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旅居德國(guó)的攝影家王曉慧說(shuō):“能夠創(chuàng)造性的工作是我最大的享受。”有人以仕途得意為享受,有人以寄情山水為享受。請(qǐng)以“享受____ ”為題寫一篇600字左右的文章,立意自定,文體自選。(二)限制性半命題作文的審題《也美麗》開(kāi)放部分限制部分材料作文命題作文標(biāo)題,是文章內(nèi)容的高度濃縮;標(biāo)題,是文章的眼睛,透過(guò)它可以洞悉文章的靈魂。從某種程度上說(shuō),擬題的優(yōu)劣直接關(guān)系到文章品位的高低。而擬一個(gè)恰當(dāng)?shù)臉?biāo)題首先要審清題意。也美麗,是美麗,最美麗 對(duì)于“也”的理解:“也”可以表示多種關(guān)系:,我也去跑步了。遞進(jìn)關(guān)系,也被錄取了?!耙病保笪闹杏凶约赫J(rèn)識(shí)的轉(zhuǎn)變,可以不交代這個(gè)認(rèn)識(shí)的變化過(guò)程,但要有體現(xiàn)“也”字的點(diǎn)題。每當(dāng)下雪的時(shí)候,我都會(huì)跑到門外,欣賞那潔白的雪花,心情也會(huì)好起來(lái)。學(xué)生作文2——《失敗也美麗》失敗,是每個(gè)人都會(huì)經(jīng)歷的。對(duì)于這些人,失敗是美麗的。學(xué)生作文3 ——《配角也美麗》有人說(shuō),主角永遠(yuǎn)是舞臺(tái)上最耀眼、最美麗的那輪明月,而配角只是旁邊點(diǎn)綴的小星,黯然無(wú)光。如何體現(xiàn)“也美麗”?比較三個(gè)結(jié)尾。我很慶幸我擁有這樣的父親。最美麗 《失敗也美麗》成功固然美麗,但失敗是成功之母,沒(méi)有一次次的失敗,怎能得到一個(gè)個(gè)通向成功的階梯呢?當(dāng)你從失敗中吸取教訓(xùn)、不斷總結(jié)、不斷努力而最終成功的時(shí)候,你會(huì)突然發(fā)現(xiàn):原來(lái)失敗也是美麗的。審題練習(xí)3題目:《 我嘗到了的滋味》偏正短語(yǔ),修飾中心詞“滋味”的,應(yīng)是酸、甜、苦、辣、咸之類的表示滋味感受的詞語(yǔ)。注意:嘗到的滋味對(duì)你有什么啟示和影響一定要寫出來(lái)。橫線上可填的詞語(yǔ)如:任性、自卑、孤獨(dú)、偷懶、害怕困難、迷戀網(wǎng)絡(luò)、受人關(guān)注、擁有笑容??填寫謂語(yǔ)(根據(jù)自己的生活經(jīng)歷填寫)從此——重點(diǎn)內(nèi)容不再——有鋪墊,有對(duì)比“我,因?yàn)槲摇碧崾尽拔摇毕拗屏嗣鑼懙膶?duì)象。寫作重點(diǎn)是產(chǎn)生某種感受的原因。我們可以通過(guò)看結(jié)構(gòu)、辯詞義、析提示來(lái)恰當(dāng)補(bǔ)題,確定主題、題材、重點(diǎn),明確體裁、字?jǐn)?shù)等要求。生活中,有些事情看起來(lái)很困難,但只要你愿意去做,就會(huì)覺(jué)得其實(shí)很簡(jiǎn)單;有些事情看起來(lái)很容易,但做起來(lái)卻不簡(jiǎn)單。在橫線處填入合適的詞語(yǔ)(如:擁有幸福、拒絕誘惑、關(guān)愛(ài)他人??),然后作文。(二)不簡(jiǎn)單要求:除詩(shī)歌外,文體不限。文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名、人名。半命題作文的審題教案杜欽國(guó)第五篇:半命題作文審題法【作文1級(jí)】作文:半命題作文審題法記敘文的實(shí)質(zhì)= 寫人+寫事+寫景物+寫感想、情感、道理百變題型秀——半命題作文長(zhǎng)啥樣半命題:初一的學(xué)習(xí)生活讓我們學(xué)會(huì)了許多,我們感受到的初一生活真有趣、真豐富、真不一樣,有收獲,有體驗(yàn),有喜悅,有失敗??請(qǐng)以“初一生活真”為題,寫一篇不少于600字的文章。這段時(shí)間雖然短暫,卻給我留下了難以磨滅的印象。她連忙奔向食堂,拿來(lái)了一雙一次性筷子?!芭尽?,不知是她用力過(guò)猛,還是筷子質(zhì)量太差,其中一根筷子竟然斷成了兩截,這可把晏揚(yáng)天給急壞了。然而,晏揚(yáng)天就是機(jī)靈,只過(guò)了兩秒鐘,她的眼中就閃現(xiàn)出“智慧之光”?!蔽艺罩囊馑及褦喑蓛山氐目曜訉?duì)著縫重合在一起?!澳憔湍眠@個(gè)吃飯呀?”我不由問(wèn)道?!闭f(shuō)著還拿著筷子好好“欣賞”了一陣,全然不顧旁邊同學(xué)近乎暈倒的神情,然后悠閑自得地用修復(fù)的筷子開(kāi)始吃飯。那天,我正坐在座位上做作業(yè),突然有同學(xué)叫了句:“??!有小強(qiáng)?!北娙顺傅姆较蛲?,果然有一只小強(qiáng)。好幾位男同學(xué)望準(zhǔn)了小強(qiáng),一齊抬腳向它踩去。結(jié)果幾位男同學(xué)都沒(méi)踩到,還差點(diǎn)一起摔一太跤。突然,小強(qiáng)消失了,原來(lái),它鉆進(jìn)一個(gè)小洞里,不出來(lái)。這場(chǎng)圍追小強(qiáng)的“戰(zhàn)爭(zhēng)”不僅沒(méi)打到小強(qiáng),還有幾位同學(xué)因?yàn)榇蛐?qiáng)而碰倒桌椅,皮都擦破了,哎,真是太衰了。例文二:《初一生活,真多彩》小標(biāo)題法范文精講:初一生活,真多彩唉,不知不覺(jué)就到初二了,初一生活我還沒(méi)體驗(yàn)夠呢?;叵肫鸪跻粫r(shí)的事情,仿佛都還歷歷在目。更令人害怕的是,以前聽(tīng)人說(shuō)初中的老師怎么怎么嚴(yán),連沒(méi)按時(shí)交作業(yè)都要挨罰之類的,想著想著我就有一種后怕的感覺(jué)。他們一見(jiàn)轉(zhuǎn)來(lái)一個(gè)新同學(xué),就主動(dòng)和我打招呼,并且和我說(shuō)明這里的情況。學(xué)習(xí)雖然比以前更緊了,作業(yè)也更多了,但是我還是能夠適應(yīng)下來(lái)。我在這個(gè)新的學(xué)校里快樂(lè)地學(xué)習(xí)著,課后,與同學(xué)一起嬉戲、玩耍。我和班上的同學(xué)都有著或深或淺的了解,也與一些同學(xué)建立了深厚的友誼。也正是這一點(diǎn),使我和他們成了十分要好的同學(xué),我們有開(kāi)心事會(huì)說(shuō)出來(lái)讓大家開(kāi)心,自己傷心時(shí)也會(huì)向他人傾訴以尋求安慰。從陌生到溫暖,再到快樂(lè),我的初一,我的生活,真多彩!記敘文的實(shí)質(zhì)= 寫人+寫事+寫景物+寫感想、情感、道理記敘事件法小標(biāo)題法We Are The World Michael Jackson There is a time when we should heed(留意)a certain call Cause the world it seems it’s right in this lineCause there’s a chance for taking in needing our own lives It seems we need nothing at allI used to feel that I should give away my heart And it shows that fear of needing themThen I read the headlines(標(biāo)題)and it said they’re dying there And it shows that we must heed insteadWe are the worldWe are the children We are the ones who make a brighter day So let’s start givingBut there’s a chance we’re taking We’re taking our own livesIt’s true we’ll make a brighter day just you and me Give in your heart and you will see that someone cares Cause you know that they can feed them allThan I read the paper and it said that you’ve been denied And it shows the second we will call We are the world We are the childrenWe are the ones who make a brighter day So let’s start givingBut there’s a chance we’re takingWe’re taking our own livesIt’s true we’ll make a brighter day just you and me No there’s a time when we must love them all And it seems that life, it don’t make love at allBut if you’d be there, and I’ll love you more and moreWe are the world We are the childrenWe are the ones who make a brighter day So let’s start givingBut there’s a chance we’re taking We’re taking our own livesIt’s true we’ll make a brighter day just you and me We are the world We are the childrenWe are the ones who make a brighter day So let’s start givingBut there’s a chance we’re taking We’re taking our own livesIt’s true we’ll make a brighter day just you and meWe are the world We are the childrenWe are the ones who make a brighter day So let’s start givingBut there’s a chance we’re taking We’re taking our own livesIt’s true we’ll make a brighter day just you and me We are the world We are the childrenWe are the ones who make a brighter day So let’s start givingBut there’s a chance we’re taking We’re taking our own livesIt’s true we’ll make a brighter day just you and me ……