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【答案】It’s spring now. Many people like to go out for some activities. I think it’s a good way to get close to nature.When we are outdoors and in the natural world, we can not only breathe fresh air and enjoy the beautiful scene, but also relax ourselves for the ing study or work.There are many different ways we can get out into the natural world, such as hiking, cycling, camping and climbing. Cycling is my favourite. I join a cycling club, and often go out with other members. While cycling, we can forget our worries and have fun together. Also, we can learn to be a part of a team and help each other.Whatever you do, remember to stay safe. When you’re outside, it’s better to be with your parents or friends.【解析】試題分析:本篇書面表達以“outdoor activities”為話題,結合所給的寫作材料,寫一篇報刊征文稿。寫作中注意連詞、固定短語的交替使用,使文意連接緊密,還要注意使用豐富的語句,注意敘述順序,符合邏輯關系,最后最好要表達出人物的感想和看法。文中in the natural world, not only…but also, get out, such as, also等詞(組)的恰當使用,使上下文意連接緊密;本文還采用了豐富的句型,比如:It is +形容詞+(for sb.) to do sth.;There be句型;時間狀語從句等復合句,大大增加了信息的容量,使文章增色不少,這是一篇不錯的范文。學校英語??队⒄Z天地》對此進行調查,假如你是一名??∮浾?,請你就此次調查的結果進行總結,并談談你自己的觀點。As we all know, grabbing red packets on line won popularity with the people during the Spring Festival in 2016. From then on, more and more people have been crazy about it. So we did the survey on the activity of “Grabbing red packets” among students.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】As we all know, grabbing red packets on line won popularity with the people during the Spring Festival in 2016. From then on, more and more people have been crazy about it. So we did the survey on the activity of “Grabbing red packets” among students.About 75% of them think it is a popular form of entertainment, bring them more fun. It can bring people closer , they can make more friends .Grabbing red packets has been part of people’s lives. About 25% of them say some people spend too much time grabbing red packets. They don’t have enough munication with their family members .They may feel a little lonelyPersonally, there39。s obvious that it is more convenient. However, as a saying goes, each coin has two sides. It is not an exception, it also has some bad effects. If people can39。s worse, it may lead to the crime.【解析】這篇作文要求我們對學校進行的關于春節(jié)搶紅包這件事的調查結果進行總結,并談談自己對這件事情的看法。最后還要加上自己的看法。寫作時,應注意英語表達習慣和漢語的不同,不要逐詞翻譯,應從句子整體結構出發(fā),以簡單句為主,穿插并列句和復合句。語句之間使用恰當?shù)倪B接成分,使文章整體意思連貫、表達流暢。首先短文內容完整、結構清晰。第二段中作者表述了支持和反對玩這個游戲的人們各自的理由;第三段中作者發(fā)表了自己的看法。文章以一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)為主,特別注意了謂語動詞的正確形式,語法規(guī)范、準確。s no doubt that not only does it bring people happiness, but also send blessings to people in a special form.、If people can39。文章中也出現(xiàn)了一些語法上的小錯誤,總的來說,不影響整篇文章的質量。某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展以“Going Green”為主題的征文活動。提示詞語: pollution, protect, save, recycle, take action提示問題:● What are the main environmental problems we have?● What can we do in our daily life? ● What’s your wish?Now there are many environmental 【答案】例文Now there are man