【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 _______________________________________________________________【參考答案】***試卷處理標(biāo)記，請(qǐng)不要?jiǎng)h除一、初中英語書面表達(dá)1．First of all, twochild policy is the gift for some only some families. maybe the parents解析：First of all, twochild policy is the gift for some only some families. maybe the parents are only child and they can also have only child. Put aside the loneliness of their child, when their child grows up and they grow older, their child may marry with an only child girl accidentally, the burden on their child and his wife is unimaginable heavy. Their child and his wife have to take care of two old couples.In my family ,my parents have a only child. I also have some happy can enjoy some delicious food by myself. But I have no playmate in my family. Sometimes. I may feel lonely.If parents have two children, they can share the burden of taking care of their parents. It would be much better. Also, twochild policy can guarantee the number of Chinese population.【解析】亮點(diǎn)說明：這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如first of all，grow up，grow older，marry with，burden on，have to do， take care of，by oneself，have no playmate，the number of等。而For some families. maybe the parents are only child and they can also have only child. / when their child grows up and they grow older, their child may marry with an only child girl accidentally,/ It would be much ，豐富了習(xí)作內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣，是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)。點(diǎn)睛：書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。2．My friends and IBefore I went to school, I felt so excited, because I was so curious about the cam解析：My friends and IBefore I went to school, I felt so excited, because I was so curious about the campus life. Now I have been in middle school, after seven years’ study, I feel the bitter and happiness. The bitter is that there are always exams, and sometimes I can’t do well. Every time I get the low mark, I will be afraid of disappointing my parents. The happy thing is that I make many friends here. We play and study together. They are just like the brothers and sisters to me. This is the process of growing up, which mix pain and happiness. I am so lucky to have these friends in my life, they mean so much to me.【解析】 這是一篇要求介紹自己和他人、社會(huì)或自然 之間的故事，并談?wù)勛约旱捏w驗(yàn)或感受。動(dòng)筆前先要認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，圍繞要點(diǎn)組織材料，然后用正確的英語句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應(yīng)用第一人稱，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語意連貫。英語作文要注意人稱和時(shí)態(tài)，注意提供的觀點(diǎn)、材料，要注意句子的完整性，謂語動(dòng)詞的正確形式，句子之間的銜接和過渡。英語作文，要忠實(shí)于材料，不必?cái)U(kuò)展，注意用好連詞，多用非謂語，慎用較難的句型，一定不能寫錯(cuò)句。3．With more and more cars ing into our families, we are happy that it has greatly improved our lif解析：With more and more cars ing into our families, we are happy that it has greatly improved our life. But unluckily, it has also brought many problems, such as heavy traffic and traffic accidents.Traffic safety is everybody39。s business. We must obey the rules. For example, we must walk on walk side, when we cross zebra – crossing, stop and look right and left, then go across fast. Don’t play football on the road .we can tell our parents not to drink before they drive, not to run through red lights, not to talk and laugh while driving etc.We can say cars are ing into our life, but only when everybody thinks traffic safety is everybody39。s business can we be safe driving on roads and walking on sidewalks.【解析】本文屬于給出一個(gè)主題，對(duì)這個(gè)主題的相關(guān)內(nèi)容進(jìn)行論述，談?wù)撚嘘P(guān)交通安全的相關(guān)內(nèi)容。實(shí)際上就是要求書寫一份倡議書。人稱為第一人稱，時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。動(dòng)筆前先要注意認(rèn)真閱讀材料，確定寫作內(nèi)容；文章必須包括要點(diǎn)中所給的信息，并補(bǔ)充個(gè)人的觀點(diǎn)。注意表達(dá)的條理性，用好連接詞，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮使行文連貫，豐富文章的文采?？赡苡玫降脑~組：more and more, heavy traffic, obey the rules, look right and left, tell sb. not to do sth., walk on sidewalks等等。4．With more and more cars ing into our families, we are happy that it has greatly improved our lif解析：With more and more cars ing into our families, we are happy that it has greatly improved our life. But unluckily, it has also brought many problems, such as heavy traffic and traffic accidents。Traffic safety is everybody39。s business. We must obey the rules. For example, we must walk on walk side, when we cross zebra – crossing, stop and look right and left, then go across fast. Don’t play football on the road .We can tell our parents not to drink before they drive, not to run through red lights, not to talk and laugh while driving etc。We can say cars are ing into our life, but only when everybody thinks traffic safety is everybody39。s business can we be safe driving on roads and walking on sidewalks?！窘馕觥窟@是一篇給材料作文，寫一篇有關(guān)交通安全的短文, 介紹作為中學(xué)生我們應(yīng)該怎么做，結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：we are happy that……，it has also brought…….，Traffic safety is……，we must……，we can……，等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。點(diǎn)睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了現(xiàn)在有很多交通問題，接下來介紹我們應(yīng)遵守的交通規(guī)則，最后指出人人認(rèn)為交通安全是自己的事，我們才能在路上安全行駛。此處e into, such as, for example, tell sb not to do sth等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。5．Our Environment in Ten Years: for Better or Worse?Many students are optimistic（樂觀的）about tour envi解析：Our Environment in Ten Years: for Better or Worse?Many students are optimistic（樂觀的）about tour environment in ten years．In fact，they think that more and more people will take part in the environmental protection and our government will take more measures to improve our environment．As a result, our world will be more beautiful and we will have better lives.However，other students are worried about the future．They say a number of trees will be cut down and there will be more and more private cars.．Therefore，we will have even more environmental problems and live in a world with less energy available．But in my opinion，I think we will find ways to solve our problems and everyone will live more happily．【解析】這篇作文要求我們就榮光中學(xué)九年級(jí)2班的同學(xué)們對(duì)環(huán)境問題所召開的一次班會(huì)情況進(jìn)行介紹。這個(gè)班會(huì)的主題是Our Environment in Ten Years: for Better or Worse?，對(duì)于未來的環(huán)境，很多同學(xué)吃樂觀的態(tài)度，而其他同學(xué)感到很擔(dān)心。題目中用表格的形式給我們呈現(xiàn)了這些內(nèi)容，我們需要用正確的英語將他們表達(dá)出來，首先我們應(yīng)注意英語表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語的不同，不能逐詞翻譯，應(yīng)從句子的整體考慮，使用恰當(dāng)?shù)木湫汀⒃~匯和短語，以簡單句的結(jié)構(gòu)為主，如主謂賓、主系表等，點(diǎn)綴幾個(gè)并列句或復(fù)合句，提升文章檔次。其次注意使用正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱，本文應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)和一般將來時(shí)為主，注意謂語動(dòng)詞的正確形式。最后應(yīng)注意在語句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文章的邏輯關(guān)系更加合理，文意流暢、連貫。點(diǎn)睛：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文