【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 problem, at once, on one’s own, it is not a good idea to do any bad things to the bullies on my own中it作形式主語(yǔ)以及“比較級(jí)and比較級(jí)”。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。【點(diǎn)睛】寫作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。通常書面表達(dá)給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。初寫短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動(dòng)筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡(jiǎn)潔性。使用的詞語(yǔ)、短語(yǔ)及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤(rùn)色。修改潤(rùn)色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外，還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。8．（重慶中考模擬）假如你是李華，你校正舉辦英語(yǔ)讀書節(jié)活動(dòng),你在參與活動(dòng)的過程中遇到一些困難。請(qǐng)給你的英國(guó)朋友Nick寫一封向他求助。要求：—120 詞，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。參考要點(diǎn)：（時(shí)間、內(nèi)容……）。（如：缺少相關(guān)書籍、英語(yǔ)閱讀困難……）；。Dear Nick,How’s everything going?_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Nick,How’s everything going?Our school is holding an English reading festival this June. I’m very interested in it. There are many different activation in the festival such as reading good English books. sharing good stories and so on. It’s a good chance for us to learn more about western cultures. However, I have some problems. First, I don’t have enough books. For example, I want to get some books about western history. Next, I’m not so good at English, I have trouble in reading. Would you please share some good books with me and give me some advice on reading?I expect to hear from you soon.Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua【解析】【詳解】這是一篇書信作文。假如你是李華，你校正舉辦英語(yǔ)讀書節(jié)活動(dòng),你在參與活動(dòng)的過程中遇到一些困難。請(qǐng)給你的英國(guó)朋友Nick寫一封向他求助。首先要注意書信的書寫格式，文章時(shí)態(tài)主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱主要為第一人稱。在寫作時(shí)，要注意理順要點(diǎn)，防止漏寫；注意緊扣主題，連句成篇，要層次清楚，要點(diǎn)分明，中心突出。同時(shí)要注意語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長(zhǎng)的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡(jiǎn)單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。最后，要仔細(xì)檢查有無(wú)單詞拼寫錯(cuò)誤、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)誤用等，還要檢查字?jǐn)?shù)是否符合要求。參考要點(diǎn)：（時(shí)間、內(nèi)容……）。（如：缺少相關(guān)書籍、英語(yǔ)閱讀困難……）；。9．（江蘇揚(yáng)州教育學(xué)院附中中考模擬）你校正在舉辦以“社會(huì)主義核心價(jià)值觀”為主題的英語(yǔ)演講比賽，你準(zhǔn)備從“和善”這一點(diǎn)展開論述，請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示，以“Kindness is a gift”為題，寫一篇英語(yǔ)演講稿。要求： 1）表達(dá)清楚，語(yǔ)法正確，上下文連貫；2）必須包括提示中所有信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3）詞數(shù)：100詞左右（開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；4）不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名和地名等。Kindness is a giftDear classmates,I think kindness is a special gift to everyone. How can we show it to others in our daily life? That’s all for my speech. Thank you!【答案】例文Dear classmates,I think kindness is a special gift to everyone. How can we show it to others in our daily life?When we’re at home, it’s important to show our respect to our parents. Helping them do some housework will make us close to each other. We should also be kind enough to our neighbours in our neighborhood. While they’re away from home, we can keep an eye on their houses. At school, tell our classmates to ask for help whenever they need. If one of them is absent from school, we can help them with the lesson. On the bus, we should take care of the elderly by giving them our seats. And once there is someone who tries to fight with the bus driver, it’s better for us to stop him.I hope everyone can be kind to others so that we can live in a world full of love.That’s all for my speech. Thank you!【解析】【詳解】你校正在舉辦以“社會(huì)主義核心價(jià)值觀”為主題的英語(yǔ)演講比賽，你準(zhǔn)備從“和善”這一點(diǎn)展開論述，請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示，以“Kindness is a gift”為題，寫一篇英語(yǔ)演講稿。內(nèi)容要求中指出了寫作要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆前一定要認(rèn)真閱讀內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)組織材料，確定句子人稱，時(shí)態(tài)等問題。可以先把各要點(diǎn)用句子表達(dá)出來，然后再組合成文。寫作中注意語(yǔ)意通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系，為了使短文更顯得有邏輯性，在列舉自己的優(yōu)勢(shì)時(shí)，可以適當(dāng)使用序數(shù)詞。舉出的例子要有說服力，想象合理并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)。注意采用一些習(xí)慣的句式，固定短語(yǔ)，以使自己的演講稿更有文采。寫完后多讀幾遍，適當(dāng)修改?！军c(diǎn)睛】這是一篇非常優(yōu)秀的文章，作者用到了一些好的句型：it’s important to show our respect to our parents. Helping them do some housework will make us close to each other.；If one of them is absent from school, we can help them with the 。10．（廣東中考模擬）近來，野生動(dòng)物園發(fā)生了老虎傷人的事件。我們作為游客應(yīng)該如何避免受到野生動(dòng)物的傷害呢？請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列提示寫一篇短文。提示：1. 遵守動(dòng)物園的各項(xiàng)規(guī)定；2. 參觀時(shí)不要單獨(dú)行動(dòng)；3. 時(shí)刻提醒自己安全第一；4. 遇到危險(xiǎn)及時(shí)求助。要求：（開頭己給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；2. 文章必須包含所有提示內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和校名；4. 條理清楚，語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，書寫規(guī)范。It is reported that tigers hurt people in a zoo. As visitors, what should we do to avoid the hurt? Here are some tips.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】It is reported that tigers hurt people in a zoo. As visitors, what should we do to avoid the hurt? Here are some tips. Firstly, every zoo has its own rules. We must read them before visiting it. Then we will know what to do and what not to do. We must follow the rules while visiting the zoo. Secondly, we had better go anywhere with our parents or friends in the zoo. Thirdly, we should remember that safety es first all the time. We neither go to the dangerous places nor do the dangerous things. Finally, we must ask for help as soon as possible when we are in danger.I believe we will be safe in the zoo if we do so.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇提綱作文。題干列出了四點(diǎn)內(nèi)容，故第一段使用Firstly，Secondly，Thirdly和Finally進(jìn)行分條陳述，使文章層次分明、邏輯性強(qiáng)，每點(diǎn)要適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容，比如這樣做的原因或好處等；第二段用一句話“I believe we will be safe in the zoo if we do so.”進(jìn)行總結(jié)。根據(jù)提示，使用到的單詞和短語(yǔ)有rule，follow，e first，dangerous，ask for help，in danger好單詞：rule 規(guī)則follow 遵循dangerous 危險(xiǎn)的好短語(yǔ)：had better do sth. 最好做某事e first 首先要考慮到的ask for help 尋求幫助as soon as possible 盡快in danger 處于危險(xiǎn)中好句型：We must read them before visiting it. 我們必須