【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 0 yuan per also provides hot water bath can enjoy both Chinese and western food in the restaurant and drink coffee and tea in the swimming pool is open for free the whole these services can bring great convenience to you and are very e to enjoy yourself!Wele to book rooms in Baishan 免費答疑解題熱線 053186969606 ：1044738198 希望更多老師加入到公益教學(xué)中【名師點評】本文開門見山，首先點明了主旨。本文最大的特點是應(yīng)用了很多比較復(fù)雜的句式，使文章比較出彩。開頭使用了獨立結(jié)構(gòu)交代賓館位置。which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句的使用也很正確?？偟貋碚f，文章句式精煉，是篇不錯的滿分作文。積累卡片英漢互譯好詞 好句All these services can bring great convenience to you and arevery ，并且非常的愉快。評析：bring great convenience，帶來便利?！局貞c卷】【試題回放】據(jù)報道，7歲的美國女孩Amy Bruce得知自己身患肺癌(lung cancer)后處于極度的痛苦之中，美國抗癌協(xié)會(ACS)決定，每當Amy收到一封慰問信，就給她增加3美分的治療款。假如你是新華中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華，請你用英文給Amy寫一封慰問信，主要內(nèi)容包括：自我介紹得知的情況表示鼓勵打算為她做什么祝她早日康復(fù)注意：。Dear Amy，I’m Li Hua from Xinhua Middle School of ’m sorry to hear that you got the lung cancer which brought you great you should realize that you are young and have a promising great , stand up and fight against the disease!I’m sure you will is reported that the America anticancer association will donate three cents upon every fort letter you I will tell your situation to all my friends and ask them to write to that way, you will get enough money for you to be you can be well ，Li Hua[名師點評]本文依照要求，涵蓋了所有要點。文章使用了高中常見的句式，如I’m sorry to hear that..., It is reported that...等，都比較好。作者對定語從句的使用恰到好處地修飾了文章，行文自然而通順，值得學(xué)習(xí)。積累卡片 m sorry to hear that you got the lung cancer which brings you great ，給你帶來了巨大的痛苦。好處：which引導(dǎo)限制性定語從句。, stand up and fight against the disease!因此，堅強地與疾病做斗爭吧!李老師滿分課堂 免費答疑解題熱線 053186969606 ：1044738198 希望更多老師加入到公益教學(xué)中好處：擲地有聲，語言準確。,句式準確【江蘇卷】【試題回放】2007年4月29日上午10點到11點，全國億萬學(xué)生陽光體育活動在各地大中小學(xué)校同時進行，江蘇省1，100萬學(xué)生積極參與了這項活動。教育部倡導(dǎo)學(xué)生：u 每天鍛煉一小時u 健康工作五十年u 幸福生活一輩子請你根據(jù)以上提示，用英語準備一份發(fā)言稿，向同學(xué)們講述一下陽光體育活動的有關(guān)情況，并就高三學(xué)生是否需要每天花一小時鍛煉，談?wù)勀愕目捶袄碛?。注意：發(fā)言稿應(yīng)包括以上所有信息，要有適當發(fā)揮。詞數(shù)：120左右。發(fā)言稿的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：陽光體育活動——a national student sports program。教育部——the Ministry of EducationGood afternoon, everyone，The national student sports program, waged by the Ministry of Education and aimed at improving students health, was held from 10：.~11: April 29，2007 in many primary and middle schools all over 11 million students in Jiangsu province participated in this Ministry of Education advocates that we do exercises for one hour a day and can work healthily for 50 whole life will be very my opinion, we senior high school students should do exercises for one hour a day even though our spare time is is a basic condition for our we did not do exercises, we wouldn’t be able to get good study every one of you, join the program now!Thank you!【名師點評】本文的結(jié)構(gòu)十分明晰，同時句式使用得熟練而準確。本文分為三段，前兩段敘述，后一段發(fā)表觀點，典型的作文結(jié)構(gòu)。在句式使用上，作者用法多樣，使用了獨立結(jié)構(gòu)和虛擬語氣，十分出彩。復(fù)雜的句式是本文的特點之一。積累卡片 Ministry of Education advocates that we do exercises for one hour a day and can work healthily for 50 ，能夠健康地活50年。評析：advocate，其后接虛擬語氣，可以省略情態(tài)動詞。 we did not do exercises, we wouldn’t be able to get good study ，我們的學(xué)習(xí)成績就不會很好。評析：虛擬語氣。李老師滿分課堂 免費答疑解題熱線 053186969606 ：1044738198 希望更多老師加入到公益教學(xué)中這山望著那山高 The grass is always greener on the other ，對自己的狀況沒有滿意的時候。Almost all people see that the grass is greener on the other never feel satisfied with what they’ve already 、上癮get into one’s blood說來也怪，很多不好的事往往會使人上癮。It’s astoundingly funny that many harmful things usually get into our 、發(fā)牢騷 beef 他坐在那里什么事也不干，總是發(fā)牢騷，真煩死人。I’m really bored stiff with his sitting there doing nothing but 、等不及了 champ at the bit 咱們快點吧，孩子們都等不及了。Let’s shake the kids are champing at the 、點頭哈腰bow and scrape 從她在老板前點頭哈腰地那個模樣，你就知道她是個什么人了。From the way she’s bowing and scraping in front of the boss, you’ll know what sort of person she 、瘋瘋癲癲go gaga 對他的話不要太在意了，他總是瘋瘋癲癲的。Don’t take what he says so ’s always going 免費答疑解題熱線 053186969606 ：1044738198 希望更多老師加入到公益教學(xué)中說話不算數(shù)go back on one’s words 他那個人說話從不算數(shù),我們可不能依靠他。We cannot account on always goes back on his 、廢話連篇beat one’s gums 誰喜歡坐在那里聽你的廢話連篇？Who would enjoy sitting there listening to your beating your gums?恩將仇報 bite the hand that feeds one 你難道不知道她是個恩將仇報的人？Don’t you know she’s the one that would bite the hand that feeds her?不忍心not have the heart to do 如果我是你，我可不忍心把孩子們就在家里沒人照看If I were you, I wouldn’t have the heart to leave the kids at home uncared 、勤快an eager beaver 他特別勤快，從來沒有閑著的時候。He’s an eager beaver, never staying idle第三篇：高考英語滿分作文賞析S高考英語滿分作文賞析高考英語滿分作文作文題目假設(shè)你是李華，你的英國筆友Bob將于九月到你所在城市的建新華文學(xué)校學(xué)中文，來信請你在學(xué)校附近為他找一套住房。請根據(jù)圖畫提供的信息，寫信介紹住房的情況，并告知住房面積為25平方米，月租500元。注意：：100左右：：房租—Tent(n.).I’m very happy to receive your letter, and I’m glad to hear that you will go to China to learn Chinese have already found a flat for is on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese can take you there, and it is one stop before the Chinese flat is on the third floor with 3 rooms, one of which is bedroom, the other two are bathroom and are a bed, a sofa, a desk and some chairs in this 25 squaremetres small fiat, and the rent is 500 yuan per this fiat is not as good as your wish, but I’ll try my best to meet your it is not suitable enough, write to me and I will look for another better you will e here soon!All the best!Yours,Li HuaDear Bob,Wele to China!You wrote to me to find a place for have found an apartment on Fangcao Street near Jianxin Chinese is on the third floor and there’re three rooms in it: a bedroom, a kitchen, and a is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair in the house is 25 square metres and the rent is 500 yuan per from this house you can get to your school take the bus at the busstop in front of the is only one last, will you please tell me the time you arrive? Then I’U be able to meet you at the airport, see wishes!Yours,Li HuaDear Bob,How are you these days?I’m so glad to know that you’ll e to our city to learn asked me to find a place for I’ve found one which I think is pretty place is on Fang Cao Street which is near the bus ’s just one stop away from Jian