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es) Picture 1 help…with… help classmates with lessons 我的 I often help classmates with lessons. ? ? 看圖 Picture 2 help…cross… “愛心”表現(xiàn) (examples) 看圖 ? help old people cross the road ? I help old people cross the road on my way home. Picture 3 “愛心”表現(xiàn) (examples) 看圖 give my seat to… ? give my seat to people in need ? I often give my seat to people in need on a bus. “愛心”表現(xiàn) (examples) 看圖 Picture 4 clean up the park ? help clean up the park ? I often help clean up the park. “愛心”表現(xiàn) (examples) 1. I often help classmates with lessons. 2. I help old people cross the road on my way home. 3. I often give my seat to people in need on a bus. 4. I often help clean up the park. Conclusion I’ll be glad if I can join the club. I hope you will agree with me. Dear Chairperson, I am a boy student from Class1 Grade 9. I’d like to be a member of the Helping Hands Club. I am healthy. I work hard at my lessons. I like helping others I get on well with my classmates .If I join the club, I will be able to make more friends. Besides, I can do more for others. Yours Wang Lin I’ll be glad if I can join the club. I hope you will agree with me. and often help classmates with their lessons. On my way home, I often help old people cross the road. On a bus, I always give my seat to people in need. Sometimes, I help to clean up the park. 不但要點完整了,詞數(shù)也夠了。 寫作前: 確定 人稱、時態(tài) 寫作后: 檢查 另外 作文中書寫不規(guī)范,卷面不整潔也是要失分的(中考中有 的卷面整潔分 , 不能丟! )。 A She is very young. She can’t carry the heavy box. B She is too young to carry the heavy box. C She is so young that she can’t carry the … D She is not old enough to carry the… 方法三 :妙用關聯(lián)詞 Writing skills(“寫”的技巧) : and, as well as, both…and, what’s more not only…but also, neither…nor : or, either…or : but,however,although\though,after all,anyway : because, so, therefore,since,for,as a result : if , unless : instead, not…but, while, in the same way, on the one hand…on the other hand : for example, for instance, such as, that is to say, in other words,to tell the truth : to begin with, firstly, first (of all), second(ly), next, later, since then, from then on, finally, in the end : also, besides, especially, actually, in fact : all in all, altogether, in a word, generally speaking, in short 關聯(lián)詞 (connection words) Let’s try ? _____________ I am tired, I keep on working till midnight. ? He didn’t go to movies, he went to the concert ______. ? We like doing kinds of sports _____ swimming, running and hiking. ? _____, he stood up. Then he got out. _____, he went back. ____________, he smiled. Though\Although instead like First Next Finally\At last ? How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our report. ? According to it, a lot of people travel. And some people stay at home. They watch TV or surf the Inter. Also some other people visit friends or