中考復(fù)習(xí)專項(xiàng)動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)學(xué)案(編輯修改稿)
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【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 ？議論文？看圖？還是應(yīng)用文？，單一還是混合。、短語(yǔ)、句型。，并運(yùn)用適當(dāng)?shù)木湫秃瓦^(guò)渡詞銜接。寫(xiě)完后反復(fù)閱讀修改推敲潤(rùn)色，人稱、時(shí)態(tài)、單復(fù)數(shù)一致等。運(yùn)用自然過(guò)渡法和自然銜接法來(lái)是文章更為地道、通順、純正。用的短語(yǔ)、句型：both kinds of、If we choose a boarding school、At the same time、As for me, I prefer a boarding school、pay attention to、來(lái)增加了文章的亮點(diǎn)?！军c(diǎn)睛】這類作文的寫(xiě)作方法要注意認(rèn)真審題，注意過(guò)渡性語(yǔ)言的使用。做到：要點(diǎn)要全，表達(dá)要清晰明確，使用短語(yǔ)，句型要準(zhǔn)確，注意避免拼寫(xiě)和語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。4．馬上要初中畢業(yè)了，大家都是依依不舍的。班主任決定在下周舉辦一場(chǎng)“My Life At School” 主題 班會(huì) , 邀請(qǐng)全班同學(xué)參加。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示，寫(xiě)一篇發(fā)言稿。美好的回憶； ；； 。不開(kāi)心的事情； 。未來(lái)展望1. 升上理想的學(xué)校；2. 能結(jié)識(shí)更多朋友；3. 請(qǐng)你補(bǔ)充(至少兩點(diǎn))My Life At SchoolHow time flies! It39。s unbelievable that I39。m going to graduate from my beloved school. 【答案】My Life At SchoolHow time flies! It’s unbelievable that I’m going to graduate from my beloved school. There are many things to remember. In the junior school, I got along well with my classmates. The teachers are very friendly and they are ready to help me. The most unforgettable thing is that I got a chance of being an exchange students and spent two months in Australia. I learned a lot from the experience. I also remember I served as volunteer to help others. Certainly, there were also unhappy things. My good friend Li Hua went to another school. I was very sad. Luckily, we kept in touch with each other through s. Besides, I was not good at Chinese writing. I hope I can go to a dream school and make more new friends. I also wish I can do better in all subjects when I am in high school and can go to a good college.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以My Life At School為題，寫(xiě)一篇發(fā)言稿。題目中利用表格的形式，展示了文章的具體內(nèi)容，學(xué)生們可以此為提綱進(jìn)行寫(xiě)作。審題可知，這篇短文應(yīng)主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)，注意根據(jù)表達(dá)需要使用正確時(shí)態(tài)，并注意謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的正確形式。內(nèi)容應(yīng)主要包括三部分：首先是初中三年里的美好回憶；然后是不開(kāi)心的事情；最后展望自己未來(lái)的高中生活。表格中有非常具體的提示，但不能逐詞翻譯表格中的短語(yǔ)，應(yīng)把他們變成自己的話，并用英語(yǔ)表達(dá)出來(lái)。寫(xiě)作時(shí)應(yīng)注意：文章中應(yīng)包括表格中的所有信息，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)；第三部分的內(nèi)容中還需要自己發(fā)揮想象力進(jìn)行補(bǔ)充，注意應(yīng)合情合理，與上文很好地銜接。另外注意句式結(jié)構(gòu)要符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣，用完整的句子表達(dá)。句式結(jié)構(gòu)可以簡(jiǎn)單句為基礎(chǔ)，穿插并列句、復(fù)合句以及其他復(fù)雜句式的使用，提升作文檔次。同時(shí)語(yǔ)句之間使用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫、自然?！军c(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求，回憶了自己的初中生活，并展望了未來(lái)。短文有以下幾個(gè)特點(diǎn)：首先文章內(nèi)容完整，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰。短文分三段，第一段基本是題目中給出的開(kāi)頭，作者使用一句話引出下文；第二段是主體，介紹了過(guò)去美好的回憶以及不開(kāi)心的事情；最后一段對(duì)未來(lái)進(jìn)行了展望。各部分內(nèi)容安排合理，有層次、有條理。其次短文中使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱，語(yǔ)法規(guī)范，用詞準(zhǔn)確，注意了動(dòng)詞正確形式的變化。句式結(jié)構(gòu)完整，符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確、得體，表達(dá)自然、流暢。短文中使用了豐富的句型和短語(yǔ)，如The teachers are very friendly and they are ready to help me. The most unforgettable thing is that I got a chance of being an exchange students and spent two months in , we kept in touch with each other through s. Besides, I was not good at Chinese also wish I can do better in all subjects when I am in high school and can go to a good 。5．（2017年浙江紹興）書(shū)面表達(dá)?！癏ow can a teenager have a successful life?”的討論，為此你采訪了一些同學(xué)（結(jié)果見(jiàn)下表）。請(qǐng)據(jù)上經(jīng)用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文參與討論，并闡述你的觀點(diǎn)。同學(xué)主要觀點(diǎn)你的觀點(diǎn)努力學(xué)習(xí)尊重父母服務(wù)社會(huì)計(jì)劃未來(lái)……（至少兩條）注意：（1）短文必須包括表中所有內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)；（2）你的觀點(diǎn)至少兩條；（3）詞數(shù)：80—100；（4）短文首句僅供選擇使用，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：尊重respect短文首句：I have recently done a survey about how a teenager can have a successful life.【答案】I have recently done a survey about how a teenager can have a successful life.Most students believe it’s necessary to study hard. After all, study plays a key role in their life. They also agree they should respect their parents, who look after them every day. Besides, they’re ready to serve the society and in their opinion it’s really meaningful. What’s more, they think each teenager is supposed to make a good plan for future.From my point of view, we need to make some good friends so that we can learn from each other. Also, we must be active and exercise more to keep healthy because it’s important to a successful life.【解析】試題分析：英語(yǔ)教育網(wǎng)站開(kāi)展主題為“How can a teenager have a successful life?”的討論，采訪了一些同學(xué)參與討論，寫(xiě)出他們的觀點(diǎn)及自己的觀點(diǎn)。因?yàn)槭菙⑹鐾瑢W(xué)的現(xiàn)在的觀點(diǎn)，所以句子應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，敘述同學(xué)的觀點(diǎn)用第三人稱，敘述自己的觀點(diǎn)用第一人稱。注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，所寫(xiě)的句子應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)法，不能是漢語(yǔ)式的句子，要使用一些高級(jí)詞匯及句式。寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：短文用了一些短語(yǔ)和句式，如：do a survey about sth關(guān)于某事做調(diào)查；respect their parents,尊敬他們的父母；look af
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