【正文】 al style is characterized by vocabularies ranging from formal to colloquial but mostly general, and occasional and clipped words.Different style are used to address different audiences and on different occasions.Chinglish: it refers to the unidiomatic use of English by Chinese speakerAvoid literal translationchinglishdiomaticBig filmblockbusterEarly lovePuppy loveConvenient noodlesInstant noodlesFist productKnockout productOne sex goodsDisposable goodsGrasp the connotation請幫我們(宣傳)一下這個新產(chǎn)品。 the clause that cannot be used alone is called dependent clause ,and the word used to connect them and indicated relationship is called subordinator.Subordination vs. coordinationSimilarity: they both bine two clause into one sentenceDifference: The two clauses in coordinate sentence can be used indecently, because their meanings are plete。 she is afraid he might get hurt. 2 the semicolon is used to separate a series of items which containFor example, professor Zhao, Dean of the Normal College。The invention brought him fame。 suitable for the explanation of views and theories, or the description of things with many details.2 By varying the pattern: by sentence patterns, we mean sentence of different functions and structuresA Avoid strings of brief and simple sentenceB Avoid too many pound sentence.Sentence function: declarative .interrogative imperative exclamatoryGrammatical structure。 Individualistic should be replaced by selfishnessGrammarPronouns1Subjective vs. objectiveSubjective: I she you he it who whom theyObjective: me her you his whom whose them its2Singular vs. plural3Point of view is used to describe the perspective in writing.Unit 3 the Better WordFocusConciseness (Brevity is the soul of wit. )Tip: 1 eliminate or expression rewrite that repeat the same point2cut out unnecessary intensifiers3avoid overusing the noun forms of verbs4change phrase into single words5 change unnecessary “that, who and which” clause into phrases.Notice: redundancy is not always easy to spot. the best way is to proofread your writing carefully and try to find words, phrases or even sentence that are not essential.Preciseness：The concreteness of expressionGeneral words convey inexact intangible and often abstract concepts whereas specific words provide precise, sensory or concrete details. For example: it was fine last weekend, so we went to the countryside and had a good time. We saw many things and people there. And we had a wonderful time.Improved: It was a wonderful and relaxed weekend, we drive our private and spacious car to the countryside, there we were a enjoyable and relax time. We saw so many people who wearied plain and simple clothes and there are so much interesting tings like assembly and folk dance. We’re weled by passionate villager and had delicious dinner with them. That was really a memorable and wonderful time.EffectivenessSentence Base Unit 4FocusThe sentence base, which is like the trunk of a tree, consists of at least one subject and one verb.Subject: to choose a good subject is the first crucial step in sentence writing, tell us who or what is responsible for an action, feelings, and state or process.Position of the subject: The subject is usually, through not always ,put at the beginning of a sentence.The subject of a declarative sentence a sentence that makes a statement – usually precedes the verb .but in one situation , it follows the verb,( In the center of the painting stands a lady in white. )Voice: the voice of a verb depends on the relation between the verb and its subject. when the subject acts, the verb is in the active voice。(2)由neither…nor not only…but also連接的并列結(jié)構(gòu)作主語，隨后動詞形式常遵循就近原則。Adjectives形容詞修飾名詞的順序為：限定詞數(shù)詞描繪詞（大小，長短，形狀，新舊，顏色）出處材料性質(zhì)類別名詞。 the middle the last.2 When we shift the order, we create a certain emphatic effect , other elements such as attributes and adverbials are usually placed close to what they modify.The second strat