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所謂懸垂修飾語(yǔ)是指句首的短語(yǔ)與后面句子的邏輯關(guān)系混亂不清.例如: At the age of ten, my grandfather died. 這句中" at the age of ten"只點(diǎn)出十歲時(shí),但沒(méi)有說(shuō)明” 誰(shuí)”十歲時(shí).按一般推理不可能是 my grandfather, 如果我們把這個(gè)懸垂修飾語(yǔ)改明確一點(diǎn),全句就不那么費(fèi)解了. 改為: When I was ten, my grandfather died. 例1 .To do well in college, good grades are essential. 剖析:句中不定式短語(yǔ) “ to do well in college” 的邏輯主語(yǔ)不清楚. 改為: To do well in college, a student needs good grades. 五. 詞性誤用 (Misuse of Parts of Speech) “詞性誤用”常表現(xiàn)為:介詞當(dāng)動(dòng)詞用;形容詞當(dāng)副詞用;名詞當(dāng)動(dòng)詞用等. 例1. None can negative the importance of money. 剖析: negative 系形容詞,誤作動(dòng)詞。 簡(jiǎn)單地把它們連在一起就不妥當(dāng)了。寫(xiě)句子沒(méi)有一個(gè)多余的詞;寫(xiě)段落沒(méi)有一個(gè)無(wú)必要的句子。 例 1. Today, Money to everybody is very importance, our’s eat, cloth, live, go etc. 改為: Today, money to everybody is very important. Including our eating, wearing, living, going etc.