全國(guó)高考英語(yǔ)滿分作文賞析(編輯修改稿)
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【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 ick up the noodles that he is sweating a lot. At first glance, I think it’s a bit funny, for we Chinese take for granted that chopsticks are the tools for eating noodles. The man in the picture is trying to copy us. Obviously he is doing it the hard way. Maybe using one fork will do a better job, In my opinion, we don’t need to copy others’ ways of thinking. Sometimes a simpler way of doing things may be a better way. 【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】 本文是開放性作文，要求考生把握好圖畫內(nèi)容，發(fā)散表達(dá)?？忌攸c(diǎn)要看出這個(gè)人是卷發(fā)高鼻的外國(guó)人，要體會(huì)到西式刀叉對(duì)中式食物的矛盾性。行文結(jié)構(gòu)十分明晰，同時(shí)句式使用得熟練而準(zhǔn)確。三. 復(fù)合句為寫作增色 【全國(guó)卷】 【試題回放】 假定你是李華，從小喜愛大熊貓(panda),一直通過(guò)有關(guān)網(wǎng)站(website)關(guān)注三年前在美國(guó)圣迭哥動(dòng)物園出生的大熊貓“蘇琳”和她的母親“白云”。現(xiàn)在蘇琳即將三歲。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)給動(dòng)物園工作人員寫一封信： 自我介紹。 祝賀蘇琳生日。 感謝工作人員。 索取蘇琳三歲生日照?！ ∽⒁猓涸~數(shù)100左右?？梢赃m當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。開頭語(yǔ)已為你寫好?！ ±模骸 ear Sir/Madam, Greetings from China! I’m Li Hua, a student in Sichuan. I’ve been a panda lover since I was a child. About three years ago I was delighted to learn that Baiyun gave birth to her daughter Sulin and I’ve been watching her grow on your website,. Now she’s going to be three. I’d like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the US. By the way, could I have a photo of Sulin taken on her third birthday? Thank you very much in advance. Yours truly, Li Hua 【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】本文寫作的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下： ?！ ∵@封信格式正確，行文規(guī)范，描述有條不紊，稱呼、正文中的開頭及結(jié)尾、結(jié)束語(yǔ)均表達(dá)到位。文章行文活潑，感情真摯，語(yǔ)言表述準(zhǔn)確，洋溢著作者因大熊貓得到精心照顧而對(duì)美方人員的感激之情，以及希望自己愿望成真，得到照片的希冀之情。長(zhǎng)短句運(yùn)用合理，結(jié)合了簡(jiǎn)單句和復(fù)合句，流暢自然，不露痕跡，的確是一篇佳作?！ ? 積累卡片英漢互譯 ，快樂(lè)的 birth to ，生育 好句I’d like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the US. 我祝福它生日快樂(lè)并且對(duì)你們的辛勤工作表達(dá)我的感激之情，正是你們的努力工作讓蘇琳和它的父母在美國(guó)過(guò)著幸福和健康的生活。 【全國(guó)卷II】【試題回放】 一家賓館新開業(yè)，為吸引外國(guó)賓客，希望在互聯(lián)網(wǎng)上進(jìn)行宣傳。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)為其 寫一篇文字介紹。主要內(nèi)容包括： ?。壕喟咨饺肟谔?00米?！ 。?jiǎn)稳碎g
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