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此處because of, in one’s opinion, give up, know about, last but not least, set up, all in all, call on等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。點睛:本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,語言簡練。寫作中注意運用代詞,注意多種句式交替運用。14.D解析:Dear editor, As we know, Chinese traditional culture is facing a great challenge because of the rapid development of international technology nowadays. In my opinion, it’s necessary for schools to set up traditional culture classes. First, traditional culture is the root of Chinese. As Chinese, we shouldn’t give up our traditional culture and run after Western culture. Second, traditional culture classes can give students chances to know more about our nation. They can raise their sense of national pride. Last but not least, setting up traditional culture classes can spread and develop our Chinese culture.All in all, it is of great importance to set up traditional culture classes in schools. Let’s call on more schools to set up traditional culture classes!Yours,Mike【解析】這是一篇給材料作文,談?wù)勎覍﹂_設(shè)傳統(tǒng)文化課的看法?!军c睛】這類作文的寫作方法要注意認(rèn)真審題,注意過渡性語言的使用。運用自然過渡法和自然銜接法來是文章更為地道、通順、純正。并運用適當(dāng)?shù)木湫秃瓦^渡詞銜接?!驹斀狻?,看看有哪些要求?哪些時態(tài)?人稱?,記敘文?說明文?議論文?看圖?還是應(yīng)用文?,單一還是混合。第二段要寫詳細敘述讀寄宿學(xué)校的利弊;讀走讀學(xué)校的利弊。可以分三段寫。增強邏輯關(guān)系,增加上下文意思連貫,句子通順,行文連貫。(多數(shù)學(xué)生的觀點、男生的觀點、女生的觀點)。寫作時,考生要緊密貼合表格中的三個要點:首先,闡述共享單車的優(yōu)點;其次,列舉共享單車帶來的問題;最后,根據(jù)問題給出個人建議。s very convenient for people to go somewhere.,Also, Besides, In this way, However, it also brings some problems. For example, In my opinion,等。在短文中使用了大量的復(fù)合句、固定句式、連詞及固定短語,為文章增色不少,.如: It39。s helpful to people39。s enjoyed by lots of people.First of all, it39。11.F解析:Today,as a greener means of transportation, bikesharing is being more and more popular in many cities. It39。寫作中注意敘述順序,符合邏輯關(guān)系。10.C解析: The Changes in ClassThanks for giving us students a chance to express ourselves about how we study in class. I like the class like think it is very interesting and lively. We can tell stories, play games and listen to music.I think it is open and free. We can study and think by ourselves .We can discuss in groups and show ourselves. We can get more knowledge in this class. The changes in Class are good for us.【解析】【詳解】假如你是李華,你們學(xué)校正在進行課堂教學(xué)改革,經(jīng)過一段時間的適應(yīng),同學(xué)們發(fā)現(xiàn)現(xiàn)在的課堂跟以前比較發(fā)生了一些變化,請你根據(jù)所給提示以“The Changes in Class”為題目,用英語寫一篇100詞左右的文章,談?wù)勀愕母惺芎拖敕?,開頭和結(jié)尾已給出(不計入總詞數(shù))。:高分短語:feel satisfied;feel upset;e true;set a practical goal;both…and…;keep patient。:例文用第一人稱來敘述主要內(nèi)容;時態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時為主,主要講述如何實現(xiàn)自己的目標(biāo)(Firstly,…More importantly,…Besides,…Finally,…)。9.A解析:As we know, life is not always smooth. Sometimes we may feel satisfied and sometimes we may feel upset. In order to make our dream e true, firstly we should set a practical goal. But just having a goal is not enough. More importantly, we need to study hard to make ourselves stronger. Besides, as teenagers, it is necessary for us to take part in more social activities. We can learn a lot from each other by joining in those social activities. However, there will be many difficulties in both our daily life and study, so please keep patient and be brave to face these challenges. Finally, all our efforts are meaningful and one day our dream will be achieved.【解析】【詳解】:這是一篇材料作文。寫作亮點:本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,語言簡練、要點齊全。根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示可知本文會使用到一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài),注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用。正確文章行文連貫、語句通順、表達流暢。s easy for us to get around on shared bikes. Also, riding bicycles not only is good for our health but also can help reduce pollution. What39。其次短文中使用了恰當(dāng)?shù)臅r態(tài)和人稱,文章以第三人稱、一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)為主,語法規(guī)范,用詞準(zhǔn)確,句式富于變化。短文分成了四段,第一段引出話題共享單車;第二段講述了共享單車的一些優(yōu)點;第三段介紹了一些問題;最后一段作者提出了自己的看法。點睛:這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。寫作時,應(yīng)注意英語表達習(xí)慣和漢語的不同,不能逐詞翻譯,而應(yīng)從句子的整體考慮,簡單句、并列句和復(fù)合句交叉使用,改變文章句式節(jié)奏,使用不同的句式,避免單調(diào)。前兩個內(nèi)容我們需要根據(jù)表格的提示用正確的英語表達,而自己的觀點則需要學(xué)生們自己發(fā)揮想象力,組織語言,并表達出來,要求至少兩點。s a way of living a green life.【解析】這篇作文要求我們給《21世紀(jì)英文報》投稿,談一談自己對共享單車的看法。s more, using shared bikes costs so little that we can afford it.But there are some problems too. Some people can39。7.A解析:Shared bikes are being more and more popular in our daily life. They have won high praise since they appeared.Shared bikes have brought us many advantages. They can be seen everywhere so that it39。要注意上下文的連貫,將這些內(nèi)容有機的連接起來,不要逐句翻譯。作文應(yīng)包括4個主要內(nèi)容,一個是社會現(xiàn)狀,第二個優(yōu)點,第三是存在的問題,最后發(fā)表個人的觀點。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系,語意連貫。動筆前先要認(rèn)真閱讀要點,圍繞要點組織材料,然后用正確的英語句子把這些內(nèi)容表達出來,在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外,還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理,有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言,大小寫是否正確,格式是否正確,詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。修改潤色。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。初寫短文。有了提綱,我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。審題時要注意試題的要求,抓住要點,詞數(shù)符合要求?!军c睛】寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起:認(rèn)真審題。根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài),上下文意思連貫,符合邏輯,可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。4.H解析:例文Hello!Dear Amy, thank you for caring.Now I am working hard for the senior high school entrance examination. I have got good results in most of my subjects, but I am not happy with myself. I think I must spend more time on my studies.My parents are really strict with me. However, they care for me as well. Once upon a time, I failed in my physics exam and felt stressed and sad. They had a close munication with me and helped me solve my problems and cheer up again.My teachers are also ready to help us. They hope that we can realize our dreams. They tell us to try our best and not to give up. Life is always full of ups and downs. It39?!军c睛】首先認(rèn)真審題,看清題目中的要求和要點;然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容,列出寫作要點及每個要點中可能要用到的表達;然后緊扣要點,動筆寫作,在寫作過程中,要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡,必要時可適當(dāng)運用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞,使文章過渡平穩(wěn),自然流暢;同時注意語句要通順,詞匯書寫無誤,不要出現(xiàn)語法錯誤。在寫作時,注意文章文體、人稱和時態(tài);注意連句成篇,保持文章的連貫性,要層次清楚,要點分明,中心突出。為感受母愛情深,弘揚知恩圖報,要求以Myll take her to wonderful sights around China.Most importantly,I will stay with her when I have free time.That39。t have much money.She sent me from piano lessons to dancing lessons at the weekend.She cooked delicious and healthy food for me.When I grow up,I will do what I can to make my mother happy.I will find a good job after I graduate from college.I39。3.C解析:My motherWe need love.We also need to根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應(yīng)用第一,三人稱,一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)和過去時態(tài),注意標(biāo)點符號及大小寫等問題,不要犯語法錯誤。s writer is called Charlotte Bronte, who was born in England in had two sisters and one brother, but unfortunately their mother died when they were very young. Actually Jane Eyre is a book whose theme is of love. In the story. Jane Eyre lived a hard