【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 lways read……，Gradually I began to……，Books are……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫(xiě)作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫(xiě)作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系?！军c(diǎn)睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。開(kāi)頭介紹了我最大的個(gè)人變化是喜歡上讀書(shū)，接下來(lái)介紹我小時(shí)候不喜歡讀書(shū)，最后指出現(xiàn)在書(shū)籍是我的朋友。此處fall in love in, at all, buy sb sth, begin to do sth, love doing sth, feel like, talk with, continue to do sth等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。7．（陜西師大附中中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)“文明是一面鏡子，折射出一座城市的品質(zhì)”。西安作為一座古老的城市在創(chuàng)建國(guó)際化大都市的過(guò)程中，離不開(kāi)精神文明建設(shè)。在你身邊有哪些不文明現(xiàn)象？作為中學(xué)生，我們應(yīng)該從哪些方面做起，為文明城市的建設(shè)出一份力？請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示詞，以“Let’s help Xi’an be better”為題，號(hào)召全體中學(xué)生共創(chuàng)美好西安。提示詞：spit 吐痰； respect。 traffic rules。 volunteer。 collect the trash。 plant trees。 clean the streets。 an environmental project….要求：1. 不少于70詞（開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名和校名；3. 語(yǔ)言流暢、書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范、卷面整潔。Let’s help Xi’an be betterOur city is making its effort to bee an international city. But in our daily life, we find_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Let’s help Xi’an be betterOur city is making its effort to bee an international city. But in our daily life, we find many bad behaviors around us. For example, many students spit everywhere. Some students don’t follow the traffic rules. Also, some students don’t respect others. These are not right. As students, we should do our part to build a civilized city. We can plant more trees to make our environment better. On weekends, we can help clean the streets and collect the trash in public places. Besides, we can do volunteer work to help others. Let’s work together to make our city more civilized and more beautiful.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們闡述身邊的不文明現(xiàn)象，并闡述我們應(yīng)該如何做，為文明城市的建設(shè)出一份力。題目中只給出了話題和一些提示詞，具體的寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容應(yīng)由學(xué)生們自己發(fā)揮想象力，進(jìn)行補(bǔ)充，這是寫(xiě)作中的一個(gè)難點(diǎn)。需要注意題目中給出的提示詞在文章中必須要用上，可以根據(jù)表達(dá)需要調(diào)整順序。寫(xiě)作時(shí)，學(xué)生們可以根據(jù)提示詞，或聯(lián)想自己的實(shí)際生活，列舉身邊的不文明現(xiàn)象，然后對(duì)創(chuàng)建文化城市提出自己的看法。審題可知，短文應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)為主，第一人稱(chēng)來(lái)敘述。寫(xiě)作時(shí)應(yīng)注意英語(yǔ)句式結(jié)構(gòu)和漢語(yǔ)是不同的，不能按照漢語(yǔ)思維逐詞翻譯，應(yīng)從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)考慮，寫(xiě)完整的句子，并注意使用適當(dāng)?shù)木湫腿ケ磉_(dá)，變化單詞的正確形式。為提升文章檔次，在文章中應(yīng)穿插幾個(gè)并列句或復(fù)合句的結(jié)構(gòu)。同時(shí)注意語(yǔ)句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫。【點(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目提示，介紹了自己身邊的不文明現(xiàn)象，并對(duì)中學(xué)生如何創(chuàng)建文明城市貢獻(xiàn)自己的力量提出了自己的看法。短文有以下幾個(gè)優(yōu)點(diǎn)：首先文章內(nèi)容完整，包括了題目中要求的所有信息，且敘述完整，內(nèi)容充實(shí)。文章內(nèi)容分成兩個(gè)部分：第一部分列舉了一些不文明現(xiàn)象；第二部分介紹了為創(chuàng)建文明城市，中學(xué)生應(yīng)該怎么做。層次清晰，結(jié)構(gòu)合理。其次短文使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱(chēng)，語(yǔ)法規(guī)范，用詞準(zhǔn)確。句式結(jié)構(gòu)完整，以簡(jiǎn)單句為主，敘述清楚、簡(jiǎn)潔。短文中的一些好的句型和短語(yǔ)有Also, some students don’t respect others、As students, we should do our part to build a civilized city.、We can plant more trees to make our environment better. 、On weekends, we can help clean the streets and collect the trash in public places. 、Besides, we can do volunteer work to help others等。8．（黑龍江中考模擬）Writing現(xiàn)在視力不好的人越來(lái)越多，有的孩子很小的時(shí)候就戴上了眼鏡。從小保護(hù)好眼睛很重要。六月六日是“全國(guó)愛(ài)眼日”。請(qǐng)你結(jié)合實(shí)際生活寫(xiě)一篇題目為“It’s important to protect our eyes”的英文稿。內(nèi)容：（1）眼睛的重要性；（2）保護(hù)眼睛的措施：①不要長(zhǎng)時(shí)間讀書(shū)看報(bào)；②不要在太強(qiáng)或太弱的光線下看書(shū)；③堅(jiān)持做眼保健操。要求：（1）詞數(shù)在80?100詞之間。2）要求字跡工整，語(yǔ)法正確，意思連貫，合乎邏輯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。It’s important to protect our eyes___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】It’s important to protect our eyesThe eyes are the window of our mind. We use our eyes to see everything around us. Without eyes, nothing is left beside you but darkness. How to protect our eyes? It’s not right to keep your eyes working for a long time. You’d better not read in strong or poor light. Don’t read in bed or on a moving bus. Remember to keep your books away from your eyes for about a foot and do eye exercises every day. What’s more, a balanced diet is necessary. Follow my advice and form a good habit. It’s time to say goodbye to thick glasses.【解析】【分析】這是一篇材料作文?！驹斀狻扛鶕?jù)題目要求可知，本文說(shuō)的時(shí)態(tài)是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。人稱(chēng)是第一和第二人稱(chēng)英語(yǔ)作文一般是三段式第一段：開(kāi)篇點(diǎn)題，交代寫(xiě)作目的——保護(hù)眼睛的重要性，以及提建議第二段：文章主體部分——保護(hù)眼睛的措施：①不要長(zhǎng)時(shí)間讀書(shū)看報(bào)；②不要在太強(qiáng)或太弱的光線下看書(shū)；③堅(jiān)持做眼保健操。第三部分：再次點(diǎn)題，并提出號(hào)召——現(xiàn)在開(kāi)始養(yǎng)成保護(hù)眼睛的好習(xí)慣。9．（無(wú)錫市江南中學(xué)中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)親子關(guān)系是目前廣受關(guān)注的話題。假設(shè)你是張華，你正在以“如何與父母更好地相處” 為題進(jìn)行英語(yǔ)自主課程研究。通過(guò)搜集資料，你查找到中國(guó)青少年研究中心（CYCRC）近日就中美兩國(guó)親子關(guān)系進(jìn)行了問(wèn)卷調(diào)查，結(jié)果如下表。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表選取并整合你認(rèn)為有用的信息，結(jié)合你的實(shí)際經(jīng)歷以How to get along well with parents為題寫(xiě)一篇感想。ChinaUSKids often talk to their parents%89%Kids think their parents understand them61%%Kids have different ideas from their parents%76%Kids have different ideas from their parents mostly because of…Schoolwork （%）Pocket money （20%）注意事項(xiàng)：；、意思連貫、符合情境；，首尾已經(jīng)在答題卡上給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；4. 內(nèi)容必須寫(xiě)在答題卡指定的位置?！敬鸢浮縃ow to get along well with parentsMore and more people begin to focus on the parentchild relationship. Here’s my understanding of how to get along well with our parents.CYCRC did a survey in the United States and China. The results showed that % of Chinese children often talk to their parents, far fewer than the Americans. More understanding lies in American parentchild relationship. I think we should not only talk often but open our heart. For example, when I got low marks in exams, I always talked to my parents. They helped me find the reason and encouraged me. I also shared my secrets and worries with them. A good relationship requires efforts from both parents and children. As children, getting well with parents is of great importance to us. We should find a proper way to create a healthy parentchild relationship.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以How to get along well with parents為題，就中國(guó)青少年研究中心（CYCRC）近日對(duì)中美兩國(guó)親子關(guān)系問(wèn)卷調(diào)查的結(jié)果進(jìn)行介紹，并結(jié)合自己的實(shí)際經(jīng)歷，發(fā)表自己的感謝。寫(xiě)作前，應(yīng)仔細(xì)審題，觀察所給表格，弄清楚表格中每一項(xiàng)的內(nèi)容以及它的意義。然后結(jié)合自己的實(shí)際情況，對(duì)如何與父母良好相處，發(fā)表自己的看法。短文應(yīng)主要以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，第一人稱(chēng)和第三人稱(chēng)來(lái)敘述。寫(xiě)作時(shí)應(yīng)注意：內(nèi)容應(yīng)密切結(jié)合表格中所給的數(shù)據(jù)以及自己的實(shí)際經(jīng)歷，有敘述，有議論。合理安排各部分內(nèi)容之間的關(guān)系，注意分清結(jié)構(gòu)，表達(dá)要有條理。其次應(yīng)注意英語(yǔ)表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語(yǔ)的不同，不能根據(jù)漢語(yǔ)式思維逐詞翻譯，應(yīng)從句式的整體結(jié)構(gòu)出發(fā)，使用適當(dāng)?shù)膯卧~、短語(yǔ)和句型表達(dá)。句式結(jié)構(gòu)要完整，可以簡(jiǎn)單句為基礎(chǔ)，穿插使用并列句和復(fù)合句以及其他復(fù)雜句式。同時(shí)注意語(yǔ)句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使行文連貫、自然?！军c(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求，介紹了中美兩國(guó)親子關(guān)系的對(duì)比，并結(jié)合自己的實(shí)際對(duì)如何與父母相處