【正文】 最后要細心復核檢查，確保正確無誤。同時要注意語言的表述應該符合語法的結構，造句應該符合英語的表達習慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長的復合句；盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。Mother為主題寫一篇短文介紹你的母親和你之間的故事，參加某英語網站正在舉辦的征文活動。s what she wants most，I think．【解析】【詳解】這是一篇給材料作文。ll save money and buy beautiful clothes that make her look still young．I39。show love．The person I love most is my mother．My mother is 41 years old．She is of medium build with long black hair．She is quiet．She is a history teacher in a middle school．She likes dancing．She can cook delicious food．She did a lot for me when I was a child．She bought whatever I needed for my study，even though she didn39。islovepersonshowneedlove．WeMotherWeMybestto…，trymyto…，It39。參考詞匯：give10．書面表達為感受母愛情深，弘揚知恩圖報，某英語網站正在舉辦以My修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。同時還要注意使用恰當?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。一切都準備就緒，就可以動筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。通常書面表達給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內容要求學生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀觥⒚鞔_的關鍵。構思提綱。審好題是寫好書面表達的關鍵。增強邏輯關系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準確，句子通順，行文連貫。根據(jù)要表達的內容確定并準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當增加內容。 導致 cause注意：，可適當發(fā)揮；；：100詞左右，文章開頭已給出，但不計入總數(shù)。優(yōu)點（advantage）；節(jié)約時間；避免擁擠、勞累，品種多缺點（disadvantage）， 看不到商品本身， 造成浪費你的觀點……提示詞匯：網購shopping online?！熬W購”已成為一種時尚，越來越多的學生也加入到網購群體中。t get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams too much.、My parents wanted me to be the top student in my class、In this way, I feel less stressed out so that I can concentrate more on my studies等等。也使用了并列句和復合句的結構，如賓語從句、狀語從句等。其次短文中使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱，文章主要使用了一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時，謂語動詞形式準確。【點睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求，談了自己對同學們普遍感到壓力大這種現(xiàn)象的看法，并分享了自己的經歷。但為提升作文檔次，應穿插使用并列句和復合句，或使用一些復雜結構，如非謂語動詞、被動語態(tài)等。文章應使用一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時，注意根據(jù)表達的需要使用正確的時態(tài)，并變化謂語動詞的正確形式。題目中只給出了大概的提綱，其中具體的內容應由學生們自己發(fā)揮想象力來補充，并用正確的英語表達出來。Less pressure makes better life. Thank you.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們針對現(xiàn)在同學們普遍感到壓力大這種現(xiàn)象，以Less Pressure Makes Life Better為題，談談自己的看法，和同學們分享一下自己的經驗。t get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams too much.I was always under pressure, too. My parents wanted me to be the top student in my class. They always sent me to all kinds of afterclasses on weekends.Less Pressure Makes Better LifeHello, everyone!Pressure is a serious problem in today’s world. Most students in our class are under too much pressure. _________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Hello, my classmates! Pressure is a serious problem in today39。就此問題，老師要求你在英語課上做一個以“Less Pressure Makes Life Better”為題的報告，談談你的做法，與同學分享經驗。It is+形容詞 for sb to do sth做某事對某人來說是…的?！军c睛】高分句型：I think it is helpful for students to use mobile phones in a right way．我認為正確的方式使用手機對學生是有幫助的。如but, so, then等。 eyes. In my opinion, I think it is helpful for students to use mobile phones in a right way. Firstly，students can learn more knowledge using mobile phones. At the same time, parents and teachers should do something to help students. Only in this way can mobile phones be of help to their studies.【解析】【詳解】本篇寫作需注意要求中所提供的要點，不可遺漏。t control themselves and often play games. What39。 觀點理由一些學生贊成擁有方便與家長聯(lián)系；一些老師