【正文】 personally。 although 。Thus 。 finally 。 in a word 11. 其它常用到的副詞 Therefore 。 all in all。 as a matter of fact 跟你說實話 : to tell you the truth 10. 對一個話題進行總結(jié) 總而言之，總的來說 : on the whole。 such as 9. 用于陳述事實 實際上 : in fact。 for example。 that is to say。 next 最后 : finally。 afterwards 不久 : soon 近來 : lately。 as long as 除非 : unless 否則 : or else 5. 表示時間關(guān)系 當(dāng) … 的時候 : when 。 4. 表示條件關(guān)系 如果，只要 : if 。 therefore。 so。 as。 on the other hand。 yet。 in addition 2. 表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系 但是， 然而， 相反 ： but。 also。在同一話題上補充內(nèi)容 另外，還有 ： what is more。 3. 開頭已給出， 不計入總數(shù) Recently, the phenomenon of teen obesity has made a lot of parents 原因 1. 缺少運動 2. 飲食結(jié)構(gòu)不合理 建議 1. 多參加體育鍛煉 2. 多吃健康食品， 遠(yuǎn)離垃圾食品 3. … 要點分析 如何起、轉(zhuǎn)、承、結(jié) On my part,… 1. 利用模板 When it es to the phenomenon of teen obesity , our parents are in great concern. Why are so many kids getting fatter and fatter? Some are …, others are… Because of the popularity of TV and puters, and because students have so much homework to do, they are getting less exercise than before. 1. 缺少運動 Because of the popularity of TV and puters, and students are burdened with so much homework, Because people’s quality of life has gotten better and better, families can afford to buy many foods, such as meat, chocolate and other sweet or oily snacks, which might make the kids overweight. 2. 飲食結(jié)構(gòu)不合理 In order to lose weight and stay healthy, teens should avoid spending too much time in front of the TV or the puter and do more exercise. 建議 1. 多參加體育鍛煉 As the saying goes, “An apple a day keeps the doctor away.” They should also eat a more balanced diet such as fruits and vegetables, and less fast food and junk food. 2. 多吃健康食品， 遠(yuǎn)離垃圾食品 Last but not least, they should make a proper time schedule so that they can balance our exercise and studies. ， 時間表 合成文章 Recently, the phenomenon of teen obesity has made a lot of parents concerned. Why are teens getting fatter and fatter? In my opinion, there are two remarkable reasons for this problem. Firstly, because of the popularity of TV and puters, and students are burdeded with so much homework to do. They are getting less exercise than before. Secondly, because people’s quality of life has gotten better and better, families can afford to buy many foods, such as meat, chocolate and other sweet or oily snacks, which might make the kids overweight. For another , On the other hand, aroused For one thing , On the one hand, In order to lose weight and stay healthy, teens should avoid spending too much time in front of the TV or the puter and do more exercise. As the saying goes, ―An apple a day keeps the doctor away.‖ They should also eat a more balanced diet such as fruits , vegetables, less fast food and junk food. Last but not least, they should make a proper time schedule so that they can balance their exercise and studies. Thanks Byebye! 1. Because the weather was good, our journey was fortable. all think he is a great man. I thought out a good idea. students there needn’t pay for their books. 5. As a result the plan was a failure. The plan turned out to be a failure. Thanks to the good weather, our journey was fortable. 一、怎樣使用較高級的詞匯 We all think highly of him . A good idea occurred to me. / A go