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ent from students in primary or secondary school, university students are often given group assignments which are technically impossible for one person to finish in time or which have no universal answers and, therefore, need to be contemplated from various perspectives. As a result, boys and girls are forced to learn how to work with others for a mon goal——such as how to budget time and assign tasks according to each person’s skills without causing “freeride”, how to perfect your task without annoying other team mates, and how to express your opinion about other member’s work without triggering frictions or stupid fights. All of the above make college students mature and sensible, ready to meet the challenges they will soon face in the workplace. Therefore, attending classes is necessary for university students. 通過以上三個例子,可以發(fā)現(xiàn)其實最重要的是在列提綱的時候組織事實,中間段只是用正確的語句和詞匯表達這些事實。 Scientists: more obvious ——Advancement: Plane, puter, vacuum cleaner ——Make our lives easier, more secure ——Help arts: CD, TV, movie, mp3 這個段落可以這樣寫: The contributions scientists make to society are more obvious than those made by artists. Almost all the critical advancements that make our lives easier, such as the plane we take to travel abroad, the puters we use (whether for work or for entertainments), and the home appliances which help us cook our meals and clean our houses, e from the creative ideas and hard work of scientists. Those scientific discoveries and innovations make out work more efficient, our shopping more convenient, and our lives more secure. Plus, to some extent scientists even contribute a lot to the arts——without technological progress, there wouldn’t have been movie centers, television, and mp3 players which infuse art into ordinary people’s lives. 最后還有一例: Some people believe that university students should be required to attend classes. Others believe that going to classes should be optional