【正文】 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】　　In recent years, many cities in China have been hit by smog frequently, which has aroused great concern among people.　　Smog has a bad effect on people’s health. Many people, children and the old in particular, suffer from illnesses caused by smog. Consequently, citizens are warned not to go out without wearing masks. 　　How does it e about? Scientists have found that it is human activity that has caused this. The poisonous matters in the air mainly e as a result of people’s burning coal, driving cars, industry production and so on.　　What should we do to stop the situation from worsening? First, cleaner fuels for cars and stricter emission standards for factories are of vital importance. Second, for us individuals, living a green life like going to work or school by public transport is a good choice. 　　Also planting more trees to increase green areas is necessary. I believe every contribution counts. Only if we work together will smog weather disappear pletely. 【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們根據(jù)提示來介紹有關(guān)霧霾的情況，題目中給出了寫作的內(nèi)容，我們應(yīng)將這些內(nèi)容用正確的英語表達(dá)出來。m sure that nothing can beat me and I will win!等等。其次短文使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱，短文主要使用了一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時，動詞形式變化準(zhǔn)確，尤其注意了不規(guī)則動詞的過去式形式，語法規(guī)范，用詞準(zhǔn)確?！军c(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求，寫了一篇演講稿。其次要注意英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語是不同的，不能按照漢語思維，逐詞翻譯。題目中用問題的形式給出了提示，審題可知，文章應(yīng)包括以下內(nèi)容：首先敘述你生活中遇到的一件困難的事；然后介紹你是如何克服了這個困難，最后取得成功的；最后說一下你自己的感受。（3）詞數(shù)80個左右（開頭和結(jié)尾已給出, 不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，句子通順，行文連貫。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如thank you for doing，I’d like to do，introduce sb. to，all of you，at home，do some washing，at a fixed time，have a chat，play chess，do exercise，deal with，a great help，in the future等。開頭我要介紹我們班就低碳生活方式進(jìn)行了討論，接下來介紹我們?yōu)榈吞忌羁梢宰龅氖??！驹斀狻拷Y(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：We can do……，we’d better……，we suggest……，which contributes to……等句式的應(yīng)用。3．書面表達(dá)假定你是李華，最近你們班就低碳生活方式進(jìn)行了討論，你的英國朋友Peppa向你來信詢問討論情況。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。 。請以 My junior high school life為題,寫一篇80詞左右的短文。人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致關(guān)系，構(gòu)思文章框架，列舉出可能會用到的好詞好句，記住千萬不能漏寫信息要點(diǎn)。你認(rèn)為人們可以跳廣場舞，但……要求：（1）開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)?，F(xiàn)在，奶奶比以前健康了，有了很多朋友。最新中考英語書面表達(dá)總復(fù)習(xí)經(jīng)典例題、習(xí)題經(jīng)典一、中考英語書面表達(dá)（含答案詳細(xì)解析）1．假如你即將在學(xué)校英語興趣小組的活動中發(fā)言，請你用英語寫一篇發(fā)言稿。（3）（5）要注意隨著文章推進(jìn)時態(tài)的變化，一開始應(yīng)該選擇一般過去時，而后面應(yīng)該選用一般現(xiàn)在時，最后表達(dá)自己觀點(diǎn)的時候也應(yīng)該使用一般現(xiàn)在時。2．親愛的同學(xué)們，初中生活即將結(jié)束，,名城中學(xué)九（1）班的學(xué)生。要求：1. 文章包含以上提示內(nèi)容，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。此處go by, e to an end, tell sb about sth, all kinds of, behave oneself, encourage sb to do sth, get on with, learn from, make progress等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。Dear Peppa,Thank you for your last letter asking about our discussion on lowcarbon lifestyle. Here is something about it．_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Best wishes,Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Peppa,Thank you for your last letter asking about our discussion on lowcarbon lifestyle. Here is something about it．We can do a lot in our daily life to achieve the goal of low carbon life. First, we’d better turn off lights if possible and spend less time watching TV or surfing the Internet. Saving water also matters much. Besides, we should sort out the rubbish, hoping that we might recycle some, which will surely benefit us a great deal. In add