【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 之間的過渡，要仔細(xì)檢查有無單詞拼寫錯(cuò)誤、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號誤用等，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求。8．（山西中考模擬）書面表達(dá)請將作文寫在答題卡相應(yīng)的位置上。在家庭生活中，我們會做很多關(guān)于我們青少年的決定，比如該買什么新年衣服，該怎樣慶祝生日，該上哪所學(xué)校等。你認(rèn)為在我們自己的事情上應(yīng)該自己做決定，還是聽從家長的意見？針對這一話題，九年級七班的同學(xué)們展開了辯論。假設(shè)你是正方或反方的一員，請圍繞你的觀點(diǎn)，結(jié)合自身的親身經(jīng)歷，說出2至3條理由來支持你的觀點(diǎn)。（只能選擇一方觀點(diǎn)表達(dá)。）要求：1. 詞數(shù)不少于80詞； 2. 文章的開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。【答案】One possible version：At home, I think teenagers should make their own choices. Learning to make our own choices can help us to be more independent.After I entered junior high school, I made every choice on my study, from which reference books to buy to how to plan time for study. Unlike other students, I didn’t need my parents to be with me when I was studying. With the development of this learning habit, I soon realized that I could do better in study than other classmates who often depended on teachers and parents. Before making every choice, I carefully considered the advantages and disadvantages of my actions and in that way, I grew up independently.There is no wonder that we will grow up some day and live on our own. Although parents undoubtedly care about us, we still need to make our own decisions when it es to our personal things. Everyone needs to learn to grow up to get prepared for future life.【解析】這篇作文要求我們寫一篇議論文，論點(diǎn)是：在我們自己的事情上，我們應(yīng)該自己做決定，還是由家長來做決定。關(guān)于這個(gè)話題每個(gè)人都會有自己的看法，題目要求我們?nèi)芜x一個(gè)觀點(diǎn)來講述，并結(jié)合自己的親身經(jīng)歷，給出2到3個(gè)理由。寫作之前，我們應(yīng)先從正方和反方中選擇一個(gè)，作為自己的觀點(diǎn)，然后圍繞這一觀點(diǎn)闡述自己的理由。這是一篇話題作文，題目中并沒有給我們規(guī)定具體的寫作內(nèi)容，我們應(yīng)發(fā)揮自己的想象力，結(jié)合自己的日常生活來組織語言，豐富文章的內(nèi)容。寫作時(shí)還應(yīng)注意的是語言的表達(dá)，英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語是不同的，我們不能按照漢語思維，逐詞翻譯，而是從句子的整體考慮，使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯和句型，多用簡單句，如主謂賓、主系表的結(jié)構(gòu)，點(diǎn)綴幾個(gè)復(fù)合句或并列句，調(diào)整文章節(jié)奏，讓文章的句子富于變化，有新鮮感。高級句型或詞匯的使用也可以提升文章的檔次，在語句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文意表達(dá)連貫、流暢。點(diǎn)睛：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。首先短文內(nèi)容完整，觀點(diǎn)明確，結(jié)構(gòu)合理。短文作者選擇了正方的觀點(diǎn)，第一句話先點(diǎn)明自己的觀點(diǎn)是什么，接下來圍繞這一觀點(diǎn)進(jìn)行闡述，并從自己的經(jīng)歷出發(fā)，闡述了自己持有這一觀點(diǎn)的理由，充分、合理，有說服力。最后一段作者重申自己的觀點(diǎn)，并進(jìn)行了總結(jié)。其次短文中使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)、人稱，文章以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)和一般過去時(shí)態(tài)為主，謂語動詞形式準(zhǔn)確，語法規(guī)范。句式表達(dá)符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣，簡單句為主，也使用了較多的復(fù)合句和高級句型，如狀語從句、賓語從句、定語從句、非謂語動詞等。有些句子較長，是由于使用高級句型所致，一味使用較長的句子也會導(dǎo)致文章的冗長，讓讀者感覺比較累，因此要注意調(diào)整文章的節(jié)奏。短文中較好的句型和短語有Learning to make our own choices can help us to be more independent.、After I entered junior high school, I made every choice on my study, from which reference books to buy to how to plan time for study.、Before making every choice, I carefully considered the advantages and disadvantages of my actions and in that way, I grew up independently.、There is no wonder that we will grow up some day and live on our own. 、Although parents undoubtedly care about us, we still need to make our own decisions when it es to our personal 。9．（北京中考模擬）“友善”是一種美德，它猶如陽光和雨露照耀并滋潤著美德的形成。同學(xué)們，請奉獻(xiàn)你的友善，為創(chuàng)建和諧社會做出貢獻(xiàn)。某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展以“友善待人、快樂生活”為主題的征文活動。假如你是李華，請用英語寫一篇短文投稿，談?wù)勆钪心銓λ颂峁┥埔鈳椭慕?jīng)歷。主要內(nèi)容包括:你對友善行為的認(rèn)識和理解，你平時(shí)做哪些友善的事情，以及你這樣做的美好愿望。提示詞語:kind，politely, trouble, offer, proud，society提示問題:What do you think of showing kindness to others?How do you help them kindly in your daily life?What do you dream about being kind to them?It39。s our duty to show kindness to others around us. _________________________________________________【答案】It’s our duty to show kindness to others around us. I think everyone should be kind to each other. When someone is in trouble, we’ll give a hand politely. In our munity, I try my best to help the neighbors and take care of the old people at weekends as a volunteer. At school, I get on well with my classmates and help them with their lessons. I also send my books and clothes to the children who live in poor areas. I’m very proud I have made many friends by helping others in need.I believe our society will bee better and better if everyone shows kindness to each other.【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話題作文，談?wù)勆钪心銓λ颂峁┥埔鈳椭慕?jīng)歷。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。亮點(diǎn)說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如be kind to, each other, be in trouble, give a hand, try one’s best to do, take care of, get on well with, help sb with等。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。10．（山西中考模擬）書面表達(dá)請將短文寫在答題卡相應(yīng)的位置上。學(xué)會分享很重要。你有哪些東西要分享？可采取哪些方式分享？請結(jié)合自身的一次經(jīng)歷，寫一篇短文，并闡述分享的意義。要求： 80；2．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名?！敬鸢浮縄t39。s very important to learn to share with each have many things to share in different example，I can share some beautiful pictures，my favorite music，different ideas with others face to face or by ， which are widely I39。d like to share one of my unforgettable experiences with you.Emily was lonely and I found her crying alone for some made me worried about her，so I hoped to cheer her first，I tried to share my favorite books and chatted with her on study after we knew each other better，I began to talk more about my everyday life with time went by，she gradually opened her heart and became used to sharing her feelings with we are good friends.In a word，sharing is not only interesting but also helpful and it makes us grow can learn a lot from sharing and enjoy our lives more.【解析】本文屬于話題作文，結(jié)合自身的一次經(jīng)歷，闡述分享的意義。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容?！玖咙c(diǎn)說明】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別適用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如share with，in different ways, for example, face to face, one of +形容詞最高級+名詞復(fù)數(shù)，make sb+形容詞，chat with， as time goes by, gradually, in a word, not only...but also...等。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。點(diǎn)睛：寫作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。通常書面表達(dá)給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。初寫短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤色。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。11．（福建中考模擬）親愛的初三同學(xué)，考試來臨，畢業(yè)在即，你遇到了人生路上的轉(zhuǎn)折點(diǎn)，你的生活、學(xué)習(xí)平添了一些煩惱和壓力。當(dāng)前正確面對煩惱，有效緩解心理壓力非常重要。請以＂How to solve our stress＂為題寫一篇90詞左右的短文，談?wù)勀阍谏?、學(xué)習(xí)方面的煩惱和壓力，以及要如何面對困難，解決問題的方法。開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。要求：內(nèi)容完整；書寫規(guī)范；語法準(zhǔn)確；語句通順連貫。 參考詞：stress（壓力），nervous，sleep，time，healthy，smile，sports，help How to solve our stressThe entrance examination is ing. We will graduate soon. We all have some problems and stress in our lives these 【答案】How to solve our stress?The entrance examination is ing .We will graduate soon . We all have some problems and stress in our lives these days. How should w