【正文】 person Last Friday, my classmate John was absent because he suddenly caught a heavy flu and ran a high fever.（時間、人 物、事件交代清晰） After school, we three volunteer students, together with our class teacher went to see him. John stayed in bed and had a running nose. He told us that he was anxious about his studies. On hearing that, we promised him we would try our best to help. Therefore, in the following days, we arranged ourselves to teach him every day in turn, hoping to ensure that he would catch up with us when he came back to school.（條理 清楚，因果關(guān)系合乎邏輯，細節(jié)描寫恰到好處） In my opinion, no one is born to live alone. We should love, care and help each other. Moreover, friendship can help defeat difficulties more easily. As old saying goes, “A friend in need is a friend indeed.” It was such a group of true friends who melted my heart gently and deeply at one time. This autumn, I unfortunately came down with influenza because of not having well prepared for the chill. I kept feeling dizzy and had a headache acpanied with fever. My classmates and teachers tried to argue me into taking a good rest at home。 4. 介詞 , 代詞，非謂語動詞或形容詞副詞的不正確使用（對單詞的 詞性 要 熟悉 ）。一般從第一或第三人稱角度出發(fā)，表達自己或他人的經(jīng)歷或感受，使讀者對事情十分明了以獲得強烈感受。 姓名 王林 性別 男 本人特點 身體健康；學(xué)習刻苦；樂于助人；與同學(xué)友好相處 “愛心”表現(xiàn) （見圖片） 加入目的 1.… 2. … 例 要求： 1. 表達清楚 ， 語句通順 ， 意思連貫； 2. 要點須包括表格和四幅圖片中的信息 ，但不得使用真實姓名和校名等； 3. 表格中 “ 加入目的 ” 一欄內(nèi)容由考生自擬； 4. 詞數(shù)： 70左右 。 我們應(yīng)該保護環(huán)境。 A She is very young. She can’t carry the heavy box. B She is too young to carry the heavy box. C She is so young that she can’t carry the … D She is not old enough to carry the… 方法三 :妙用關(guān)聯(lián)詞 Writing skills（“寫”的技巧） : and, as well as, both…and, what’s more not only…but also, neither…nor : or, either…or : but,however,although\though,after all,anyway : because, so, therefore,since,for,as a result : if , unless : instead, not…but, while, in the same way, on the one hand…on the other hand : for example, for instance, such as, that is to say, in other words,to tell the truth : to begin with, firstly, first (of all), second(ly), next, later, since then, from then on, finally, in the end : also, besides, especially, actually, in fact : all in all, altogether, in a word, generally speaking, in short 關(guān)聯(lián)詞 (connection words) Let’s try ? _____________ I am tired, I keep on working till midnight. ? He didn’t go to movies, he went to the concert ______. ? We like doing kinds of sports _____ swimming, running and hiking. ? _____, he stood up. Then he got out. _____, he went back. ____________, he smiled. Though\Although instead like First Next Finally\At last ? How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our report. ? According to it, a lot of people travel. And some people stay at home. They watch TV or surf the Inter. Also some other people visit friends or parents. However, a few people work. ? Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well. 連 (connect) According to it, most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world