【正文】 14．At present, a number of middle school students have picked up a bad habitcheating in examinations.解析：At present, a number of middle school students have picked up a bad habitcheating in examinations.There。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應(yīng)用第一人稱，一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，注意標(biāo)點符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯誤。13．Our school had a survey about delaying school starting time online. I agreed that students should g解析：Our school had a survey about delaying school starting time online. I agreed that students should go to school a little late. Here are my reasons.First of all, delaying starting time at school makes sure that we can have enough sleep for a day. A good sleep will make us more active in class so that we study more efficiently. Secondly, it also offers us more time to have breakfast. Breakfast provides energy for the whole morning. No breakfast will do harm to our health and our study. What’s more, we don’t have to go to school in such a hurry, and we can also do some exercise to keep fit.All in all, delaying school starting time does good to students, We are looking forward to it.【解析】這是一篇圖表，要求闡述自己贊成推遲中小學(xué)早上上學(xué)的理由。最后檢查所用時態(tài)、人稱是否符合要求；檢查段落是否完整，句子表達是否準(zhǔn)確，語法、拼寫、標(biāo)點、移行、大小寫等方面是否有誤等。本文給出的材料比較具體全面，考生需要用正確的英語句子把這些內(nèi)容表達出來，并可進行適當(dāng)想象發(fā)揮。要求根據(jù)所給出的提示，寫一篇短文。12．In order to build a civilized city, we students are supposed to behave well in our daily life.Firs解析：In order to build a civilized city, we students are supposed to behave well in our daily life. should choose to live a lowcarbon life. We’d better go to school by bike or on foot. When we are shopping. we can use baskets or cloth bags instead of plastic bags. We should also pay attention to saving. We must say NO to waste. We shouldn’t buy anything we don’t need.Second，it’s our duty to protect the environment. We mustn’t throw litter or rubbish about and we should take care of trees and flowers.Third，it’s necessary for us to show good manners to others/ be polite to others. We need to say polite words such as“Thank You. I’m sorry and Please” as often as possible.Finally, we should devote ourselves to helping others. We should learn from Lei Feng and be willing to help others. It’s important for us to take part in voluntary work.We should try our best to make our city more and more beautiful!【解析】本文是一篇給材料作文。s more, using shared bikes costs so little that we can afford ；另外文章中還使用了恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，如Also, What’s more, But, sometimes, After all等等。例如They can be seen everywhere so that it39。分段敘述使文章的結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，主題明確，有層次性。首先短文內(nèi)容完整，包含了題目要求的所有信息。語句之間注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使整篇文章意思連貫、表達流暢。通過審題可知，這篇短文應(yīng)主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，第三人稱來敘述，短文可以分成兩段或者三段，一個內(nèi)容一段或前兩個內(nèi)容合到一段。題目中利用表格的形式給我們列舉了短文的主要內(nèi)容，包括：共享單車的優(yōu)勢；存在的問題以及你自己對這件事情的看法。t return shared bikes in time. Sometimes shared bikes take up too much of the road, so they are in our way.I think we should encourage more people to use shared bikes properly. After all, it39。s easy for us to get around on shared bikes. Also, riding bicycles not only is good for our health but also can help reduce pollution. What39。溫馨提醒：考生必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標(biāo)點誤用等。運用適當(dāng)?shù)亩陶Z表達中心思想，增加作文的可讀性。10．There’s no doubt that parents have given me a lot since I was born. With their care, I grow up happ解析：There’s no doubt that parents have given me a lot since I was born. With their care, I grow up happily. So I think it is necessary to do something special for them to show my gratitude.Both of my parents love music. So it would be a great idea to buy a wonderful CD for them. Last Sunday, I went to a bookstore and chose one among the top 10. While we were having dinner together, I played the CD. It was beautiful. With great joy, they gave me a warm hug and a big smile. I felt very sweet.I was really proud that I did something for my parents. Their smiles were the best encouragement for me. I made up my mind to do things like this more often.【解析】考生首先要認真閱讀前面的提示認真審題，確定文章的中心。有些句子較長，是由于使用高級句型所致，一味使用較長的句子也會導(dǎo)致文章的冗長，讓讀者感覺比較累，因此要注意調(diào)整文章的節(jié)奏。其次短文中使用了正確的時態(tài)、人稱，文章以一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)和一般過去時態(tài)為主，謂語動詞形式準(zhǔn)確，語法規(guī)范。短文作者選擇了正方的觀點，第一句話先點明自己的觀點是什么，接下來圍繞這一觀點進行闡述，并從自己的經(jīng)歷出發(fā)，闡述了自己持有這一觀點的理由，充分、合理，有說服力。點睛：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。寫作時還應(yīng)注意的是語言的表達，英語的表達習(xí)慣和漢語是不同的，我們不能按照漢語思維，逐詞翻譯，而是從句子的整體考慮，使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯和句型，多用簡單句，如主謂賓、主系表的結(jié)構(gòu)，點綴幾個復(fù)合句或并列句，調(diào)整文章節(jié)奏，讓文章的句子富于變化，有新鮮感。寫作之前，我們應(yīng)先從正方和反方中選擇一個，作為自己的觀點，然后圍繞這一觀點闡述自己的理由。9．One possible version：At home, I think teenagers should make their own choices. Learning to make ou解析：One possible version：At home, I think teenagers should make their own choices. Learning to make our own choices can help us to be more independent.After I entered junior high school, I made every choice on my study, from which reference books to buy to how to plan time for study. Unlike other students, I didn’t need my parents to be with me when I was studying. With the development of this learning habit, I soon realized that I could do better in study than other classmates who often depended on teachers and parents. Before making every choice, I carefully considered the advantages and disadvantages of my actions and in that way, I grew up independently.There is no wonder that we will grow up some day and live on our own. Although parents undoubtedly care about us, we still need to make our own decisions when it es to our personal things. Everyone needs to learn to grow up to get prepared for future life.【解析】這篇作文要求我們寫一篇議論文，論點是：在我們自己的事情上，我們應(yīng)該自己做決定，還是由家長來做決定。用了賓語從句，如：Most students believe it’s necessary to study hard. What’s more, they think each teenager is supposed to make a good plan for ，如：Also, we must be active and exercise more to keep healthy because it’s important to a successful ，也是提分的經(jīng)典句子。注意不要遺漏要點，所寫的句子應(yīng)該符合英語語法，不能是漢語式的句子，要使用一些高級詞匯及句式。8．I have recently done a survey about how a teenager can have a successful life.Most students believ解析：I have recently done a survey about how a teenager can have a successful life.Most students believe it’s necessary to study hard. After all, study plays a key role in their life. They also agree they should respect their parents, who look after them every day. Besides, they’re ready to serve the society and in their opin