【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 寫(xiě)中秋節(jié)的時(shí)間、傳統(tǒng)習(xí)俗及慶祝方式，第二部分寫(xiě)我最期待的活動(dòng)。亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如get together，enjoy the full moon， share our stories等。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，句子通順，行文連貫。8．（北京初三）題目1： 假如你是李華，你們班打算去“希望之家（Hope House）”孤兒院做志愿服務(wù)，你打算邀請(qǐng)你們學(xué)校的留學(xué)生Peter參加這次活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)給他寫(xiě)一封電子郵件，告訴他集合的時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)，你們將在孤兒院做什么，以及他可以做什么準(zhǔn)備。提示詞語(yǔ)：gate，play，tell stories，gift提示問(wèn)題：．When and where will you meet?．What will you do there?．What do you advise Peter to prepare for the activity 【答案】例文How is it going?I am writing to invite you to take part in the volunteer activity at the Hope House. We will meet at the school gate at eight this Sunday morning. We will play games with the children and tell them some interesting stories.We will also give them some gifts. Would you like to tell the children something about your hometown? You can prepare some photos and videos to show.I am sure we will have an unforgettable time at the Hope House.I am looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】本文是一篇邀請(qǐng)信，注意邀請(qǐng)信的格式，開(kāi)頭問(wèn)候，中間部分說(shuō)正事，最后詢問(wèn)他的回答。本材料給的提示比較多，學(xué)生可以按照提示，進(jìn)行問(wèn)題的回答即可。注意把相關(guān)內(nèi)容用連接詞連接起來(lái)，使文章通順?！驹斀狻课恼聻檠?qǐng)信，開(kāi)頭問(wèn)候，點(diǎn)明寫(xiě)信內(nèi)容，寫(xiě)信是為了邀請(qǐng)你和我們一起參加希望之家的志愿活動(dòng)。我們將會(huì)在周日8點(diǎn)在校門口集合，主要活動(dòng)有和孩子們玩耍，講故事，贈(zèng)送禮物等。同時(shí)，建議對(duì)方做一些事情，可以向孩子們展示一下你的家鄉(xiāng)。希望你能和我們一起參加。【點(diǎn)睛】本書(shū)面表達(dá)：這篇文章語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，敘事清楚，時(shí)態(tài)運(yùn)用正確，敘述清楚，語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，文章具有條理性，思維縝密。（1）學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理。（2）列好提綱和要點(diǎn)及需要的重要短語(yǔ)或句型。（3）切忌堆砌詞語(yǔ)、句子，注意運(yùn)用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞使句子流暢、連貫。注意表達(dá)的順序。（4）注意書(shū)寫(xiě)的規(guī)范：大小寫(xiě)、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)等的正確運(yùn)用。（5）注意檢查：?jiǎn)卧~拼寫(xiě)、語(yǔ)法、動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)序、主謂一致等。9．（徐州市西苑中學(xué)中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)一日之計(jì)在于晨。同學(xué)們，沐浴在晨光中，行走在上學(xué)路上，當(dāng)我們有充足的時(shí)間安排一天的學(xué)習(xí)生活時(shí)，你會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)每天早起一點(diǎn)點(diǎn)會(huì)給我們帶來(lái)許多好處。請(qǐng)你以“ It’s good to get up early”為題，寫(xiě)一篇90詞左右短文。要求：1. 包含所給信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2. 語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，書(shū)寫(xiě)整潔。3. 詞數(shù)90詞左右。開(kāi)頭已給，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。It’s good to get up earlyGetting up early is a good habit. It’s good for us in many ways.______________________________________________________________________________【答案】It’s good to get up earlyGetting up early is a good habit. It’s good for us in many ways. Firstly ,we can have enough time to plan a day better .Secondly,doing exercise is good for our health .Also, breathing the fresh air is good to our bodies and our moods, and it can help remember important things easily. Thirdly, having breakfast can help protect our stomachs ,make us have good health ,and have more energy to do all kinds of things better. In a word, the morning is the key of a day. Everyone should get up early every day.【解析】【詳解】本文是一篇話題作文。要求以“ It’s good to get up early”為題，寫(xiě)一篇90詞左右短文。文章時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱主要為第一人稱。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，考生要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。在寫(xiě)作時(shí)，注意緊扣主題，連句成篇，要層次清楚，要點(diǎn)分明，中心突出。同時(shí)要注意語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫(xiě)太長(zhǎng)的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡(jiǎn)單的易拼寫(xiě)的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無(wú)誤?！军c(diǎn)睛】點(diǎn)睛：首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作，在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過(guò)渡，必要時(shí)可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞，使文章過(guò)渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；最后，要仔細(xì)檢查有無(wú)單詞拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)誤用等，還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言，大小寫(xiě)是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。10．（廣西中考模擬）近幾年來(lái)，一些學(xué)校開(kāi)設(shè)了一些興趣班（interest classes）或特色課（special classes）, 諸如烹飪課、手工制作課以及傳統(tǒng)戲曲課等。你校校園網(wǎng)就你們學(xué)校開(kāi)設(shè)此類課程的必要性廣泛征求同學(xué)們的意見(jiàn)。以下是你們班同學(xué)的觀點(diǎn)和理由。請(qǐng)就此并結(jié)合你自己的想法用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文，發(fā)表在校園網(wǎng)的英語(yǔ)論壇上。觀點(diǎn)理由一些學(xué)生有必要1. 培養(yǎng)興趣, 并獲得更多的知識(shí)；2. 提高生活技能另一些學(xué)生沒(méi)有必要1. 浪費(fèi)時(shí)間，對(duì)學(xué)習(xí)沒(méi)有幫助； 2. 給學(xué)生帶來(lái)很多壓力你……提示語(yǔ)：develop one’s interests。 get more knowledge。 improve one’s life skills。 a wasteof time。 cause a lot of stress要求：1. 短文應(yīng)包括表格中的信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名和校名；3. 詞數(shù)80左右。開(kāi)頭已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Recently some schools offer their students some interest classes or special classes such as cooking classes, handcraft classes, traditional opera classes and so on.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thank you!【答案】Recently some schools offer their students some interest classes or special classes such as cooking classes, handcraft classes, traditional opera classes and so on.Is it necessary to offer these classes? We had a discussion in our class. Some students think it’s really necessary to do it. First, it’s good for students to develop their interests. And interests can make them get more knowledge. Second, these classes are helpful for them to improve their life skills. These skills are useful for young students.However, others have different opinions. They don’t think it’s so necessary. They think it’s a waste of time and it’s not helpful for their study. And these activities can cause a lot of stress for children.In my opinion, it’s a good idea to offer these classes. They are not only good for our study but also for our growing.Thank you!【解析】【詳解】這是一篇話題作文，并且已給出了內(nèi)容提示，所以我們?cè)趯?xiě)作時(shí)要圍繞所給內(nèi)容提示展開(kāi)。 根據(jù)作文要求，可以確定文章的時(shí)態(tài)是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。 在表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)時(shí)通常會(huì)用到例如：I think, in one’s opinion 等引出觀點(diǎn)的詞語(yǔ)。另外，可以用到first, second, third, finally 等一一列出觀點(diǎn)，使文章更有條理，次序?！军c(diǎn)睛】這是一篇比較優(yōu)秀的作文。首先內(nèi)容完整，第一段擺出事實(shí)，第二段說(shuō)明別人的的觀點(diǎn)，最后說(shuō)出自己的觀點(diǎn)，在表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)時(shí)有條理有次序。 短文中使用了一些很好的詞及短語(yǔ)，例如such as，and so on，However等使句子更有連貫性，及好的句型表達(dá)，例如：Second, these classes are helpful for them to improve their life skills. They think it’s a waste of time and it’s not helpful for their study等。11．（山東中考模擬） 書(shū)面表達(dá) 你的的筆友Tom居住在北京，請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格中提供的信息，介紹一下他的情況。（80詞左右）時(shí)間來(lái)到中國(guó)已經(jīng)兩年了，在北京工作。旅游曾經(jīng)去過(guò)長(zhǎng)城，故宮等名勝。喜好過(guò)去喜歡看科幻小說(shuō)，現(xiàn)在對(duì)中國(guó)古典書(shū)籍很感興趣，已經(jīng)讀完了2本名著。工作情況早晨8點(diǎn)起床，乘坐地鐵去上班，空余時(shí)間練習(xí)漢語(yǔ)。夢(mèng)想去很多不同的地方，了解中國(guó)文化，品嘗中國(guó)美食。I have a pen friend named Tom. 【答案】I have a pen friend named Tom. It has been two years since he came to China and worked in Beijing. And he has been to the Great Wall, the Forbidden City and other places of interest. He used to like to read science fictions. Now he is very interested in Chinese