【正文】 t Festival . They are also called “three major Chinese holidays” in China. Here are the customs of eating Zongzi and racing dragonboat on the Dragon Boat Festival.China is a nation of etiquette （禮儀）. Chinese people can respect, trust and help each other. We all learn and grow together. Everyone in my school should protect the whole public environment. Climbing the trees, picking the flowers and throwing garbage at random are not allowed there.I hope you can e to China someday to experience the ancient culture of China. Look forward to hearing from you soon.All the best.Li Hua【解析】【分析】本文要求給你的印度朋友Danny寫一篇關(guān)于華夏文明的回信。細(xì)心檢查避免疏漏?？梢赃m當(dāng)使用高分句子。班主任決定在下周舉辦一場“My Life At School” 主題 班會 , 邀請全班同學(xué)參加。未來展望1. 升上理想的學(xué)校；2. 能結(jié)識更多朋友；3. 請你補(bǔ)充（至少兩點(diǎn)）My Life At SchoolHow time flies! It39。審題可知，這篇短文應(yīng)主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時，注意根據(jù)表達(dá)需要使用正確時態(tài)，并注意謂語動詞的正確形式。另外注意句式結(jié)構(gòu)要符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣，用完整的句子表達(dá)。短文有以下幾個特點(diǎn)：首先文章內(nèi)容完整，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰。句式結(jié)構(gòu)完整，符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。請你用英語寫一篇關(guān)于學(xué)生網(wǎng)上交友的短文，介紹人們不同的觀點(diǎn)，并表達(dá)自己的看法。是一篇議論文，第一段要寫贊同學(xué)生網(wǎng)上交友的人的觀點(diǎn)，第二段要寫反對學(xué)生網(wǎng)上交友的觀點(diǎn)，第三段要表述作者自己的觀點(diǎn)。可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文的緊密聯(lián)系，要符合邏輯關(guān)系。7．環(huán)保話題是人們最關(guān)心的話題之一，請以Change for a better China為主題，結(jié)合自己家鄉(xiāng)的變化寫一篇英語短文。要求中已經(jīng)給出了部分提示，動筆先應(yīng)先認(rèn)真閱讀提示，確定寫作內(nèi)容。2.文中用到了一些好的句型：The air is badly polluted because there are more cars on the road these days.；We can plant more trees and more trees in order to live better and more 。A（n） _________ I have__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】A（n） toy gun I haveEveryone has an object that she/ he like best. So do I.In my drawer, there is a toy gun wrapped by yellow cloth. It’s a black toy gun and it can shot some small plastic pills for ten meters. When I was young, I played with other kids with my toy gun. They all admired me and put me in the place of leader. I was so happy then. When I was a little boy, I liked watching the war movies best. I was eager to have my own toy gun. One day, it was my birthday. I asked for it when my father came back. My family was poor then and my father didn’t promise me. From then, father worked harder and came back more lately. A week later, father put a box to me. A black toy gun in it! I was moved with tears. In order to get it, father worked late and hurt himself. He died a month later.Now I hope I can be a soldier and own a real gun to protect my country and family. I will remember my father’s love forever. Every time I miss him, I’ll take out the toy gun and say “Thank you, my dear father!【解析】寫作分析：這篇作文需要就自己最喜歡的物品展開描述，要求是進(jìn)行描述，并談?wù)勀闶侨绾蔚玫剿模约八嬖诘囊饬x。最后玩具的意義得到了升華，表達(dá)了作者的期望（I hope I can be a soldier），上升到了保家衛(wèi)國的層面，這樣的一篇作文是有深度的，能夠讓人感動的，是一篇優(yōu)秀的范文。Good afternoon, ladies and gentlemen, my dear teachers and fellow graduates. It is a great honour for me to make a speech on behalf of the graduating class of 2009. Thank you for listening!【答案】Good afternoon, ladies and gentlemen, my dear teachers and fellow graduates. It is a great honour for me to make a speech on behalf of the graduating class of 2009.It has been three great years for us to study in this beautiful school. Our teachers always try to make their lessons lively and interesting. We have learned a lot over these years, but we could hardly succeed without our teachers39。10．俗話說，國有國法，家有家規(guī)。要點(diǎn)提示：三條家規(guī)尊老愛幼，禮貌待人誠實守信，不斷學(xué)習(xí)按時作息，杜絕熬夜你對你家家規(guī)的看法......簡單闡述你是如何受益的......寫作要求:，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使行文流暢、通順；；。亮點(diǎn)說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如be supposed to, be kind to, keep your words, what’s more, in one’s opinion, develop bad habits, be rude to, be strict with, make a difference to以及it is a good habit to be honest中it作形式主語。審題時要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求。初寫短文。修改潤色