【正文】 。修改潤(rùn)色是獲取高分的必要步驟。同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作了，在寫(xiě)作的過(guò)程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡(jiǎn)潔性。通常書(shū)面表達(dá)給出的話題是開(kāi)放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。構(gòu)思提綱。審好題是寫(xiě)好書(shū)面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。文章的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。假如你是李華，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下表格內(nèi)的要點(diǎn)提示，并結(jié)合你的家庭實(shí)際情況，給你的英國(guó)筆友Sam寫(xiě)一封信，向他介紹一下你的家規(guī)，并向他展示一個(gè)溫情智慧的中國(guó)家庭。家規(guī)是中華民族傳統(tǒng)文化的重要組成部分。 help. At this moment, I would like to thank all of you for what you have done for us.I wish our school more beautiful and all of us a wonderful future!Goodbye, our beautiful school, our dear teachers and our friends.Thank you for listening!【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，根據(jù)所給提示用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇發(fā)言稿，內(nèi)容包括回顧美麗的校園、生動(dòng)有趣的教學(xué)、三年來(lái)的收獲；感謝老師的培養(yǎng)、父母的支持、同學(xué)的幫助；祝愿，在寫(xiě)作中適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，語(yǔ)句通順，符合邏輯，符合發(fā)言稿的格式，沒(méi)有出現(xiàn)自己的真實(shí)姓名。 efforts, our parents39。發(fā)言稿的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2. 發(fā)言稿須包括所有要點(diǎn)，不要逐詞翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使短文連貫、通順；發(fā)言稿不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。9．書(shū)面表達(dá)假設(shè)你將代表你校2009屆畢業(yè)生在學(xué)校畢業(yè)典禮上發(fā)言，請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇發(fā)言稿，發(fā)言稿的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：回顧美麗的校園、生動(dòng)有趣的教學(xué)、三年來(lái)的收獲；感謝老師的培養(yǎng)、父母的支持、同學(xué)的幫助；祝愿（考生自擬，至少兩點(diǎn)）。在描述得到的經(jīng)歷的時(shí)候不落俗套，講到了自己的家庭那時(shí)比較困難，父親是通過(guò)努力工作為我賺錢(qián)買(mǎi)槍的，寫(xiě)作是富有感情的，也通過(guò)這段經(jīng)歷為這把玩具槍賦予了一定的意義。寫(xiě)作的難度是逐漸加深的，在討論其如何獲得的時(shí)候要注意正確使用時(shí)態(tài)，在談?wù)撘饬x的時(shí)候要注意表達(dá)的準(zhǔn)確性，避免不熟悉的表達(dá)。3. 語(yǔ)言表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，短文連貫通順，80詞左右。8．書(shū)面表達(dá)每個(gè)人都有自己心愛(ài)的物品，相信你也擁有一個(gè)自己心愛(ài)的物品吧！請(qǐng)以“A（n） _____ I have”為題，描述一個(gè)或一件你心愛(ài)的物品，并談?wù)勀闶侨绾蔚玫剿?，以及它存在的意義。銜接自然，順暢。句式豐富?！军c(diǎn)睛】本文緊扣要求對(duì)家鄉(xiāng)做了簡(jiǎn)單介紹，內(nèi)容完整，用了表格中的信息。寫(xiě)作中注意表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)時(shí)的常用句式，注意在表達(dá)不同觀點(diǎn)時(shí)，連詞的使用。 狀況水污染，大氣污染...... 應(yīng)對(duì)措施立即阻止此類(lèi)活動(dòng),治理環(huán)境（至少兩條）...... 感想建議環(huán)境能夠變得更好......Change for a better China________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】We all know it is being more and more important to protect our environment well. But some people don’t care about it .They throw litter into the river and even worse factories also put waste into the river, the river is full of rubbish. The air is badly polluted because there are more cars on the road these days. Factories that burn coal also pollute the air with a lot of black smoke. We hardly ever see blue skies anymore.I think everyone in our hometown should play a part in cleaning it up. We should write to the government ,they should close down the factories. Trees are very helpful and important for the environment .We can plant more trees and more trees in order to live better and more healthy .Now, Our hometown has started to face the problem, I believe we can make our country a better place if we keep trying.【解析】【詳解】環(huán)保話題是人們最關(guān)心的話題之一，請(qǐng)以Change for a better China為主題，結(jié)合自己家鄉(xiāng)的變化寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文。注意事項(xiàng)：，條理清楚，作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。做到：要點(diǎn)要全，表達(dá)要清晰明確，使用短語(yǔ)，句型要準(zhǔn)確，注意避免拼寫(xiě)和語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤?！军c(diǎn)睛】這類(lèi)作文的寫(xiě)作方法要注意認(rèn)真審題，可以分三段寫(xiě)：贊成；反對(duì)；你的看法。文章要有層次、流暢。【詳解】本篇作文要求作者就上網(wǎng)交友發(fā)表意見(jiàn)，寫(xiě)作之前要認(rèn)真閱讀所給提示，確定文章中心。Nowadays many teenagers show great interest in making friends online. Some people think___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Nowadays many teenagers show great interest in making friends online. Some people think students should make friends on line? Some people say yes. The internet helps make many friends. Chatting on line, students can more freely express their feelings and opinions, and even get help with their foreign language studies. But others think students should not. They say making friends on line is a waste of time, which should be spent more meaningfully on study. Besides, some students get cheated on line.It is my opinion that students should place t