【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 problem, at once, on one’s own, it is not a good idea to do any bad things to the bullies on my own中it作形式主語以及“比較級and比較級”。增強邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準確，句子通順，行文連貫?！军c睛】寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起：認真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達的關(guān)鍵。審題時要注意試題的要求，抓住要點，詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。通常書面表達給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。初寫短文。一切都準備就緒，就可以動筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時還要注意使用恰當?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤色。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。8．（重慶中考模擬）假如你是李華，你校正舉辦英語讀書節(jié)活動,你在參與活動的過程中遇到一些困難。請給你的英國朋友Nick寫一封向他求助。要求：—120 詞，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。參考要點：（時間、內(nèi)容……）。（如：缺少相關(guān)書籍、英語閱讀困難……）；。Dear Nick,How’s everything going?_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Nick,How’s everything going?Our school is holding an English reading festival this June. I’m very interested in it. There are many different activation in the festival such as reading good English books. sharing good stories and so on. It’s a good chance for us to learn more about western cultures. However, I have some problems. First, I don’t have enough books. For example, I want to get some books about western history. Next, I’m not so good at English, I have trouble in reading. Would you please share some good books with me and give me some advice on reading?I expect to hear from you soon.Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua【解析】【詳解】這是一篇書信作文。假如你是李華，你校正舉辦英語讀書節(jié)活動,你在參與活動的過程中遇到一些困難。請給你的英國朋友Nick寫一封向他求助。首先要注意書信的書寫格式，文章時態(tài)主要用一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱主要為第一人稱。在寫作時，要注意理順要點，防止漏寫；注意緊扣主題，連句成篇，要層次清楚，要點分明，中心突出。同時要注意語言的表述應該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應該符合英語的表達習慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長的復合句；盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。最后，要仔細檢查有無單詞拼寫錯誤、標點符號誤用等，還要檢查字數(shù)是否符合要求。參考要點：（時間、內(nèi)容……）。（如：缺少相關(guān)書籍、英語閱讀困難……）；。9．（江蘇揚州教育學院附中中考模擬）你校正在舉辦以“社會主義核心價值觀”為主題的英語演講比賽，你準備從“和善”這一點展開論述，請根據(jù)提示，以“Kindness is a gift”為題，寫一篇英語演講稿。要求： 1）表達清楚，語法正確，上下文連貫；2）必須包括提示中所有信息，并適當發(fā)揮；3）詞數(shù)：100詞左右（開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）；4）不得使用真實姓名、校名和地名等。Kindness is a giftDear classmates,I think kindness is a special gift to everyone. How can we show it to others in our daily life? That’s all for my speech. Thank you!【答案】例文Dear classmates,I think kindness is a special gift to everyone. How can we show it to others in our daily life?When we’re at home, it’s important to show our respect to our parents. Helping them do some housework will make us close to each other. We should also be kind enough to our neighbours in our neighborhood. While they’re away from home, we can keep an eye on their houses. At school, tell our classmates to ask for help whenever they need. If one of them is absent from school, we can help them with the lesson. On the bus, we should take care of the elderly by giving them our seats. And once there is someone who tries to fight with the bus driver, it’s better for us to stop him.I hope everyone can be kind to others so that we can live in a world full of love.That’s all for my speech. Thank you!【解析】【詳解】你校正在舉辦以“社會主義核心價值觀”為主題的英語演講比賽，你準備從“和善”這一點展開論述，請根據(jù)提示，以“Kindness is a gift”為題，寫一篇英語演講稿。內(nèi)容要求中指出了寫作要點，動筆前一定要認真閱讀內(nèi)容要點，根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點組織材料，確定句子人稱，時態(tài)等問題?？梢韵劝迅饕c用句子表達出來，然后再組合成文。寫作中注意語意通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系，為了使短文更顯得有邏輯性，在列舉自己的優(yōu)勢時，可以適當使用序數(shù)詞。舉出的例子要有說服力，想象合理并適當發(fā)揮，不能遺漏要點。注意采用一些習慣的句式，固定短語，以使自己的演講稿更有文采。寫完后多讀幾遍，適當修改。【點睛】這是一篇非常優(yōu)秀的文章，作者用到了一些好的句型：it’s important to show our respect to our parents. Helping them do some housework will make us close to each other.；If one of them is absent from school, we can help them with the 。10．（廣東中考模擬）近來，野生動物園發(fā)生了老虎傷人的事件。我們作為游客應該如何避免受到野生動物的傷害呢？請根據(jù)下列提示寫一篇短文。提示：1. 遵守動物園的各項規(guī)定；2. 參觀時不要單獨行動；3. 時刻提醒自己安全第一；4. 遇到危險及時求助。要求：（開頭己給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）；2. 文章必須包含所有提示內(nèi)容，可適當發(fā)揮；3. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名和校名；4. 條理清楚，語句通順，意思連貫，書寫規(guī)范。It is reported that tigers hurt people in a zoo. As visitors, what should we do to avoid the hurt? Here are some tips.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】It is reported that tigers hurt people in a zoo. As visitors, what should we do to avoid the hurt? Here are some tips. Firstly, every zoo has its own rules. We must read them before visiting it. Then we will know what to do and what not to do. We must follow the rules while visiting the zoo. Secondly, we had better go anywhere with our parents or friends in the zoo. Thirdly, we should remember that safety es first all the time. We neither go to the dangerous places nor do the dangerous things. Finally, we must ask for help as soon as possible when we are in danger.I believe we will be safe in the zoo if we do so.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇提綱作文。題干列出了四點內(nèi)容，故第一段使用Firstly，Secondly，Thirdly和Finally進行分條陳述，使文章層次分明、邏輯性強，每點要適當增加內(nèi)容，比如這樣做的原因或好處等；第二段用一句話“I believe we will be safe in the zoo if we do so.”進行總結(jié)。根據(jù)提示，使用到的單詞和短語有rule，follow，e first，dangerous，ask for help，in danger好單詞：rule 規(guī)則follow 遵循dangerous 危險的好短語：had better do sth. 最好做某事e first 首先要考慮到的ask for help 尋求幫助as soon as possible 盡快in danger 處于危險中好句型：We must read them before visiting it. 我們必須