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o matter what reasons we have, we all can get a lot from sports.【解析】【詳解】本篇寫作主要是談論自己對運動的觀點和看法,應該用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài),寫作要點要包括:。(多數(shù)學生的觀點、男生的觀點、女生的觀點)。亮點說明:這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文,很好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務,語言表達符合英語習慣,準確運用時態(tài),主謂一致,在文中使用了時間狀語從句,定語從句,特別使用一些亮點詞句,如have fun,in order to,as for,in my opinion等。增強邏輯關系,增加上下文意思連貫,句子通順,行文連貫。6.書面表達初中畢業(yè)在即, 回顧三年的學習生活, 你一定有成功的體驗, 如一次考試, 一次比賽, 一次表演...... 請你以Believe Myself, and I Will Win為題寫一篇演講稿。提示:(1)What was the event?(2)How did you make it?(3)What’s your feeling?要求:(1)發(fā)言稿中須包括所有提示內容, 可適當發(fā)揮。(2)發(fā)言稿中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名和地名。(3)詞數(shù)80個左右(開頭和結尾已給出, 不計入總詞數(shù))。Believe Myself, and I Will WinHello, everyone!___________________________________________________________________________Thank you for your listening.【答案】Believe Myself, and I will winHello, everyone! As an old saying goes, where there is a will, there is a way. There always are difficulties in our life and we have to face them.When I was in the seventh grade, I always had difficulty in learning English. I just couldn’t understand it. I even wanted to give it up. Then my parents told me that where there is a will, there is a way. They also told me that I should be confident. My English teacher encouraged me to continue to study and told me some good ways to study it. I had the confidence again. I found when I put my heart into it, English didn’t’ seem that difficult. I made great progress. My parents and teachers were happy for me. I felt pleased and proud for myself, too. To be confident means I should believe myself. Believe myself, there are hopes in my life. In the future, I won39。t be afraid of the difficulties in my life and I39。m sure that nothing can beat me and I will win! Believe myself, a beautiful future is waiting for me.Thank you for your listening.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以Believe Myself and I will win為題,寫一篇演講稿。題目中用問題的形式給出了提示,審題可知,文章應包括以下內容:首先敘述你生活中遇到的一件困難的事;然后介紹你是如何克服了這個困難,最后取得成功的;最后說一下你自己的感受。寫作時學生們應根據(jù)這幾個內容提要,發(fā)揮自己的想象力,將這些內容補充完整,用正確的英語表達出來。短文應以一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時為主,注意謂語動詞的正確形式。寫作時應注意:首先要保證發(fā)言稿中包括了所有提示的內容,不能遺漏要點,可以根據(jù)表達需要適當發(fā)揮,但要與上下文意銜接起來。其次要注意英語的表達習慣和漢語是不同的,不能按照漢語思維,逐詞翻譯。應從句子的整體結構出發(fā),選擇適當句型、短語、詞匯進行表達。句式結構可以簡單句為主,穿插并列句或復合句。為提升文章檔次,應注意銜接詞以及高級句式或復雜結構的使用?!军c睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文,短文作者根據(jù)題目要求,寫了一篇演講稿。文章有以下幾個優(yōu)點:首先短文內容完整,包括了題目中要求的所有內容,沒有遺漏要點。各部分內容安排合理,層次清晰。短文主要分成三段,每一段主題都很明確,敘述詳細、清楚。其次短文使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱,短文主要使用了一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時,動詞形式變化準確,尤其注意了不規(guī)則動詞的過去式形式,語法規(guī)范,用詞準確。文章中句式變化豐富,有簡單句、并列句、復合句,長短句結合,增強了文章的表現(xiàn)力。短文中使用了較豐富的句型,如When I was in the seventh grade, I always had difficulty in learning English.、My English teacher encouraged me to continue to study and told me some good ways to study it.、I found when I put my heart into it, English didn’t’ seem that difficult、In the future, I won39。t be afraid of the difficulties in my life and I39。m sure that nothing can beat me and I will win!等等。7. 近年來霧霾天氣在中國許多城市頻頻發(fā)生。霧霾天氣引起大家極大的關注。請你用英語寫一篇有關霧霾的短文向??坝⒄Z角”投稿,內容包括:1. 霧霾的危害 2. 霧霾產生的原因(2個) 3. 應對霧霾的措施(3個)提示:霧霾 smog poisonous 有毒的注意:1. 詞數(shù)110左右; 2. 可以適當增加細節(jié),以使行文連貫; 3. 開頭語已為你寫好(不計入總詞數(shù))。In recent years, many cities in China have been hit by smog frequently, which has aroused great concern among people. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________