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改為: Fresh water is the most important thing in the world. 十一. 綜合性語言錯(cuò)誤 (Comprehensive Misusage) 所謂“綜合性語言錯(cuò)誤”,是指除了上述十種錯(cuò)誤以外,還有諸如時(shí)態(tài),語態(tài),標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào),大小寫等方面的錯(cuò)誤。 例1. The fresh water, it is the most important things of the earth. 剖析: The fresh water 與逗號(hào)后的 it 不連貫。改為: Diligent, caring people use money only to buy what they need. 十. 不連貫 (Incoherence) 不連貫是指一個(gè)句子前言不對(duì)后語,或是結(jié)構(gòu)上不暢通。能用單詞的不用詞組;能用詞組的不用從句或句子。 改為: The abusive use of chemical substances in agriculture also causes/leads to pollution. 九. 累贅 (Redundancy) 言以簡(jiǎn)潔為貴。 ) 剖析:顯然,考生把 obstacles“障礙”,“障礙物”誤作 substance“物質(zhì)”了。所以作文中用詞不當(dāng)?shù)腻e(cuò)誤比比皆是。 改為: There are many ways for us to learn about the outside world. 或: There are many ways through which we can bee acquainted with the outside worl