【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 構(gòu)。同時(shí)語句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分使文意連貫、自然?！军c(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求，介紹了一個(gè)曾經(jīng)激勵(lì)過自己的人。短文有以下幾個(gè)優(yōu)點(diǎn)：首先文章內(nèi)容完整，層次清晰，短文分三段，第一段先介紹了這個(gè)人是誰，第二段描寫了這個(gè)人身上的品質(zhì)以及對(duì)自己的應(yīng)選；最后一段結(jié)尾。各部分內(nèi)容安排合理，主次分明。其次短文中使用了正確的人稱和時(shí)態(tài)，文章以第三人稱和第一人稱為主來敘述，主要使用了一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過去時(shí)，動(dòng)詞形式變化準(zhǔn)確，注意了第三人稱單數(shù)形式以及過去式形式的變化，語法規(guī)范。用詞準(zhǔn)確，語言得體，句式結(jié)構(gòu)完整，符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。短文中使用了一些較好的句型和短語，如But the person who inspired me most, I think, is my friend Wang Peng.、Wang Peng is a small thin boy with two big black eyes.、He doesn39。t talk too much, but always keeps a smile on his face.、If I need any help for my math exercises, he is always the one that can help me out.、He also does well in many sports, such as badminton and pingpang.、He is my idol and I wish I could be a student as good as he 。5．書面表達(dá)假如你是華,你的英國筆友對(duì)中國文化很感興趣,想到中國旅行感受中國文化。你想請(qǐng)他來你的家鄉(xiāng)一安徴一游,請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示用英文給他寫一封電子郵件。1位置:中國東部,安做省南部: :春暖花開,秋季涼爽:山和古村落: :茶、黃梅戲提示詞:黃梅戲 Huangmei Opera注意:,使行文連貫。,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)Dear DaveI know that you are interested in Chinese culture and Im glad you are planning a trip to China. Why not e to Anhui, my home town, to have fun?【答案】Dear Dave，I know you are interested in Chinese culture and I’m glad you are planning a trip to China. Why not e to Anhui, my hometown, to have some fun.Anhui Province lies in the east of China. The best time to e here is in autumn, because it’s really cool and you can just take some light coats. There are many famous places to see. For example, Mt. Huangshan, where you will see wonderful plants and special rocks. Besides, Anhui is also famous for ancient villages such as Xidi, Hongcun and so on. As a fan of Chinese culture, don’t forget to try green tea in Anhui which smells good and tastes better. What’s more, e and watch Huangmei Opera. It’s easy to understand and won’t let you down!Wele to Anhui! I’m looking forward to seeing you here!Yours, Li Hua【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以李華的身份給自己的筆友Dave寫信，邀請(qǐng)他來你的家鄉(xiāng)—安徽一游，題目中列出了文章的提綱，審題可知，短文應(yīng)從以下幾個(gè)內(nèi)容敘述：首先介紹家鄉(xiāng)的位置；然后介紹來這里最好的時(shí)候；接下來是介紹家鄉(xiāng)的景點(diǎn)和文化，并給出建議。短文應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，注意謂語動(dòng)詞的正確形式。寫作時(shí)應(yīng)合理安排幾個(gè)內(nèi)容，分清主次，并注意上下文的連貫。另外，英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語是不同的，因此寫作時(shí)不能按照漢語思維逐詞翻譯，應(yīng)從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)出發(fā)，寫完整的句子。如可以使用簡(jiǎn)單句結(jié)構(gòu)，易于掌握，不容易出錯(cuò)。但為提升文章檔次，也應(yīng)穿插一些并列句結(jié)構(gòu)或復(fù)合句，以及使用一些復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)，如非謂語動(dòng)詞、被動(dòng)語態(tài)等?！军c(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求邀請(qǐng)Dave來自己的家鄉(xiāng)旅游，并介紹了家鄉(xiāng)的景點(diǎn)和文化。短文有如下幾個(gè)特點(diǎn)：首先文章內(nèi)容完整，包含了題目中要求的所有內(nèi)容，并對(duì)細(xì)節(jié)進(jìn)行補(bǔ)充和修飾，使內(nèi)容更加充實(shí)、豐富。短文先對(duì)Dave發(fā)出邀請(qǐng)，然后具體介紹了家鄉(xiāng)的位置、景點(diǎn)、文化等，并提出了建議。全文敘述清晰，層次清楚，主次分明。第二，短文中使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱，語法規(guī)范，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句式結(jié)構(gòu)完整，符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。短文以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)來敘述，注意了謂語動(dòng)詞第三人稱單數(shù)形式的變化。句式結(jié)構(gòu)以簡(jiǎn)單句為主，也使用了并列句、賓語從句、狀語從句等復(fù)合句，還有一些好的句型，如The best time to e here is in autumn, because it’s really cool and you can just take some light coats、Besides, Anhui is also famous for ancient villages such as Xidi, Hongcun and so on.、What’s more, e and watch Huangmei Opera. It’s easy to understand and won’t let you down!、I’m looking forward to seeing you here!等。6．　　近年來霧霾天氣在中國許多城市頻頻發(fā)生。霧霾天氣引起大家極大的關(guān)注。請(qǐng)你用英語寫一篇有關(guān)霧霾的短文向校刊“英語角”投稿,內(nèi)容包括：1. 霧霾的危害 2. 霧霾產(chǎn)生的原因（2個(gè)） 3. 應(yīng)對(duì)霧霾的措施（3個(gè)）提示：霧霾 smog poisonous 有毒的注意：1. 詞數(shù)110左右； 2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫； 3. 開頭語已為你寫好（不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。In recent years, many cities in China have been hit by smog frequently, which has aroused great concern among people. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】　　In recent years, many cities in China have been hit by smog frequently, which has aroused great concern among people.　　Smog has a bad effect on people’s health. Many people, children and the old in pa