【文章內容簡介】 之間的過渡，要仔細檢查有無單詞拼寫錯誤、標點符號誤用等，還要檢查語法結構是否合理，有無重復、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，詞數是否符合要求。8．（山西中考模擬）書面表達請將作文寫在答題卡相應的位置上。在家庭生活中，我們會做很多關于我們青少年的決定，比如該買什么新年衣服，該怎樣慶祝生日，該上哪所學校等。你認為在我們自己的事情上應該自己做決定，還是聽從家長的意見？針對這一話題，九年級七班的同學們展開了辯論。假設你是正方或反方的一員，請圍繞你的觀點，結合自身的親身經歷，說出2至3條理由來支持你的觀點。（只能選擇一方觀點表達。）要求：1. 詞數不少于80詞； 2. 文章的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數。【答案】One possible version：At home, I think teenagers should make their own choices. Learning to make our own choices can help us to be more independent.After I entered junior high school, I made every choice on my study, from which reference books to buy to how to plan time for study. Unlike other students, I didn’t need my parents to be with me when I was studying. With the development of this learning habit, I soon realized that I could do better in study than other classmates who often depended on teachers and parents. Before making every choice, I carefully considered the advantages and disadvantages of my actions and in that way, I grew up independently.There is no wonder that we will grow up some day and live on our own. Although parents undoubtedly care about us, we still need to make our own decisions when it es to our personal things. Everyone needs to learn to grow up to get prepared for future life.【解析】這篇作文要求我們寫一篇議論文，論點是：在我們自己的事情上，我們應該自己做決定，還是由家長來做決定。關于這個話題每個人都會有自己的看法，題目要求我們任選一個觀點來講述，并結合自己的親身經歷，給出2到3個理由。寫作之前，我們應先從正方和反方中選擇一個，作為自己的觀點，然后圍繞這一觀點闡述自己的理由。這是一篇話題作文，題目中并沒有給我們規(guī)定具體的寫作內容，我們應發(fā)揮自己的想象力，結合自己的日常生活來組織語言，豐富文章的內容。寫作時還應注意的是語言的表達，英語的表達習慣和漢語是不同的，我們不能按照漢語思維，逐詞翻譯，而是從句子的整體考慮，使用恰當的詞匯和句型，多用簡單句，如主謂賓、主系表的結構，點綴幾個復合句或并列句，調整文章節(jié)奏，讓文章的句子富于變化，有新鮮感。高級句型或詞匯的使用也可以提升文章的檔次，在語句之間使用恰當的連接成分，使文意表達連貫、流暢。點睛：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。首先短文內容完整，觀點明確，結構合理。短文作者選擇了正方的觀點，第一句話先點明自己的觀點是什么，接下來圍繞這一觀點進行闡述，并從自己的經歷出發(fā)，闡述了自己持有這一觀點的理由，充分、合理，有說服力。最后一段作者重申自己的觀點，并進行了總結。其次短文中使用了正確的時態(tài)、人稱，文章以一般現在時態(tài)和一般過去時態(tài)為主，謂語動詞形式準確，語法規(guī)范。句式表達符合英語的表達習慣，簡單句為主，也使用了較多的復合句和高級句型，如狀語從句、賓語從句、定語從句、非謂語動詞等。有些句子較長，是由于使用高級句型所致，一味使用較長的句子也會導致文章的冗長，讓讀者感覺比較累，因此要注意調整文章的節(jié)奏。短文中較好的句型和短語有Learning to make our own choices can help us to be more independent.、After I entered junior high school, I made every choice on my study, from which reference books to buy to how to plan time for study.、Before making every choice, I carefully considered the advantages and disadvantages of my actions and in that way, I grew up independently.、There is no wonder that we will grow up some day and live on our own. 、Although parents undoubtedly care about us, we still need to make our own decisions when it es to our personal 。9．（北京中考模擬）“友善”是一種美德，它猶如陽光和雨露照耀并滋潤著美德的形成。同學們，請奉獻你的友善，為創(chuàng)建和諧社會做出貢獻。某英文網站正在開展以“友善待人、快樂生活”為主題的征文活動。假如你是李華，請用英語寫一篇短文投稿，談談生活中你對他人提供善意幫助的經歷。主要內容包括:你對友善行為的認識和理解，你平時做哪些友善的事情，以及你這樣做的美好愿望。提示詞語:kind，politely, trouble, offer, proud，society提示問題:What do you think of showing kindness to others?How do you help them kindly in your daily life?What do you dream about being kind to them?It39。s our duty to show kindness to others around us. _________________________________________________【答案】It’s our duty to show kindness to others around us. I think everyone should be kind to each other. When someone is in trouble, we’ll give a hand politely. In our munity, I try my best to help the neighbors and take care of the old people at weekends as a volunteer. At school, I get on well with my classmates and help them with their lessons. I also send my books and clothes to the children who live in poor areas. I’m very proud I have made many friends by helping others in need.I believe our society will bee better and better if everyone shows kindness to each other.【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話題作文，談談生活中你對他人提供善意幫助的經歷。根據要表達的內容確定并準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當增加內容。亮點說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務，語言表達符合英語習慣，準確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點詞句，如be kind to, each other, be in trouble, give a hand, try one’s best to do, take care of, get on well with, help sb with等。增強邏輯關系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準確，句子通順，行文連貫。10．（山西中考模擬）書面表達請將短文寫在答題卡相應的位置上。學會分享很重要。你有哪些東西要分享？可采取哪些方式分享？請結合自身的一次經歷，寫一篇短文，并闡述分享的意義。要求： 80；2．文中不得出現真實的人名、校名。【答案】It39。s very important to learn to share with each have many things to share in different example，I can share some beautiful pictures，my favorite music，different ideas with others face to face or by ， which are widely I39。d like to share one of my unforgettable experiences with you.Emily was lonely and I found her crying alone for some made me worried about her，so I hoped to cheer her first，I tried to share my favorite books and chatted with her on study after we knew each other better，I began to talk more about my everyday life with time went by，she gradually opened her heart and became used to sharing her feelings with we are good friends.In a word，sharing is not only interesting but also helpful and it makes us grow can learn a lot from sharing and enjoy our lives more.【解析】本文屬于話題作文，結合自身的一次經歷，闡述分享的意義。根據要表達的內容確定并準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當增加內容?！玖咙c說明】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務，語言表達符合英語習慣，準確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別適用一些亮點詞句，如share with，in different ways, for example, face to face, one of +形容詞最高級+名詞復數，make sb+形容詞，chat with， as time goes by, gradually, in a word, not only...but also...等。增強邏輯關系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準確，句子通順，行文連貫。點睛：寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起：認真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達的關鍵。審題時要注意試題的要求，抓住要點，詞數符合要求。構思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據提綱和主題確定相關的寫作材料。通常書面表達給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內容要求學生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當的素材也是使短文中心突出、明確的關鍵。初寫短文。一切都準備就緒，就可以動筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時還要注意使用恰當的連詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤色。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外，還要檢查語法結構是否合理，有無重復、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數是否符合要求等。11．（福建中考模擬）親愛的初三同學，考試來臨，畢業(yè)在即，你遇到了人生路上的轉折點，你的生活、學習平添了一些煩惱和壓力。當前正確面對煩惱，有效緩解心理壓力非常重要。請以＂How to solve our stress＂為題寫一篇90詞左右的短文，談談你在生活、學習方面的煩惱和壓力，以及要如何面對困難，解決問題的方法。開頭已給出，不計入總詞數。要求：內容完整；書寫規(guī)范；語法準確；語句通順連貫。 參考詞：stress（壓力），nervous，sleep，time，healthy，smile，sports，help How to solve our stressThe entrance examination is ing. We will graduate soon. We all have some problems and stress in our lives these 【答案】How to solve our stress?The entrance examination is ing .We will graduate soon . We all have some problems and stress in our lives these days. How should w