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改為: The abusive use of chemical substances in agriculture also causes/leads to pollution. 九. 累贅 (Redundancy) 言以簡潔為貴。 例1. There are many ways we get to know the outside world. 剖析:這個句子包含了兩層完整的意思 :“ There are many ways.” 以及“ We get to know the outside world.”。 一. 不一致( Disagreements) 所謂不一致不光指主謂不一致,它還包括了數(shù)的不一致,時態(tài)不一致及代詞不一致等. 例1. When one have money ,he can do what he want to . (人一旦有了錢,他就能想干什么就干什么. ) 剖析: one是單數(shù)第三人稱,因而本句的 have應(yīng)改為 has 。改為: We can also know society by serving it ourselves. 七. 不間斷句子 (Runon Sentences) 什么叫 runon sentence?請看下面的例句。另外“ the increasing use (不斷增加的使用 )” 應(yīng)改為“ abusive use (濫用 )”。 It 與 things 在數(shù)方面不一致。如: In spite of the fact that he is lazy, I like him. 本句的“ the fact that he is lazy”系同位語從句,我們按照上述“能用詞組的不用從句”可以改為: In spite of his laziness,