【正文】 So I’m here again to call on all of us to read more books and read good books. Li Hua【答案】例文Dear students, the World Reading Day is ing. As a middle school student, everyone should read books. Firstly, reading increases our knowledge and we can learn the world affairs without going out. Secondly, reading is a good way to improve reading and writing skills. Finally, reading can broaden our knowledge and horizon, which is important to job hunting in the future. Therefore, start to reading, no matter how old you are and what you are doing. So I’m here again to call on all of us to read more books and read good books. Li Hua【解析】【詳解】題干解讀：該題目屬于應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作，但寫(xiě)作時(shí)要按照應(yīng)用文格式寫(xiě)，寫(xiě)作時(shí)承接短文開(kāi)頭，寫(xiě)出對(duì)學(xué)生的倡議。高分亮點(diǎn)：短語(yǔ)：Firstly；Secondly；Finally；a good way to do sth；broaden our knowledge and horizon。5．為了宣傳和弘揚(yáng)中華優(yōu)秀傳統(tǒng)文化, 某雙語(yǔ)雜志將舉辦征文活動(dòng)來(lái)介紹中國(guó)的經(jīng)典故事, “程門(mén)立雪（Stand in the snow to wait for Master Cheng respectfully）”是其中一個(gè)選題。內(nèi)容提示：1. 楊時(shí)去拜見(jiàn)老師程頤一老師在睡覺(jué)一楊時(shí)在雪地等一老師醒來(lái)發(fā)現(xiàn)楊時(shí)在門(mén)口2. 通過(guò)介紹這個(gè)故事, 發(fā)表你的看法或者觀點(diǎn)?！敬鸢浮縇ong long ago, there was a man called Yangshi. Once he went to visit his teacher, Chengyi. Unfortunately, Mr. Cheng was sleeping in the room. He didn’t wake up the teacher. So he stood in front of the gate. At that moment, there were snowflakes flying over his head and it was very cold. But yangshi still stood in the snow until Mr. Cheng woke up. When the teacher woke up, the snow was very deep. Yangshi was like a snowman standing at the gate. Finally, the teacher was moved deeply.After reading the story, I think we should respect our teacher. We should study hard.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇材料作文，主要介紹中國(guó)的經(jīng)典故事, “程門(mén)立雪（Stand in the snow to wait for Master Cheng respectfully）”。時(shí)態(tài)為一般過(guò)去時(shí)，靈活運(yùn)用動(dòng)詞的過(guò)去式。寫(xiě)作時(shí)，避免漢語(yǔ)式英語(yǔ)。6．書(shū)面表達(dá)（本題15分）根據(jù)要求完成短文寫(xiě)作，請(qǐng)將作文寫(xiě)在答題卡指定的位置上。生活中，我們需要他人的幫助，也要學(xué)會(huì)幫助他人。作文要求：1．不得照抄原文；不得在作文中出現(xiàn)學(xué)校的真實(shí)名稱(chēng)和學(xué)生的真實(shí)姓名。 作文的開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出，不必抄寫(xiě)在試卷上，也不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。審好題是寫(xiě)好書(shū)面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。構(gòu)思提綱。通常書(shū)面表達(dá)給出的話題是開(kāi)放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀觥⒚鞔_的關(guān)鍵。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作了，在寫(xiě)作的過(guò)程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡(jiǎn)潔性。同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤(rùn)色是獲取高分的必要步驟。7．隨著網(wǎng)絡(luò)的發(fā)展、人們消費(fèi)觀念的轉(zhuǎn)變， 購(gòu)物方式也在悄然的發(fā)生變化。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下表格的提示，寫(xiě)一篇網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物的文章。 商品 goods。With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping online. 【答案】With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping online. It has bee fashionable. Some of us students also join the group. Shopping online has many advantages. Just with the click of a mouse, you can buy what you’re interested in without going outdoors. You can avoid getting tired and being trapped in the crowds and save a lot of time. When shopping online, you can choose from more varieties of goods, whose prices are generally lower. Every coin has two sides. Its disadvantages are obvious, too. On one hand, it’s very easy for you to buy goods that aren’t like the pictures you see on the Internet. On the other hand, shopping online may cause people to buy goods that are not badly needed. That’s a waste of money. All in all, I love shopping online.【解析】本文屬于材料作文，主要講述網(wǎng)購(gòu)的優(yōu)點(diǎn)和缺點(diǎn)。【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別適用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如convenient，disadvantage，in good quality，figure out，have the chance to do，be attacked by，of course，take care of等。點(diǎn)睛：寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫(xiě)作材料。初寫(xiě)短文。使用的詞語(yǔ)、短語(yǔ)