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atter what reasons we have, we all can get a lot from sports.【解析】【詳解】本篇寫作主要是談?wù)撟约簩\(yùn)動的觀點(diǎn)和看法,應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài),寫作要點(diǎn)要包括:。(多數(shù)學(xué)生的觀點(diǎn)、男生的觀點(diǎn)、女生的觀點(diǎn))。亮點(diǎn)說明:這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文,很好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù),語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣,準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài),主謂一致,在文中使用了時間狀語從句,定語從句,特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句,如have fun,in order to,as for,in my opinion等。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系,增加上下文意思連貫,句子通順,行文連貫。5. 書面表達(dá)暑假即將來臨,對于如何安排孩子初中畢業(yè)后的第一個假期,家長們和孩子自己有著各自的想法。根據(jù)下表提示,寫一篇英語短文,描述他們的不同看法,同時發(fā)表你自己對暑假安排的觀點(diǎn)。Parents39。 opinionsGet ready for high school. Do some housework…Kid39。s opinionsHave a good rest. Do some sightseeing…Your opinion…注意](1)表格中的觀點(diǎn)僅供參考,允許適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。(2)開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。(3)文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和校名等信息。(4)詞數(shù):不少于80。How will you spend the ing summer vacation? Parents and kids have their own opinions. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】How will you spend the ing summer vacation? Parents and kids have their own opinions.Some parents think kids should get ready for high school in the sum?mer so it39。s important to take summer courses. They also think kids can help do housework to learn some life skills. But the kids disagree. They think it39。s time to take a good rest. They need to hang out with their friends to go sightseeing.In my opinion we can have a talk with our parents. All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. We need to relax ourselves after working so hard at school. It39。s good for us to do some sports.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇給材料作文,本文已經(jīng)給出了主要寫作要點(diǎn),動筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn),然后圍繞要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮.寫作中,應(yīng)注意描述的全面性,盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上;結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容,可知本文主要是第三人稱,一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)進(jìn)行敘述.語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu),造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣.適當(dāng)使用連詞,做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密,符合邏輯關(guān)系.【點(diǎn)睛】這篇短文用到了一些好的句型:They also think kids can help do housework to learn some life skills. But the kids disagree. They think it39。s time to take a good rest. They need to hang out with their friends to go 。6.題目②“持之以恒,方得始?!眻?jiān)持是一種可貴的品格。生活中想要做成任何一件事情,都需要持之以恒的精神。某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展以“堅(jiān)持”為主題的征文活動。假如你是李華,請用英語寫一篇短文投稿。談淡你在初中生活中堅(jiān)持的一件事(愛好,習(xí)慣……),你是怎樣做的,以及你的感受。提示詞語:keep, practice, difficult, give up, proud提示問題:1. What did you do?2. How do you feel?It s important for us to keep trying to achieve our goals. 【答案】It39。s important for us to keep trying to achieve our love running and I have kept running for three years.When I was in Grade 7,I was not good at sports and running was always my often failed in my running order to catch up with my classmates,I began to practice running every day after ,I was so tired that I really wanted to give I kept telling myself that I could make matter what kind of difficulties I faced,I tried my best to keep I do much better in running and I39。m very proud of feel more confident and I39。m ready for any challenges in the future.【解析】【分析】本篇是材料作文,根據(jù)所給提示寫一篇自己在初中生活中堅(jiān)持做的事;文中寫明自己是怎么做的并談?wù)勛约旱母惺?。【詳解】,用第一人稱寫初中生活中自己堅(jiān)持做的一件事,根據(jù)提示,描寫“What did you do?用一般過去時,描寫How do you feel?用一般現(xiàn)在時。書寫時要緊扣主題,文句通順?!芭懿健?,正文部分詳細(xì)地描寫了自己起初跑步總是不及格,通過克服困難、不懈地努力,堅(jiān)持跑步,到現(xiàn)在比以前會跑;結(jié)尾談了這件事對自己的影響;文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰,前后呼應(yīng)。比如:固定搭配、固定句型It39。s +adj+ for us +to do sth、love doing sth、keep doing 、be good at、 catch up with、be proud of;不定式in order to;try my best to;狀語從句so…that …;比較級do much better in …、feel more confident等;短語多彩、文句表達(dá)多樣。 ”7.中學(xué)生在成長過程中經(jīng)常