【正文】 二、內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：下周六上午8：00 至 11：00：采摘蘋果：辦公室，下周四下午5：00前：帶帽子、手套【參考范文】 Dear neighbors, We are very happy announce that our munity is going to organize an activity for all the munity Saturday, we going to pick apples in a village 20 kilometers away from our town, and all are will meet at 8:00 am at the gate, where a blue bus will be ou。英、美拼寫及詞匯用法均可接受。，從總分中減去2分。：社區(qū) munity 第二節(jié)：一、評(píng)分原則，按5個(gè)檔次給分。社區(qū)委員會(huì)請(qǐng)你幫忙用英文以短文的形式寫一封電子郵件，將周末農(nóng)家采摘活動(dòng)的安排傳達(dá)給住戶。也就是說，開頭很好，也必然要有一個(gè)精彩的結(jié)尾，讓讀者眼前一亮，這樣，你就可以拿高分了！比如下面的例子：Obviously（此為過渡短語）, we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for “顯而見之”，但說無妨，就當(dāng)讀者的眼光太淺罷了！更多過渡短語：to sum up, in conclusion, in brief, on account of this, thus 更多句型：Thus, it can be concluded that…, Therefore, we can find that…2． 結(jié)尾萬能公式二：如此建議如果說“如此結(jié)論”是結(jié)尾最沒用的廢話，那么“如此建議”應(yīng)該是最有價(jià)值的廢話了，因?yàn)檫@里雖然也是廢話，但是卻用了一個(gè)很經(jīng)典的虛擬語氣的句型。最后，我想說“保護(hù)水就是保護(hù)生命。沒有水人類將無法生存。河中看不到一條魚，河水也不像從前那樣清澈了，水質(zhì)很差。但同時(shí)，我也注意到我們城市的水污染變得越來越嚴(yán)重了。水是生命之源，保護(hù)水資源十分重要。我們急切呼吁采取措施改變這種狀況。河水變得如此的骯臟以致于生物不能在里面生活。但當(dāng)我看到沿著城區(qū)流過的河流時(shí)，我感到很惋惜，想了很多。amates and I took a oneday sightseeing around our scene was when we saw the rivers along our city, I felt very sorry, and thoughit a the development of modern agriculture and industry, more and more waste water is being poured into has caused serious river is being so dirty that no living things can live in river is giving off a terrible make an urgent appeal that measures should be taken to cope with the government should start building various facilities such as sewage treatment!plant and encourage scientists to work out more and better ways to reduce the pollution of is tho source of our is very important to protect ，天氣變得越來越暖和。，河水會(huì)變干凈。環(huán)境日英語作文：關(guān)于河水污染的感想根據(jù)下列提示寫一篇關(guān)于河水污染的感想。同時(shí)，廢水給人們的健康帶來極大的危害。因此，許多地方缺水。沒有水便沒有生命。t live in them any the same time, thc waste water does great harm to people39。t go on without the rapid development of agriculture and industry, more and more water is , water is being scarce in many 39。The Importance of WaterAs we all know, plants and animals need do the people39。雖然地球表面70％是水覆蓋著，世界上仍有許多地方缺水。水，正如你所了解的，有固態(tài)、液態(tài)和氣態(tài)。水幾乎無處不在。所有的動(dòng)植物都需要水。It is generally believed that there is a good supply of fresh to our disappointment, the fact is just the we can see, the world population is growing rapidly day by enough fresh water is needed to feed such a big ’s more, with the development of industry, factories and vehicles produce poisonous gases or wastes, which consequently results in the pollution of fresh, a good amount of it can no longer be quite limited fresh water resource is available to human it’s high time for us human beings to take quick action to protect water pollution and save water, otherwise, we cannot survive on the fresh water, the world will be Water is very important for living water there can be no life on animals and plants need also needs is found in the driest part of the world there is some water in the we all have found out, water may be a solid, or a liquid or a it isa solid, it may be as hard as brick, When itis a liquid, you can pour it out of a it is a gas, you cannot see or feel about 70 percent of the earth39。（提示：雨水、河水、井水??）（提示：人口增加，工業(yè)用水增加，污染??）？ Global Shortage of Fresh Water One possible version: Global Shortage of Fresh WaterMany people believe that the world’s supply of fresh water will never be used think that fresh water es from such a variety of sources that it is always sufficient for an opinion leads to a shocking waste of a matter of fact, the earth is short of fresh ,with the rapid growth of the world’s population ,the rising demand for water by industry ,and the serious pollution of our surroundings ,the world is facing the danger of running out of fresh ,in some big cities ,fresh water cannot meet the daily ,to find new ways to save water is an urgent ,we should pass strict laws to control any waste of ,scientists must work even harder to purify sea water and polluted water ,and try to find substitutes to reduce the use of fresh 有關(guān)環(huán)境保護(hù)的英語作文：水資源是有限的人們總以為淡水是取之不盡的，實(shí)際上淡水資源是很有限的?？傊私?、掌握、運(yùn)用好以上五個(gè)方面，就容易得高分。整潔文章寫好后，應(yīng)認(rèn)真修改，不忙于提前交卷，避免大小寫及標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)錯(cuò)誤，謄寫應(yīng)盡可能書寫工整，布局美觀。如寫通知結(jié)尾可用“Don’t forget the time and address.”，“I’m sure you’ll have a pleasant time/a lot of fun.”或“That’s all, thank you.”；寫參觀歡迎詞開頭可用“You’re wele to visit our city.”，“Now, let me tell you something about our school.”或“Let me introduce something about our school to you.”，結(jié)尾可用“Now, I’d like to introduce something about our school/LI ping to you.”，介紹結(jié)束也可用“That’s all, thank you.”；寫信結(jié)尾可用“please give my best regards/love /wishes to your parents.”或“Remember me to your parents!”，“I hope to hear from you soon.”或“Waiting for your early reply.”必須注意原則：不多不少。常識(shí)性。正文。格式。有些需要標(biāo)題，卻粗心漏掉不寫，造成失分。t know what to do and how to do it.（正）另外，考試是根據(jù)內(nèi)容和表達(dá)給分的，要點(diǎn)齊全，是直接因素。t know what and how to do.（錯(cuò)）→He doesn39。如：1）He studies very hard and kind.（錯(cuò)）→He studies very hard and he is very kind.（正）2）He doesn39。用全初學(xué)寫作要簡(jiǎn)單完整清楚地表達(dá)，就要把握兩個(gè)關(guān)系：一味追求新、奇、特、難，容易出錯(cuò)。簡(jiǎn)明扼要，表達(dá)清楚，是關(guān)鍵所在。he has many good ways to use to teach us.（錯(cuò)）→ is good at teaching, and he has many methods of teaching us English.（正）英語作文，受漢語影響，雖語法正確，卻不符英語表達(dá)習(xí)慣。如：1）Study hard, are because they know is the Hope project give their chance to go to school.（錯(cuò)）→They study hard because they know it is the Hope project that gives them a chance to go to school.（正）2）Wele you e back to our school to visit.（錯(cuò)）→You’re wele back to visit our school.（正）另外，不重視掌握單詞，寫作時(shí)碰到生詞難句就委婉地去解釋，用模糊定義，語言生澀難懂，文意混亂，表達(dá)不清。1）How do you spell the puter？（劃線處去掉the）2）We should treasure the time because the time is money.（劃線處去掉the）用準(zhǔn)用準(zhǔn)確地道的語言，不能生澀難懂，不合英語表達(dá)習(xí)慣。39。如：1）He remembered his wallet had ∧ lost in the bus.（遺漏處加been）2）The matter was happened two years ago.（劃線處去掉was）還有喜歡在動(dòng)詞前面加be動(dòng)詞。（4）語態(tài)錯(cuò)誤。如人事物現(xiàn)狀的介紹，應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主；過去的介紹，應(yīng)以一般過去時(shí)為主；日記應(yīng)以一般過去時(shí)為主；通知應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。1）He wouldn’t ∧ able to work out the math problem.（遺漏處加be）2）It isn’t said that they ∧ often careless in class.（遺漏處加are）（3）時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤。通常錯(cuò)處出在：（1）多用。m afraid, I