【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 wrong ? 寫作要點(diǎn)：1. 表明自己的看法。 2. 陳述自己的理由。3. 提出至少2條建議。【答案】Hi,TigerMom,What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in idea is that it is not quiteright for you to do so.Although high grades are an important factor in evaluating students and for their future university admission,development in wisdom,emotion,health,and life attitude should never be ignored. There are many examples around us. Some allA students in school have turned out not to be as successful insociety as they were expected. The reason is often that the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities. Furthermore,punishment is by no means a wise choice to help them grow up mentally and physically.So I suggest that you take your friends39。 advice. More importantly,let her live like a lovely girl；let herhave more friends and social activities；and let her make mistakes of her own as the teenagers often do.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，對學(xué)生家長的博客進(jìn)行回復(fù)。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：My idea is that……，There are……，Some allA students in school have…….，The reason is……，So I suggest that……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。點(diǎn)睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭表明自己的看法，接下來陳述自己的理由，最后介紹自己的建議。此處turn out , by no means, help sb do sth, grow up, let sb do sth, make mistakes, of one’s own等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。5．書面表達(dá)同學(xué)們，中考后就會(huì)迎來漫長的暑假了，班會(huì)課上老師組織大家討論假期學(xué)習(xí)和生活計(jì)劃。假如你是李華，請根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示用英語向同學(xué)們匯報(bào)一下你的計(jì)劃。內(nèi)容提示：暑假計(jì)劃學(xué)習(xí)博覽群書；學(xué)習(xí)技能 （或自擬一點(diǎn)）生活健康飲食；堅(jiān)持鍛煉 （或自擬一點(diǎn)）其它熱愛公益；親近自然 （或自擬一點(diǎn)）注意：1. 表達(dá)中必須包括所給要點(diǎn)，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要簡單翻譯。2. 詞數(shù)90左右。開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。3. 表達(dá)中請勿提及真實(shí)校名及姓名。Dear classmates,Summer holiday is ing, and here is my plan for it.____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ I hope all of you can enjoy the ing holiday. That’s all. Thank you.【答案】Dear classmates,Summer holiday is ing, and here is my plan for it.First, I39。d like to choose several good books and read them carefully. This can help me open my mind and learn more about the world. I also think it39。s necessary for me to learn at least one skill. I39。m interested in cooking, so I will learn to cook some delicious dishes during the holiday.Second, health is the most important. So I will eat healthily and exercise more. I plan to eat more fruit and vegetables and keep running every day.Third, it39。s a good idea to join in some charity activities because we should be kind to someone in need. I will pay more attention to protecting our environment so that we can make our Earth a better world. Also, travelling out is a good choice. While travelling, we can be close to nature and learn about different cultures. We have more chances to search the Internet. I know unhealthy websites are harmful to us. I will say no to them.I hope all of you can enjoy the ing holiday. That39。s all. Thank you.【解析】亮點(diǎn)說明：這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如I39。d like to do，help me open my mind，at least，be interested in，during the holiday，plan to do，join in，be kind to someone