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用英文給Amy寫一封慰問信,主要內(nèi)容包括: 自我介紹 得知的情況 表示鼓勵(lì) 打算為她做什么 祝她早日康復(fù) 注意: 1. 信的格式已為你寫好 2. 信中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實(shí)情況。本文分為三段,前兩段敘述,后一段發(fā)表觀點(diǎn),典型的作文結(jié)構(gòu)?! ?詞數(shù):120左右??偟貋碚f,文章句式精煉,是篇不錯(cuò)的滿分作文?! ? 積累卡片英漢互譯 ,快樂的 birth to ,生育 好句I’d like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the US. 我祝福它生日快樂并且對(duì)你們的辛勤工作表達(dá)我的感激之情,正是你們的努力工作讓蘇琳和它的父母在美國(guó)過著幸福和健康的生活。文章思路清晰,要點(diǎn)連貫,在語言的表達(dá)上選詞新穎,同時(shí)運(yùn)用了分詞短語作狀語等較好的句式表達(dá)。 【安徽卷】【試題回放】 假如你是李華,美國(guó)一所友好學(xué)校準(zhǔn)備與你們學(xué)校共同創(chuàng)辦一份中學(xué)生英文刊物,該校格林先生來信詢問有關(guān)情況。請(qǐng)你給她寫封回信,假如你是李華,美國(guó)一所友好學(xué)校準(zhǔn)備與你們學(xué)校共同創(chuàng)辦一份中學(xué)生英文刊物,該校格林先生來信詢問有關(guān)情況?! ? 【北京卷】 【試題回放】開放作文 請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面提示,寫一篇短文,詞數(shù)不少于50 In your spoken English class, your teacher shows you the following picture. You are asked to describe the picture and explain how you understand it. What an interesting picture! A western young man, sitting at a table, is ready to eat a bowl of noodles. He is holding two forks the same way as we Chinese hold chopsticks. He is trying so hard to pick up the noodles that he is sweating a lot. At first glance, I think it’s a bit funny, for we Chinese take for granted that chopsticks are the tools for eating noodles. The man in the picture is trying to copy us. Obviously he is doing it the hard way. Maybe using one fork will do a better job, In my opinion, we don’t need to copy others’ ways of thinking. Sometimes a simpler way of doing things may be a better way. 【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】 本文是開放性作文,要求考生把握好圖畫內(nèi)容,發(fā)散表達(dá)。長(zhǎng)短句運(yùn)用合理,結(jié)合了簡(jiǎn)單句和復(fù)合句,流暢自然,不露痕跡,的確是一篇佳作。which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句的使用也很正確。 注意: 發(fā)言稿應(yīng)包括以上所有信息,要有適當(dāng)發(fā)揮?! 『镁?. If we did not do exercises, we wouldn’t be able to get good study records. 如果我們不進(jìn)行運(yùn)動(dòng),我們的學(xué)習(xí)成績(jī)就不會(huì)很好。作者對(duì)定語從句的使用恰到好處地修飾了文章,行文自然而通順,值得學(xué)習(xí)。 ??梢赃m當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。比如說:my cup of tea, apart from that, oral English, last but not least, celebrities, catchy和trendy的大膽運(yùn)用,list, can39。假設(shè)你是李華,請(qǐng)給Jeff寫一封信,按照下圖順序介紹他來中國(guó)后的生活安排?! ?