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year since we became a Grade Nine student. Here is what our school life is like now. 【答案】Our school life in Grade NineIt is more than half a year since we became a Grade Nine student. Here is what our school life is like now.At school, all of our teachers work very hard. Most of them are patient enough to help us with all kinds of problems, whether in our study or in our life. As a result, they won high respect from us.As for students, in class we listen to the teacher carefully and think actively. After class, we are busy doing our homework. Every student is making efforts to try to achieve our dreams.At weekends, we usually spend a lot of time doing our homework, too. So we can39。t afford time for our hobbies any more. I feel a bit stressed actually, so I try to spare some time to play basketball or turn on my favorite TV program to get relaxed.No pains, no gains. But the more carefully we plan our day, the more colorful our school life will be.【解析】亮點說明:這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰,內(nèi)容飽滿,表達(dá)流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語,例如at school,work hard,most of,patient enough,help sb. with sth.,all kinds of problems,in our life,as a result,as for students,listen to,be busy doing,try to do,spend a lot of time doing,not any more,play basketball等。而It is more than half a year since we became a Grade Nine student./ But the more carefully we plan our day, the more colorful our school life will ,豐富了習(xí)作內(nèi)容,使表達(dá)多樣化,是本文的最大亮點。點睛:書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英,也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維,考查運用所學(xué)英語知識準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以,考生不能遺漏要點,要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式,盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。6.(B)根據(jù)要求完成大作文,詞數(shù):80100 We Get from Sports 的短文,應(yīng)該包含以下要點:1,學(xué)生參加體育運動的興趣不同,理由各異.,通過運動來放松自己.,希望運動能使自己更強(qiáng)壯.,希望運動使自己減肥和保持健康,苗條..:文中不得出現(xiàn)自己的名字和學(xué)校的名字,不計入詞數(shù).:keep slim (保持苗條)What We Get from SportsStudents in our school have one thing in mon an interest in 【答案】Students in our school have one thing in mon an interest in sports. But different students have different reasons for taking part in sports.Many students have sports when they feel tired after study. They just want to relax themselves and have fun. Most boys love sports. They take part in all kinds of sports in order to bee stronger. They join in the sports that interest them most, such as soccer, basketball and volleyball. As for girls, they want to lose weight. They want to keep slim, so they also like taking exercise.In my opinion, no matter what reasons we have, we all can get a lot from sports.【解析】【詳解】本篇寫作主要是談?wù)撟约簩\動的觀點和看法,應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài),寫作要點要包括:。(多數(shù)學(xué)生的觀點、男生的觀點、女生的觀點)。亮點說明:這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文,很好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù),語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣,準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài),主謂一致,在文中使用了時間狀語從句,定語從句,特別使用一些亮點詞句,如have fun,in order to,as for,in my opinion等。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系,增加上下文意思連貫,句子通順,行文連貫。7.假如你是李華,你們學(xué)校準(zhǔn)備組織學(xué)生本周五去北京世園會參觀。你打算邀請外教 Peter參加。請用英語寫一封電子郵件,告訴他集合的時間和地點,在那里可以做什么,以及參觀時需要準(zhǔn)備什么。提示詞語: school gate, nature, culture, food and drink提示問題: ●When and where are you going to meet?●What are you going to do there?●What do you advise Peter to prepare for the visit?Dear Pete,How is it going?I am writing to invite you to visit Beijing International Hort