【文章內容簡介】 bout the UK.I’m looking forward to your reply!Yours,Li Hua【解析】這篇作文要求我們以中學生李華的身份，給Liz Payne寫一個留言。文章內容主要包括三個部分：首先是介紹自己的身份；然后寫留言的目的，包括冬令營的時間、想要去參觀London Canal Museum以及聽Liz Payne的講座；最后簡單介紹一下你的預期的收獲。寫作時，應根據題目的這些要求，組織語言，串聯(lián)成一篇短文。通過分析可知，這篇短文應使用第一人稱I來敘述，時態(tài)應以一般將來時態(tài)和一般現在時為主。注意英語句子的表達和漢語習慣是不同的，不能逐詞翻譯，而應從句子的整體考慮，使用正確的句式結構以及適當的詞匯、短語和句型，保證句子的準確性和語言的地道。另外還應注意語句之間使用恰當的連接成分，使文意連貫。穿插一些高級詞匯和復雜句式，提升文章檔次和水平，使表達更加流暢。點睛：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。首先短文內容完整，包含了題目要求的所有信息，沒有遺漏要點。作者主要從三個方面敘述：首先介紹了自己的身份和寫留言的目的；接下來詳細介紹了自己參加這次冬令營的愿望；最后是一個簡單的結尾。如果分段敘述效果則會更好，那樣會使文章的層次更加清晰。其次短文中使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱，文章以第一人稱、一般將來時和一般現在時為主，謂語動詞形式準發(fā)，語法規(guī)范，符合英語句子的表達習慣。短文以簡單句結構為主，也使用了一些復合句和較高級的句型，如I’m writing to tell you that our city will have a Winter Camp during this winter ；From , I know you will have a report “An Update on the Cotswold Canals” February 6th, which will happen during the same period of our Winter ；And I also hope to listen to your talk so that I can know more about the Stroudwater Canal, the Thames and Severn 。整篇文章語句通順、意思連貫、表達流暢。5．書面表達假如你是李華，你們學校正在進行課堂教學改革，經過一段時間的適應，同學們發(fā)現現在的課堂跟以前比較發(fā)生了一些變化，請你根據所給提示以“The Changes in Class”為題目，用英語寫一篇100詞左右的文章，談談你的感受和想法，開頭和結尾已給出（不計入總詞數）。 要求：、條理清晰、段落分明、書寫工整；、校名和地名等信息；，并作適當發(fā)揮。The Changes in ClassThanks for giving us students a chance to express ourselves about how we study in 【答案】 The Changes in ClassThanks for giving us students a chance to express ourselves about how we study in class. I like the class like think it is very interesting and lively. We can tell stories, play games and listen to music.I think it is open and free. We can study and think by ourselves .We can discuss in groups and show ourselves. We can get more knowledge in this class. The changes in Class are good for us.【解析】【詳解】假如你是李華，你們學校正在進行課堂教學改革，經過一段時間的適應，同學們發(fā)現現在的課堂跟以前比較發(fā)生了一些變化，請你根據所給提示以“The Changes in Class”為題目，用英語寫一篇100詞左右的文章，談談你的感受和想法，開頭和結尾已給出（不計入總詞數）。 結合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現在時，人稱為單數第一人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結構主要為系表結構，注意一些常見句式的應用，寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關系?！军c睛】本文結構緊湊，語言簡練文中運用了一些好的句型：We can study and think by ourselves .We can discuss in groups and show ourselves. We can get more knowledge in this 。6．環(huán)保話題是人們最關心的話題之一，請以Change for a better China為主題，結合自己家鄉(xiāng)的變化寫一篇英語短文。注意事項：，條理清楚，作適當發(fā)揮。,詞數不少于80。 狀況水污染，大氣污染...... 應對措施立即阻止此類活動,治理環(huán)境（至少兩條）...... 感想建議環(huán)境能夠變得更好......Change for a better China________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】We all know it is being more and more important to protect our environment well. But some people don’t care about it .They throw litter into the river and even worse factories also put waste into the river, the river is full of rubbish. The air is badly polluted because there are more cars on the road these days. Factories that burn coal also pollute the air with a lot of black smoke. We hardly ever see blue skies anymore.I think everyone in our hometown should play a part in cleaning it up. We should write to the government ,they should close down the factories. Trees are very helpful and important for the environment .We can plant more trees and more trees in