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不良的看書(shū)習(xí)慣,如在床上或陽(yáng)光下看書(shū)……2. 長(zhǎng)時(shí)間玩手機(jī)、看電視、玩電腦……3. 學(xué)習(xí)時(shí)間長(zhǎng),作業(yè)多……建議1. 認(rèn)真做眼保健操2. 多吃胡蘿卜等對(duì)眼睛有益的食物3. ……參考詞匯: 近視 nearsighted 注意: 1. 內(nèi)容須包括所提示的信息,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)自己的真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱;3. 詞數(shù):80100,開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。t keep your eyes work for a long time. Don39。t read in the sun。t read in bed or in a moving bus. And when you read you should keep the book away from your eyes for about a foot. And thirdly, do eyeexercises every day. You should eat more carrots and other eyefriendly foods. It will also help you keep good eyesight. I think, you may prevent your eyesight from being nearsighted.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇材料作文,根據(jù)表格中的相關(guān)信息介紹一下如何保護(hù)視力。主要從原因和建議兩個(gè)方面去介紹。注意作文中必須包含表格上的所有信息,并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。語(yǔ)法要正確,表達(dá)要符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣,注意時(shí)態(tài)、時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配及主謂一致問(wèn)題?!靖叻志湫鸵弧縎o it is important for everyone to keep good eyesight. 所以保持良好的視力對(duì)每個(gè)人都很重要。when you read是由when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句。 請(qǐng)你根據(jù)博客內(nèi)容,寫作要點(diǎn)和要求,給這位家長(zhǎng)回復(fù)。 2. 陳述自己的理由?!敬鸢浮縃i,TigerMom,What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in idea is that it is not quiteright for you to do so.Although high grades are an important factor in evaluating students and for their future university admission,development in wisdom,emotion,health,and life attitude should never be ignored. There are many examples around us. Some allA students in school have turned out not to be as successful insociety as they were expected. The reason is often that the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities. Furthermore,punishment is by no means a wise choice to help them grow up mentally and physically.So I suggest that you take your friends39。結(jié)合所給材料,可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài),人稱為第一,三人稱,注意主謂一致問(wèn)題,句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu),注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用,比如:My idea is that……,There are……,Some allA students in school have…….,The reason is……,So I suggest that……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意敘述順序,符合邏輯關(guān)系。開(kāi)頭表明自己的看法,接下來(lái)陳述自己的理由,最后介紹自己的建議。4.馬上要初中畢業(yè)了,大家都是依依不舍的。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示,寫一篇發(fā)言稿。不開(kāi)心的事情; 。s unbelievable that I39。題目中利用表格的形式,展示了文章的具體內(nèi)容,學(xué)生們可以此為提綱進(jìn)行寫作。內(nèi)容應(yīng)主要包括三部分:首先是初中三年里的美好回憶;然后是不開(kāi)心的事情;最后展望自己未來(lái)的高中生活。寫作時(shí)應(yīng)注意:文章中應(yīng)包括表格中的所有信息,不能遺漏要點(diǎn);第三部分的內(nèi)容中還需要自己發(fā)揮想象力進(jìn)行補(bǔ)充,注意應(yīng)合情合理,與上文很好地銜接。句式結(jié)構(gòu)可以簡(jiǎn)單句為基礎(chǔ),穿插并列句、復(fù)合句以及其他復(fù)雜句式的使用,提升作文檔次?!军c(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文,短文作者根據(jù)題目要求,回憶了自己的初中生活,并展望了未來(lái)。短文分三段,第一段基本是題目中給出的開(kāi)頭,作者使用一句話引出下文;第二段是主體,介紹了過(guò)去美好的回憶以及不開(kāi)心的事情;最后一段對(duì)未來(lái)進(jìn)行了展望。其次短文中使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱,語(yǔ)法規(guī)范,用詞準(zhǔn)確,注意了動(dòng)詞正確形式的變化。語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確、得體,表達(dá)自然、流暢。5.近來(lái),美國(guó)總統(tǒng)特朗普的外孫女由于說(shuō)一口流利的中文而成為“網(wǎng)紅”。假如你是大明,請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示寫一封郵件給他,提一些關(guān)于如何學(xué)好漢語(yǔ)的建議。,與同學(xué)們用中文交流。,以使行文連貫。,不計(jì)人總詞數(shù)。m happy to hear from you. I know you want to learn Chinese well. Here are some suggestions._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________In a word,if you have good ways of learning Chinese ,you will learn it well.YoursDaming【答案】Dear Sam,I39。s a good idea to talk with your classmates in Chinese. And don39。d better read Chinese magazines or newspapers after class. You can also watch Chinese programmes on the Internet. I think it can help you to improve your pronunciation. Lastly, you can write s to me or other Chinese friends in Chinese.In a word, if you have good ways of learning Chinese, you will learn it well.Yours,Daming【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以大明的身份給Sam寫一封信,告訴他如何學(xué)好漢語(yǔ),題目中從四個(gè)方面提出了建議。文章應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),根據(jù)表達(dá)需要使用恰當(dāng)?shù)娜朔Q。應(yīng)從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)考慮,寫完整的句子。為提升文章檔次,可以穿插使用并列句或復(fù)合句以及其他一些復(fù)雜句式?!军c(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文,短文作者根據(jù)題目要求給Sam寫了一封信,對(duì)他的漢語(yǔ)