【正文】 （2）To do voluntary labor is a good chance for them to learn how to do difficult work. 做義務(wù)勞動是他們學(xué)習(xí)如何做困難工作的好機(jī)會。 生詞提示：respect尊重【答案】A strong argument has taken place among students since our school made students do voluntary labor.Some students think it is a good way of education. Now most families have only one child. They never do hard work. To do voluntary labor is a good chance for them to learn how to do difficult work. It can also help them understand and respect the cleaners.But others have different points. They think it is easy for them to get sick. They don’t think it is students＇jobs. Cleaning the classroom every day is enough.【解析】【詳解】閱讀題干要求，這是一篇看法類的作文，那么首先得點(diǎn)明討論的話題，然后分別寫出不同人群對此事的看法，時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。 不同意：1．很臟，容易使學(xué)生生病。 這件事在學(xué)生中引 起了強(qiáng)烈的反響，請你把下列不同意見整理成一篇書面材料，報(bào)告給學(xué)校。我將給你介紹《游子吟》（Song of the parting son）這首詩?！驹斀狻扛鶕?jù)內(nèi)容可知，這是一篇書信類文章。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料?！军c(diǎn)睛】寫作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。Hello!Dear Amy, thank you for caring.Now I am working hard for the senior high school entrance examination. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________How about you? I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours Li Ming【答案】例文Hello!Dear Amy, thank you for caring.Now I am working hard for the senior high school entrance examination. I have got good results in most of my subjects, but I am not happy with myself. I think I must spend more time on my studies.My parents are really strict with me. However, they care for me as well. Once upon a time, I failed in my physics exam and felt stressed and sad. They had a close munication with me and helped me solve my problems and cheer up again.My teachers are also ready to help us. They hope that we can realize our dreams. They tell us to try our best and not to give up. Life is always full of ups and downs. It39。他們希望你們實(shí)現(xiàn)自己的理想。要點(diǎn)如下： （1）. 雖然你大部分功課你都學(xué)得比較好，但是你對自己不滿意。承接文章開頭，句意完整，避免漢語式英語，敘述條理清晰。寫作要求：，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮使行文連貫； ，字跡工整，詞數(shù)不少于80；，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；。但既然選擇了遠(yuǎn)方，便只顧風(fēng)雨兼程。文章中的語句以簡單句結(jié)構(gòu)為主，也使用了并列句和復(fù)合句，調(diào)整了文章的結(jié)構(gòu)。文章主要分成三個(gè)部分：第一段是與Sam之間的問候以及引出Sam學(xué)習(xí)漢語這一話題，并介紹寫信的目的；第二段中是提出的具體的建議，這是這篇文章的主體，所在篇幅最大。為提升文章檔次，可以穿插使用并列句或復(fù)合句以及其他一些復(fù)雜句式。文章應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，根據(jù)表達(dá)需要使用恰當(dāng)?shù)娜朔Q。s a good idea to talk with your classmates in Chinese. And don39。,不計(jì)人總詞數(shù)。假如你是大明，請你根據(jù)以下提示寫一封郵件給他,提一些關(guān)于如何學(xué)好漢語的建議。整篇文章在謀篇布局上，比較嚴(yán)密?！驹斀狻渴紫龋谝痪湓捴苯狱c(diǎn)明作者的觀點(diǎn)，大明是犯錯(cuò)了的。請你就此事給校報(bào)投稿，以“The Importance of Promise”為題，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：簡述事件；談?wù)勛约旱目捶?，并給Daming一些建議。5． 誠信是中華民族的傳統(tǒng)美德，也是社會主義核心價(jià)值觀內(nèi)容之一。s more, when on a bus, we actively give our seats to the people in need./ All in all, we will try our best to do what we can to make ourselves and Zibo city more ，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使語言表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)。s more, when on a bus, we actively give our seats to the people in need.Besides, we have formed a good habit of throwing rubbish into a dustbin, never littering anywhere. Furthermore（而且）, we are accustomed to （習(xí)慣于）queuing up （排隊(duì)） for a ticket or something else. All in all, we will try our best to do what we can to make ourselves and Zibo city more civilized【解析】亮點(diǎn)說明：這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。”自創(chuàng)建文明城市文明鄉(xiāng)村以來,淄博人民萬眾一心,眾 志成城,讓人點(diǎn)贊的行為隨處可見。（I think ???；try one39。（3）要點(diǎn)齊全，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。3． 最近一份學(xué)生體質(zhì)健康調(diào)查結(jié)果顯示，學(xué)生近視率仍維持在高位水平，且越來越低齡化。寫作中要注意使用祈使句，使上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，表達(dá)具有條理性。時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。 don39。According to a survey carried out by WHO, the number of teenagers who are nearsighted is the largest in 【答案】According to a survey carried out by WHO, the number of teenagers who are nearsighted is