【正文】 。最后要細心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無誤。在寫作時，注意緊扣主題，連句成篇，要層次清楚，要點分明，中心突出。本文所給材料比較詳細，考生要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容表達出來。根據(jù)編輯部策劃開“A Letter to My Teacher”專欄，邀請你以信件的形式重新投稿。，稿件的首尾已在答題卡上給出，不計入總詞數(shù)：。為此，編輯部策劃開“A Letter to My Teacher”專欄，邀請你以信件的形式重新投稿。10．假設(shè)你是Beth,前段時間曾向英語?？端鸵黄}為My English Teacher Miss Zhang的短詩。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。同時還要注意使用恰當?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。一切都準備就緒，就可以動筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。通常書面表達給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀觥⒚鞔_的關(guān)鍵。構(gòu)思提綱。審好題是寫好書面表達的關(guān)鍵。增強邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準確，句子通順，行文連貫。根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定并準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當增加內(nèi)容。 導(dǎo)致 cause注意：，可適當發(fā)揮；；：100詞左右，文章開頭已給出，但不計入總數(shù)。優(yōu)點（advantage）；節(jié)約時間；避免擁擠、勞累，品種多缺點（disadvantage）， 看不到商品本身， 造成浪費你的觀點……提示詞匯：網(wǎng)購shopping online?！熬W(wǎng)購”已成為一種時尚，越來越多的學(xué)生也加入到網(wǎng)購群體中。句型：reading is a good way to improve reading and writing skills；reading can broaden our knowledge and horizon, which is important to job hunting in the future。例文點評：例文采用的是一段式，寫的是閱讀的好處，時態(tài)采用的是一般現(xiàn)在時，描述倡議時，描寫細致，條理清晰。內(nèi)容包括：應(yīng)該讀什么樣的書，以及讀書的意義。8．4月23日是“世界讀書日”，你校英語俱樂部正在開展主題為“多讀書，讀好書”的活動。：短語：in order to，take part in，lots of，learn from，in the process of，What’s more，have a good time。學(xué)生除了要把所給要點提示都表達出來外，還要進行適當拓展，使文章內(nèi)容充實。某網(wǎng)站正在開展以“弘揚中國傳統(tǒng)文化”為題征文，請你用英文寫一篇報道，介紹你校上周舉辦的“講中國成語故事”活動并談?wù)勀愕氖斋@與感受。7． 中國傳統(tǒng)文化源遠流長，代代相傳。【點睛】首先認真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點及每個要點中可能要用到的表達，例如save energy；brush our teeth；put it into different bins；take action；make a big difference。高分亮點：短語：save energy；brush our teeth；put it into different bins；take action；make a big difference。提示詞語： pollution, protect, save, recycle, take action提示問題：● What are the main environmental problems we have?● What can we do in our daily life? ● What’s your wish?Now there are many environmental 【答案】例文Now there are many environmental problems. Such as air pollution, water pollution and so on.I believe that there are many things we can do in our daily life, we can save energy by go to school by bike or on foot. We can use less water by turning off the tap while we brush our teeth, and taking shorter showers. When we see litter on the ground, we must pick it up and put it into different bins. I hope everyone can take action. Although each one of us may only do a little, together we can make a big difference. Let’s work together to make a better place to live.【解析】【詳解】題干解讀：該題目屬于說明文寫作，寫作時要把我們面臨的主要環(huán)境問題是什么，為改善環(huán)境我們能做什么，以及你的期望全部包括。某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展以“Going Green”為主題的征文活動。點睛：這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如at the beginning of； know about；make a speech等；When ；Although ；Then ；From then on,等的運用，使文章的表達更有邏輯性，更富有條理；同時語言流暢，內(nèi)容完整，是一篇不錯的范文。語言力求準確，簡潔。s very important to be confident【答案】It’s very important to be confident. Selfconfidence can bring us courage to stick to what we do. So it’s valuable to us.When I was in Grade 7, once my teacher asked me to make a speech in class. Although I practiced it for many times at home, I still felt nervous and forgot thewords at the beginning of it. Then I breathed deeply and relaxed myself. You can’t believe how happy I was when I recalled the speech and finished it teacher thought highly of my performance and I got much encouragement from my classmates. From then on, I have bee more and more confident.To build confidence, firstly we need to clearly know about our own advantages and try to develop them. It is the most important that we should put in e