【正文】 f ano her,you’ll get happiness out of that. Nowadays students in China celebrate their birthdays in various ways. Usually, a party is held where best friends as well as relatives can get together and have fun. They usually buy a small gift with which to express their best wishes. Sometimes, people send short messages too, which is being very popular . However, as far as I’m concerned, it’s better to do something for others. As is known to all, it’s of importance to help others. Helping others on one’s birthday can be not only meaningful but also do you a lot of good. For one thing people will help you in return。高級詞匯 Practice: 1. There are 80% of the population live on farming. 2. At 8 this morning, there were about 50 American students came to visit our school. 80% of the population live on farming. At 8 this morning, about 50 American students came to visit our school. Practice: （用分詞合并） 1. He had finished his homework. He went out to play football. 2. I was moved by his words. I decided to lend him a hand. Moved by his words, I decided to lend him a hand. Having finished his homework, he went out to play football. Practice: （ 用連接詞連接 ） 1. The police searched everywhere. The missing boy could not be found. The police searched everywhere, but the missing boy could not be found. Though the police searched everywhere, the missing boy could not be found. Practice: (避免用相同結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯） 1. I like sports. I like music, too. a. I like sports and music as well. b. I like sports as well as music. 2. My favorite subject is English while my sister’s favorite subject is history. a. My favorite subject is English while my sister’s is history. b. My favorite subject is English while my sister likes history best. My old grandfather fell asleep in the sofa. He had a book on his knees. Practice: （用介詞短語） My old grandfather fell asleep in the sofa with a book on his knees. 提高句子檔次的小結(jié)： 1. 用分詞短語合并句子 用介詞短語合并句子 用獨立主格結(jié)構(gòu)合并句子 用連接詞連接句子 2. 用高級結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯 3. 用定語從句 、 主語從句 、 強調(diào)句 、 倒裝句 4. 用不同結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯 … An accident happened to two students in our school yesterday afternoon. School was over. Tianli and Dunkai from Grade 1 were going home by bike. They were talking and laughing happily. When they saw a car which was passing by, they started to run after it. They thought it was very interesting. The bus stopped when the traffic light turned red. The two students were very close to the bus and they couldn’t stop their bikes in time. They fell off the bikes. Tianli broke his left arm and Dunkai hurt his leg. (學生作文 ） ① An accident happened to two students in our school yesterday afternoon. ② School was over. Tianli and Dunkai from Grade 1 were going home by bike. They were talking and laughing happily. ③ When they saw a bus which was passing by, they started to run after it. They thought it was very interesting. ④ The bus stopped when the traffic light turned red. ⑤ The two students were very close to the bus and they couldn39。 5. 警示：嚴格遵守交通規(guī)則，切忌在馬路上嬉笑玩耍。公交車遇紅燈停下，兩人來不及剎車，摔倒在 地。 for another, you’ll be happy. As a result, I think it better to help others to spend one’s birthday. 學生作品（ 2） 1. 要點齊全 2. 較多的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和高級詞匯 3. 全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊 高檔書面表達的要求： 1. 時間：昨天下午放學后 請根據(jù)下述情況寫一篇 80120個單詞的英語新聞 廣播稿，準備在你校廣播臺播出。請你根據(jù)以下要點寫一篇短文： 一 、 通常方式 1． 生日聚會 2． 生日禮物 3． 生日祝福 二 、 我認為更有意義的慶祝方式和理由 *詞數(shù) 100120 （ 2020 浙江卷 ） Now students in China celebrate their birthdays in many ways. Usually, a party is held. Best friends and relatives will e to the party. They usually buy a gift. They show their best wishes. Sometimes, people send short messages too and it is being very popular. But I think that it’s better to help other people. We know that it’s important to learn to help other people. Helping other people can do us a lot of good. People will help you because you’ve helped them and you’ll be happy… 學生作品（ 1） Nowadays students in China celebrate their birthdays in various ways. Usually, a party is held so that people can get together. Best friends, as well as relatives, are going to be invited. It’s polite to buy a small gift which stands for one’s best wishes. What’s more, sending short messages on one’s birthday is being more and more popular, as a result of its convenience. However, as far as I’m concerned, it’s more meaningful to care about others than about oneself. As is known to all, to give is better than to receive. Birthdays mean not only being older but more helpful and useful to the world. Therefore, it’s of importance to learn to help others. Helping others on one’s birthday can do you a lot of good. For one thing, people will help you in return in the future。 如何提高書面表達句子的檔次 你的英國朋友正在做一個課題；世界各地的生日慶祝方式 。 表示解釋說明的詞 for example, for instance, that is to say, in fact, in this (that) case, for actually, in other words等。 表示目的的詞 for this reason, for this purpose, so that, in order that, so as to, in order to, 等。 表示對照的詞 but, still, yet, however, nevertheless, on one hand… on the other hand, on the contrary,