【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 擾。上周末，他本來和Lingling相約一起去電影院看電影，但是他卻因為在家復(fù)習(xí)考試，把這件事忘了，直到第二天才想起來。因此，Lingling很生氣，并且不愿接受Daming的道歉。請你就此事給校報投稿，以“The Importance of Promise”為題，內(nèi)容要點如下：簡述事件；談?wù)勛约旱目捶?，并給Daming一些建議。注意：詞數(shù)80—100；行文連貫，邏輯合理；文中不能出現(xiàn)真實的校名和人名； 文章的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。The Importance of PromiseDear editor,People always emphasize（強(qiáng)調(diào)） the importance of the promise, and they hate people who break their promise. Promise is very important. Everyone should keep it. Yours,Tony【答案】The Importance of PromiseDear editor,People always emphasize（強(qiáng)調(diào)）the importance of the promise, and they hate people who break their promise.Recently, a thing happened to my friend, and I think it was really his fault. Last weekend, my friend Daming had a date with his friend Lingling to watch a movie. But he totally forgot it that day because of his review for his exam. So Lingling got too angry to forgive him. In my opinion, it was really his fault. Forgetting the date not only led to Lingling’s anger, but also made her lose trust in him. Keeping promises is always the traditional virtue of the Chinese nation. What Daming should do now is to ask for forgiveness and promise that he will never do that again.Promise is very important. Everyone should keep it. Yours,Tony【解析】【分析】本文為一篇稿件，需要學(xué)生通過大明和玲玲之間，大明沒有信守承諾的事情，談自己的看法。信守承諾是中華民族的傳統(tǒng)美德，在寫作過程中，注意文章結(jié)構(gòu)，先寫出大明和玲玲之間的事情，然后再說自己對此的看法?！驹斀狻渴紫?，第一句話直接點明作者的觀點，大明是犯錯了的。然后仔細(xì)闡述了事情發(fā)生的經(jīng)過。接下來說出自己對此事件的看法，不信守承諾會導(dǎo)致失去別人的信任，對大明的建議是除了認(rèn)錯之外，還需要再次保證永不再犯?！军c睛】文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，符合邏輯，先表明自己觀點，然后闡述事情，提出自己的觀點和建議。整篇文章在謀篇布局上，比較嚴(yán)密。除此之外，中間也使用了一些連接詞，例如but，so，because of等，使文章更加通順。6．近來，美國總統(tǒng)特朗普的外孫女由于說一口流利的中文而成為“網(wǎng)紅”。你的美國朋友Sam 看過相關(guān)報道之后也很想學(xué)好中文,但是不知道該怎樣做。假如你是大明，請你根據(jù)以下提示寫一封郵件給他,提一些關(guān)于如何學(xué)好漢語的建議。要點提示 :,做好筆記。,與同學(xué)們用中文交流。、報紙等,在網(wǎng)上看一些中文語言類節(jié)目。注意 :。,以使行文連貫。,不計人總詞數(shù)。Dear Sam ,I39。m happy to hear from you. I know you want to learn Chinese well. Here are some suggestions._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________In a word,if you have good ways of learning Chinese ,you will learn it well.YoursDaming【答案】Dear Sam,I39。m happy to hear from know you want to learn Chinese are some suggestions.First, you should listen to the teacher and take notes carefully in class. Second, it39。s a good idea to talk with your classmates in Chinese. And don39。t be afraid of making mistakes. Third, you39。d better read Chinese magazines or newspapers after class. You can also watch Chinese programmes on the Internet. I think it can help you to improve your pronunciation. Lastly, you can write s to me or other Chinese friends in Chinese.In a word, if you have good ways of learning Chinese, you will learn it well.Yours,Daming【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以大明的身份給Sam寫一封信，告訴他如何學(xué)好漢語，題目中從四個方面提出了建議。通過審題可知，這是要求寫一封建議信，內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括以下幾個方面：首先應(yīng)和Sam先做一個交流，然后引出寫信的目的；接下來給出具體的建議，依據(jù)題目中給出的這四條，用正確的英語表達(dá)出來，還應(yīng)注意補(bǔ)充一些內(nèi)容，使文章更加充實；最后寫一個適當(dāng)?shù)慕Y(jié)尾，如希望建議對你有幫助等。文章應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在時，根據(jù)表達(dá)需要使用恰當(dāng)?shù)娜朔Q。寫作時應(yīng)注意英語表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語的不同，不能按照漢語的思維逐詞翻譯，寫漢語式的英語。應(yīng)從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)考慮，寫完整的句子。如可以較常見的主謂賓結(jié)構(gòu)或主系表結(jié)構(gòu)為主，簡單句的句型可以使文章敘述清楚、簡潔。為提升文章檔次，可以穿插使用并列句或復(fù)合句以及其他一些復(fù)雜句式。語句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文章意思連貫，表達(dá)流暢?！军c睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求給Sam寫了一封信，對他的漢語學(xué)習(xí)提出了一些好的建議。首先短文內(nèi)容完整，包括了題目中要求的所有信息。文章主要分成三個部分：第一段是與Sam之間的問候以及引出Sam學(xué)習(xí)漢語這一話題，并介紹寫信的目的；第二段中是提出的具體的建議，這是這篇文章的主體，所在篇幅最大。這一段中使用了First，Second，Third，lastly等詞，敘述條理、有層次；最后一段用一句話對整篇文章做了總結(jié)。其次短文使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱，句式結(jié)構(gòu)符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。語法規(guī)范、準(zhǔn)確，用詞得體