【正文】 s more, it39。t need to look for hotels or restaurants by themselves．Besides, they can make friends and help each other while travelling．However, other students prefer to travel alone． That39。s help, they won39。practice makes perfect熟能生巧，諺語(yǔ)的運(yùn)用，為文章增添了色彩。①as…as possible盡可能…②instead of 代替 而不是，后跟動(dòng)名詞。在寫作時(shí)，人稱為第一人稱，因?yàn)槲恼律婕暗膬?nèi)容是曾經(jīng)發(fā)生過(guò)的事情，所以時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)該用一般過(guò)去時(shí)來(lái)描述發(fā)，寫感想可以用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。t help. Instead we should be active to face our problems.【解析】本文是一篇材料作文。14．My middle school life is ing to an end. During the three years，not only did I have happy time, b解析：My middle school life is ing to an end. During the three years，not only did I have happy time, but I had kinds of problems. My biggest problem was too much homework. Homework seemed endless for me. It made me stay up late and feel very tired every day，but I knew the teachers were expecting us to do better，even the best in my lessons.How can I deal with the problem？On the one hand，I concentrated more on my study in class. On the other hand，I did the homework as quickly as possible instead of being slow or absent minded. As a result，I spent less time on homework，and I wasn39。寫作時(shí)，我們可以根據(jù)需要將這些信息進(jìn)行合理的整理與安排，使文章的意思銜接更自然。4. 張陽(yáng)老師的歷史課把抗日戰(zhàn)爭(zhēng)栩栩如生呈現(xiàn)到課堂上，講述了七十年前中華兒女如何與日本鬼子勇敢戰(zhàn)斗。2. 家長(zhǎng)們聽了很多堂課，高度評(píng)價(jià)老師精湛的教學(xué)技能。根據(jù)材料寫一篇短文。 excellent teaching skills．The music lesson given by Wang Fang was lively and interesting．She successfully brought traditional music and modern music together．The history lesson given by Zhang Yang brought the AntiJapanese War alive in class．He told us how Chinese people fought against Japanese bravely 80 years ago．Parents all felt fantastic and were moved by the teachers39。適當(dāng)使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容，可知時(shí)態(tài)以一般將來(lái)時(shí)態(tài)為主。3. 建議彼得為這次活動(dòng)做哪些準(zhǔn)備。本文已經(jīng)給出了主要寫作要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，寫作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上；提示的問(wèn)題就是寫作的基本方向，寫作要點(diǎn)為：1. 志愿者活動(dòng)的時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無(wú)誤。在寫作的時(shí)候，注意連句成篇，保持文章的連貫性。動(dòng)筆前一定要認(rèn)真閱讀外教Rhian的微信，所回的短信中對(duì)涉及的問(wèn)題都要有所回應(yīng)。11．Hey, for your message.`I am writing to tell you about your things in last 解析：Hey, for your message.`I am writing to tell you about your things in last are fifty students in our of us like think a good teacher is organized. A good teacher cares and is always ready for his or her students. A good teacher is always fair and respects their students. A good teacher always works hard.The weather is warm may carry some sweaters with needn’t carry heavy have somewhere in your spare time you can go boating on the school you can play football with us.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇給材料作文。 （4）注意書寫的規(guī)范：大小寫，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)等的正確運(yùn)用。（3）切忌堆砌詞語(yǔ)，句子，注意運(yùn)用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞使句子流暢，連貫。（2）注意給出的起始句（這就給出了時(shí)態(tài)），學(xué)生運(yùn)用正確的時(shí)態(tài)，運(yùn)用所給或所學(xué)的詞語(yǔ)，盡量運(yùn)用熟悉的句型。點(diǎn)睛：這是一篇比較優(yōu)秀的作文，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)要符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確、句子通順。He hopes to go to a lot of different places, know about Chinese culture and taste Chinese food.（二）根據(jù)提綱連詞成句，連句成篇，注意連詞的使用。He used to like to read science fictions. Now he is very interested in Chinese classical books and has read 2 . 早晨8點(diǎn)起床，乘坐地鐵去上班，空余時(shí)間練習(xí)漢語(yǔ)。It has been two years since he came to China and worked in . 曾經(jīng)去過(guò)長(zhǎng)城，故宮等名勝。寫完以后，注意再讀一遍，看看有無(wú)拼寫，語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤（時(shí)態(tài)，主謂一致等）。根據(jù)內(nèi)容可知本文使用的時(shí)態(tài)有一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，一般過(guò)去式和現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)。10．I have a pen friend named Tom. It has been two years since he came to China and worked in Beijing.解析：I have a pen friend named Tom. It has been two years since he came to China and worked in Beijing. And he has been to the Great Wall, the Forbidden City and other places of interest. He used to like to read science fictions. Now he is very interested in Chinese classical books and has read 2 classics. He gets up at 8 . and takes the subway to work every day, and practices Chinese in his spare time. He teaches English in a middle school in Beijing. He works hard. He likes China. He hopes to go to a lot of different places, know about Chinese culture and taste Chinese food in the future.【解析】試題分析：本文是材料作文。文章中以簡(jiǎn)單句為主，也使用了并列句和復(fù)合句，調(diào)整文章結(jié)構(gòu)，使用復(fù)雜句型、短文和較高級(jí)的句型，提升了文章的檔次。其次短文中使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱，文章中以第一人稱為主、一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)來(lái)敘述，符合題目要求。作者根據(jù)題目要求就如何創(chuàng)建和諧班級(jí)發(fā)表了自己的看法。點(diǎn)睛：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。另外一個(gè)難點(diǎn)是使用正確的英語(yǔ)將自己的所想表達(dá)出來(lái)，英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語(yǔ)是不同的，寫作時(shí)，不能逐詞去翻譯，而應(yīng)從文章、句子的整體考慮，首先確定這篇短文使用什么人稱、時(shí)態(tài)來(lái)敘述；可能用到哪些詞匯、短語(yǔ)和句型，每個(gè)句子應(yīng)以簡(jiǎn)單句為基礎(chǔ)，如主謂賓結(jié)構(gòu)或主系表結(jié)構(gòu)，然后再變化成較高級(jí)、復(fù)雜是句型，如復(fù)合句、非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞形式等。因此首先我們要仔細(xì)思考這個(gè)問(wèn)題，結(jié)合自己的真實(shí)生活，想一想平時(shí)是怎么做的，應(yīng)該怎么做。9．We should build a harmonious class, because it’s important for us to grow up happily.As a member o解析：We should build a harmonious class, because it’s important for us to grow up happily.As a member of the class, I respect and trust my teachers and classmates. When I have someproblems, I always talk to them and listen to their advice. When some of my classmates are sad,I’m always ready to give a hand and cheer them up.Of course, there is more that I should do. I’m really good at English, but some of myclassmates aren’t. I will help them. Then we’ll make progress together.【解析】這篇作文給出的寫作背景是：你們學(xué)校英文報(bào)刊在以Building a Harmonious Class為題征文，你來(lái)為?？陡?，談一談如何創(chuàng)建一個(gè)和諧的班集體、你通常是怎么做的以及你還需要做什么。開頭介紹了現(xiàn)在有很多交通問(wèn)題，接下來(lái)介紹我們應(yīng)遵守的交通規(guī)則，最后指出人人認(rèn)為交通安全是自己的事，我們才能在路上安全行駛。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系?！窘馕觥窟@是一篇給材料作文，寫一篇有關(guān)交通安全的短文, 介紹作為中學(xué)生我們應(yīng)該怎么做，結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：we are happy that……，it has also brought…….，Traffic safety is……，we must……，we can……，等句式的應(yīng)用。We can say cars are ing into our life, but only when everybody thinks traffic safety is everybody39。Traffic safety is everybody39。此處prefer to do sth, by phones, on the Internet, concern about, in one’s opinion, try one’ s best等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。【點(diǎn)睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。7．As time goes by, there are many different kinds of munication methods now. As for me, I prefer t解析：As time goes by, there are many different kinds of munication methods now. As for me, I prefer to chat with others by mobile phone, but sometimes I chat by munication software, such as WeChat and .Mobile phones bring great convenience to people, but people can only hear the sound by phones. By using net software, we can easily see the people we talk to on the Internet. However, sometimes we concern more about mobile phones instead of the people around.In my opinion, we should pay more attention to the face to face munication and tr