【正文】 奔忙飛跑的中國(guó)，在尖利的防空警報(bào)聲后停頓三分鐘。國(guó)殤是一場(chǎng)悲劇，然而，國(guó)殤更是一次空前的團(tuán)聚?！鼻嗌綗o(wú)法阻隔我們風(fēng)雨同舟的攜手，地域也不會(huì)隱沒(méi)團(tuán)結(jié)一心的中華民族頭上那輪共有的明月。當(dāng)救援部隊(duì)在汶川大地震的廢墟下救出被困60余小時(shí)的姑娘樂(lè)劉會(huì)時(shí)，在場(chǎng)的人們激動(dòng)地哭了，而她卻沒(méi)有哭。一雙手和十幾雙手緊緊地交握，這是一個(gè)災(zāi)民與她的救命恩人們最質(zhì)樸也最真誠(chéng)的團(tuán)聚。五千米，這個(gè)國(guó)際專業(yè)領(lǐng)域深感不可能執(zhí)行的跳傘高度，被解放軍空降戰(zhàn)士拋在腦后。就這樣，“人民的軍隊(duì)”從五千米的高空降下，給災(zāi)區(qū)斷絕天日、與世隔絕的鄉(xiāng)鎮(zhèn)帶去了救命的福音。海洋曾把世界割裂成對(duì)立的區(qū)域，而今天海洋再不能阻斷世界的愛(ài)心匯聚到一起。愴然災(zāi)難，古來(lái)有之。在今天，則是人民與人民、人民與國(guó)家、國(guó)家與世界的攜手，又何愁家不安、國(guó)不興？青山一道，我們同歷風(fēng)雨共團(tuán)聚；而將五洲四海的人心聯(lián)結(jié)在一起的紐帶，是這樣一種期望：為天下立心，為生民立命，為往圣繼絕學(xué)，為萬(wàn)世享太平！第二篇：全國(guó)卷英語(yǔ)高考滿分作文高考滿分作文最近，你校同學(xué)正在參加某英文報(bào)組織的一場(chǎng)討論。60％的同學(xué)認(rèn)為40％的同學(xué)認(rèn)為1．不應(yīng)該收門票2．公園是公眾休閑的地方3．如收門票，需建大門、圍墻，會(huì)影響城市形象1．應(yīng)收門票，但票價(jià)不要太高2．支付園林工人工資3．購(gòu)新花木注意：1．信的開頭已為你寫好。3．參考詞匯：門票entrance feeDear Editor．I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrancefee should be charged for parks．高考滿分作文1(1號(hào)題)Dear editor,I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for % of us schoolmates think that an entrance fee do not meet people’s expectations, for a park is considered to be a place where the public can have a good time when they are not busy either at home or at an entrance fee must be paid by the visitors for a park, it will be necessary to build a gate and surrounding the end a city will take on a bad % of us schoolmates think that an entrance fee can be accepted, but it must not be too money from ticket selling can be used for paying the gardeners in the park and buying some other kinds of flowers and regard to myself, I think an entrance fee is useful, for it can be used to protect a we share the same opinion, dear editor?Yours truly,Li Hua高考英語(yǔ)滿分作文第二篇Dear editor,I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for students out of one hundred think that an entrance fee should not be bought before one enters a park, for it is a place for the public to go to when they are a ticket must be bought, a gate and walls have to be built for a park, which will make a city look students out of one hundred think that an entrance fee should be bought before one enters a park, but that the price of the ticket should be that is got from ticket selling can be used to pay the gardening workers and buy different kinds of flowers and for myself, I really think parks are good places to go to at weekends and on the sametime, we, as visitors, should pay the entrance fee when we enter a all, it takes a lot of money to maintain a park in good working you agree with me, dear editor?Yours truly,Li HuaDear editor,I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for percent of my schoolmates are for the idea that an entrance fee should not be forced on the believe parks are the place where the public enjoy themselves at their think that a gate and wails are to be built if an entrance fee is to be city will not look so beautiful as it should percent of my schoolmates are for the idea that an entrance fee is OK, but it shouldn’t be out of fee can be used to pay the gardeners and buy new types of flowers and myself, I’d like to say that if we all work hard to build our city into a flower garden, who cares about the entrance fee for parks?Yours truly,Li Hua高考英語(yǔ)滿分作文第四篇Dear editor,I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for against charging entrance fee for parks take up 60%.They are of one mind that parks are a place for the public’s tickets are demanded on the visitors of a park, a gate has to be set up and so have the walls on the four so, city will not look as beautiful as it , those in favour of charging entrance fee for parks take up 40%.They all think that ticket price should be controlled properly, and that entrance fee can be used to pay the gardeners and buy new sorts of flowers and truth lies in the hands of the my argument stand to reason, dear editor?Yours truly,Li HuaDear editor,I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for all us who have joined in the discussion, 60% share the point of view that an entrance fee should not be charged while 40% share the opposite who don’t agree with the idea think that a park is a place where the public can spend their spare time for in support of the idea think that entrance fee for parks can’t be beyond against the idea think that a city’s appearance will be damaged because a gate and wails will be built if an entrance fee is to be who agree with the idea think entrance fee can be used to pay the gardeners and buy new kinds of flowers and think it does more good than harm to charge an entrance fee for I right, editor?Yours truly,Li Hua第三篇：2016年全國(guó)卷高考滿分作文2016年全國(guó)卷高考滿分作文 要求：結(jié)合材料的內(nèi)容和寓意，選好角度，確定立意，明確文體，自擬題目。一點(diǎn)進(jìn)步，一種人生暮色暗淡，殘陽(yáng)如血。一個(gè)十八歲的少女坐在河邊，手里拿著最后一次的?？季?，上面的分?jǐn)?shù)令她心寒。女孩于殘陽(yáng)中站了起來(lái)，她撕碎了手里的試卷，回到了家。只是看見(jiàn)，從那以后，女孩仿佛在書桌旁生了根。也許是好事多磨，女孩雖然比最后一次?？挤?jǐn)?shù)多出了很多，但依然未能考上夢(mèng)想院校，只因幾分。盛夏，農(nóng)村的夜空被點(diǎn)點(diǎn)繁星照亮，女孩睜著流著淚的眼睛，看著熱鬧的夜空，仿佛自己的夢(mèng)想跟那星星一樣離她如此遙遠(yuǎn)。“對(duì)不起，我還是沒(méi)考上，你罵我吧。有進(jìn)步就是好的，雖然你的進(jìn)步并未幫你達(dá)成目標(biāo)，但那又怎樣？只要能進(jìn)步，在哪都能成就精彩。幾個(gè)月后，孩子聽(tīng)了父親的話，背上行囊，去了一個(gè)二本的院校，繼續(xù)著自己的人生。畢業(yè)后，女孩搭上南下的火車，找了份工作，平平淡淡地活著。再后來(lái)，她結(jié)了婚，生了小孩，成為了我的母親。但我媽媽也是有底線的，她不要求我每次都要考滿分、90分，她只要求我每次進(jìn)步，哪怕只有一點(diǎn)點(diǎn)。功課落下了不少，成績(jī)自然也不算優(yōu)秀，媽媽也還是只有“進(jìn)步”一個(gè)要求。如今，我走在了媽媽曾經(jīng)走過(guò)的路上，只求問(wèn)心無(wú)愧和爭(zhēng)取進(jìn)步，或許我的進(jìn)步十分微小。不過(guò)，后面其實(shí)還有很多輛車在等我，因?yàn)槲乙恢痹谂M(jìn)步，就像小樹一直在努力進(jìn)步和成就一片繁茂；就像水滴一直在努力進(jìn)步匯成一曲江河，奔向所夢(mèng)想的遠(yuǎn)方。點(diǎn)評(píng)：與一般考生作文寫法不同，本文并不是千篇一律地從漫畫材料的描述分析開始，而是用了一個(gè)別出心裁的描寫性開頭，營(yíng)造出一種肅穆的氣氛來(lái)吸引讀者。文似看山不喜平，本文的轉(zhuǎn)折點(diǎn)是她“成為了我的母親”，敘事的時(shí)間跨度使文章產(chǎn)生了歷史感，情感色彩從憂傷苦悶逐漸轉(zhuǎn)為平和豁達(dá)，內(nèi)容和情感豐富充實(shí)立體。在追求完美、施行“虎媽狼爸”教育方式的中國(guó)父母群體中，這位母親的寬容心態(tài)顯得那么與眾不同，她或許就是考生們筆下心心念念呼喚的那位“母親”！巴掌之吻 教育之痛一張考卷，幾分浮動(dòng)，換得巴掌與吻。僅從表面上看，母親對(duì)從滿分降為98分的退步的孩子求全責(zé)備，而對(duì)雖然一開始不及格、但后來(lái)進(jìn)步的孩子不吝愛(ài)吻，是不是僅說(shuō)明這位母親鼓勵(lì)進(jìn)步之可取與苛責(zé)退步之不妥呢？并非如此，撥開表面的巴掌與吻之別，在這幅漫畫中，我們應(yīng)看到僅僅是分?jǐn)?shù)上的一點(diǎn)變化，都足以使家長(zhǎng)做出截然不同的反應(yīng)，其背后折射出的無(wú)數(shù)個(gè)家庭相似的情景，不免令人深思。滿分得吻、98分得巴掌這一荒謬現(xiàn)象，正是被詬病許久的唯分?jǐn)?shù)論的體現(xiàn)，當(dāng)家長(zhǎng)并不在乎分?jǐn)?shù)背后反映的知識(shí)掌握情況，指導(dǎo)學(xué)習(xí)作用時(shí)，也就不再在意“98分已經(jīng)很接近滿分”這一事實(shí)，而是只看見(jiàn)比上次退步了2分的情況，辨不清“無(wú)論55分還是61分都說(shuō)明孩子學(xué)習(xí)狀況不佳，”而只關(guān)注比上次進(jìn)步了6分。君不見(jiàn)今年校園投毒案中，犯罪的青年雖分?jǐn)?shù)耀眼，但人格上有著致命缺陷，如若僅憑巴掌與吻一味注目分?jǐn)?shù)浮動(dòng)，還能說(shuō)是“育人”嗎？培育的到底是棟梁還是外表光鮮