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acles“障礙”,“障礙物”誤作 substance“物質(zhì)”了。 改為: There are many ways for us to learn about the outside world. 或: There are many ways through which we can bee acquainted with the outside world 八. 措詞毛病 (Troubles in Diction) Diction 是指在特定的句子中如何適當?shù)剡x用詞語的問題,囿于教學時間緊迫,教師平時在這方面花的時間往往極其有限,影響了學生在寫作中沒有養(yǎng)成良好的推敲,斟酌的習慣。這個句子可改為: Mary was friendly to my sister because she wanted my sister to be her bridesmaid. 例 1. And we can also know the society by serving it yourself. 剖析:句中人稱代詞 we 和反身代詞 yourself指代不一致。 改為: None can deny the importance of money. 六. 指代不清 (Ambiguous Reference of Pronouns) 指代不清主要講的是代詞與被指代的人或物關系不清,或者先后所用的代詞不一致。同理, want應改為 主謂不一致. 改為: Once one has money ,he can do what he wants (to do) 二 .修飾語錯位 ( Misplaced Modifiers)