日上午10點(diǎn)到11點(diǎn),全國(guó)億萬(wàn)學(xué)生陽(yáng)光體育活動(dòng)在各地大中小學(xué)校同時(shí)進(jìn)行,江蘇省1,100萬(wàn)學(xué)生積極參與了這項(xiàng)活動(dòng)。教育部倡導(dǎo)學(xué)生:u 每天鍛煉一小時(shí)u 健康工作五十年u 幸福生活一輩子請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以上提示,用英語(yǔ)準(zhǔn)備一份發(fā)言稿,向同學(xué)們講述一下陽(yáng)光體育活動(dòng)的有關(guān)情況,并就高三學(xué)生是否需要每天花一小時(shí)鍛煉,談?wù)勀愕目捶袄碛?。注意:發(fā)言稿應(yīng)包括以上所有信息,要有適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。詞數(shù):120左右。發(fā)言稿的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫(xiě)好,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯:陽(yáng)光體育活動(dòng)——a national student sports program。教育部——the Ministry of EducationGood afternoon, everyone,The national student sports program, waged by the Ministry of Education and aimed at improving students health, was held from 10:.~11: April 29,2007 in many primary and middle schools all over 11 million students in Jiangsu province participated in this Ministry of Education advocates that we do exercises for one hour a day and can work healthily for 50 whole life will be very my opinion, we senior high school students should do exercises for one hour a day even though our spare time is is a basic condition for our we did not do exercises, we wouldn’t be able to get good study every one of you, join the program now!Thank you!【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】本文的結(jié)構(gòu)十分明晰,同時(shí)句式使用得熟練而準(zhǔn)確。本文分為三段,前兩段敘述,后一段發(fā)表觀點(diǎn),典型的作文結(jié)構(gòu)。在句式使用上,作者用法多樣,使用了獨(dú)立結(jié)構(gòu)和虛擬語(yǔ)氣,十分出彩。復(fù)雜的句式是本文的特點(diǎn)之一。積累卡片 Ministry of Education advocates that we do exercises for one hour a day and can work healthily for 50 ,能夠健康地活50年。評(píng)析:advocate,其后接虛擬語(yǔ)氣,可以省略情態(tài)動(dòng)詞。 we did not do exercises, we wouldn’t be able to get good study ,我們的學(xué)習(xí)成績(jī)就不會(huì)很好。評(píng)析:虛擬語(yǔ)氣。李老師滿分課堂 免費(fèi)答疑解題熱線 053186969606 :1044738198 希望更多老師加入到公益教學(xué)中這山望著那山高 The grass is always greener on the other ,對(duì)自己的狀況沒(méi)有滿意的時(shí)候。Almost all people see that the grass is greener on the other never feel satisfied with what they’ve already 、上癮get into one’s blood說(shuō)來(lái)也怪,很多不好的事往往會(huì)使人上癮。It’s astoundingly funny that many harmful things usually get into our 、發(fā)牢騷 beef 他坐在那里什么事也不干,總是發(fā)牢騷,真煩死人。I’m really bored stiff with his sitting there doing nothing but 、等不及了 champ at the bit 咱們快點(diǎn)吧,孩子們都等不及了。Let’s shake the kids are champing at the 、點(diǎn)頭哈腰bow and scrape 從她在老板前點(diǎn)頭哈腰地那個(gè)模樣,你就知道她是個(gè)什么人了。From the way she’s bowing and scraping in front of the boss, you’ll know what sort of person she 、瘋瘋癲癲go gaga 對(duì)他的話不要太在意了,他總是瘋瘋癲癲的。Don’t take what he says so ’s always going 免費(fèi)答疑解題熱線 053186969606 :1044738198 希望更多老師加入到公益教學(xué)中說(shuō)話不算數(shù)go back on one’s words 他那個(gè)人說(shuō)話從不算數(shù),我們可不能依靠他。We cannot account on always goes back on his 、廢話連篇beat one’s gums 誰(shuí)喜歡坐在那里聽(tīng)你的廢話連篇?Who would enjoy sitting there listening to your beating your gums?恩將仇報(bào) bite the hand that feeds one 你難道不知道她是個(gè)恩將仇報(bào)的人?Don’t you know she’s the one that would bite the hand that feeds her?不忍心not have the heart to do 如果我是你,我可不忍心把孩子們就在家里沒(méi)人照看If I were you, I wouldn’t have the heart to leave the kids at home uncared 、勤快an eager beaver 他特別勤快,從來(lái)沒(méi)有閑著的時(shí)候。He’s an eager beaver, never staying idle第三篇:全國(guó)高考英語(yǔ)滿分作文賞析(寫(xiě)寫(xiě)幫推薦)。表達(dá)地道【北京卷】【試題回放】