【正文】 y friendly and they are ready to help me. The most unforgettable thing is that I got a chance of being an exchange students and spent two months in , we kept in touch with each other through s. Besides, I was not good at Chinese also wish I can do better in all subjects when I am in high school and can go to a good 。注意文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。,詞數(shù)不少于80。表述靈活。寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇文章講了自己最喜歡的玩具槍，描述玩具槍的時(shí)候有適當(dāng)?shù)募?xì)節(jié)補(bǔ)充，例如a toy gun wrapped by yellow cloth（用黃布包著的玩具槍），這里用到了過去分詞作定語，作者還描述了玩具槍的功能（small plastic pills），順便還描述了自己小時(shí)候玩槍的經(jīng)歷，準(zhǔn)確使用了時(shí)態(tài)。 support and our classmates39。Dear Sam,Haven’t written to you for a long time! As you know, family rules are an important part of our Chinese traditional culture. Today I’m writing to tell you something about my family rules.There are many rules that we have to follow.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________What about you? Do you have any family rules? I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon!Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Sam,Haven’t written to you for a long time! As you know, family rules are an important part of you Chinese traditional culture. Today I’m writing to tell you something about my family rules.There are many rules that we have to follow. First, you should respect the old and love the young. You are also supposed to be kind to other. Next, it’s a good habit to be honest and keep your words. What’s more, you should keep studying , go to bed and get up on time. You mustn’t stay up too late.In my opinion, every family must keep rules and children shouldn’t develop bad habits, like telling lies and be rude to others. We should be strict with ourselves.The family rules also make a great difference to me. I learn to think about others’ feelings and Chinese traditional culture. What about you? Do you have any family rules? I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon!Yours,Li Hua【解析】【詳解】本文屬于材料作文，向山姆介紹你的家規(guī)并向他展示一個(gè)溫情的中國(guó)家庭。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞?！军c(diǎn)睛】寫作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。我們的國(guó)家主席習(xí)近平多次強(qiáng)調(diào)良好家風(fēng)家規(guī)的重要性。注意：1. 90詞左右。要求：1. 請(qǐng)?jiān)陬}目空白處填上你心愛物品的名字；2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。內(nèi)容上應(yīng)注意描述的全面性；語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。注意過渡性語言的使用。2. 詞數(shù)80詞左右，短文的開頭已給出（不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。各部分內(nèi)容安排合理，有層次、有條理。表格中有非常具體的提示，但不能逐詞翻譯表格中的短語，應(yīng)把他們變成自己的話，并用英語表達(dá)出來。美好的回憶； ；； ?！军c(diǎn)睛】寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系，上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞。2. 回復(fù)必須包括所以要點(diǎn)，可是當(dāng)發(fā)揮，是短文連貫，通順。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如first of all，all kinds of books，help to do，be good for，more and further，so much，spend too much time doing，search the Internet，in my opinion，as a result等。3．書面表達(dá)每年的4月23日是世界讀書日，這個(gè)紀(jì)念日的意義在于推動(dòng)更多人去閱讀。2．書面表達(dá)假如你是Amy，德國(guó)的交換生Sara下周即將來你家寄宿，昨天你收到她的來信，在信中，她詢問如下信息：1．你家情況；；3. 她要承擔(dān)的家務(wù)勞動(dòng)；4. …現(xiàn)在，你就她提出的問題給她回信，也預(yù)祝她在你家過得開心！要求：1. 文章必須包括圖片中主要內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息；3. 字?jǐn)?shù)約110詞。注意作文中必須包含材料上的所有信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。（至少寫2點(diǎn)）要求：（1） 80詞左右，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。要點(diǎn)提示：（1）我國(guó)空氣污染的現(xiàn)象。s more, we had better walk or take a bus. Protecting the environment is our duty. Everyone should play a part in saving the earth.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇材料作文，根據(jù)材料中的相關(guān)信息介紹一下整個(gè)國(guó)家的空氣污染狀況。這里had better表示最好，后面跟動(dòng)詞原形，take a bus表示乘公共汽車。【點(diǎn)睛】書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。t have enough time for reading．Moreover，some of us don39。4． 亞洲文明對(duì)話大會(huì)近期在北京召開，你的印度朋友Danny收看了大會(huì)相關(guān)報(bào)道，對(duì)華夏文明產(chǎn)生了濃厚的興趣，來信向你了解中國(guó)文化。平時(shí)注意多多積累句型、短語。5．馬上要初中畢業(yè)了，大家都是依依不舍的。題目中利用表格的形式，展示了文章的具體內(nèi)容，學(xué)生們可以此為提綱進(jìn)行寫作?！军c(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求，回憶了自己的初中生活，并展望了未來。6．人們對(duì)于學(xué)生網(wǎng)上交友持不同意見。文章要有層次、流暢。 狀況水污染，大氣污染...... 應(yīng)對(duì)措施立即阻止此類活動(dòng),治理環(huán)境（至少兩條）...... 感想建議環(huán)境能夠變得更好......Change f