【正文】 開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。內(nèi)容提示：暑假計(jì)劃學(xué)習(xí)博覽群書；學(xué)習(xí)技能 （或自擬一點(diǎn)）生活健康飲食；堅(jiān)持鍛煉 （或自擬一點(diǎn)）其它熱愛公益；親近自然 （或自擬一點(diǎn)）注意：1. 表達(dá)中必須包括所給要點(diǎn)，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要簡單翻譯。南通市通州區(qū)金北學(xué)校中考模擬）書面表達(dá)同學(xué)們，中考后就會迎來漫長的暑假了，班會課上老師組織大家討論假期學(xué)習(xí)和生活計(jì)劃。本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：1．表示歡迎：有利于家鄉(xiāng)發(fā)展等；2．感到擔(dān)憂：造成環(huán)境污染等；3．希望了解有關(guān)環(huán)保措施及更多信息；最后，適當(dāng)提出一點(diǎn)你的建議。行文間要注意簡化描述，用簡短的語句代替冗長的語句?？忌枰紫葘徢逯黝}，圍繞主題展開作文。內(nèi)容是針對英國某公司將在你的家鄉(xiāng)建一座工廠這件事，寫一封電子郵件，表達(dá)歡迎和你的擔(dān)憂。Dear Sir or Madam,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours faithfully, John【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,I am a middle school student. I have recently learned from the newspaper that you are going to build a factory here in my hometown. There is no doubt that it is good for the development of my hometown and it will provide us with more jobs. Most of us stand by the program. However, some of us are worried that the factory will make much noise and pollute the environment of the area. I would like to know whether you have any plans for the environment protection.Would you please offer us more information about it?I39。適當(dāng)提出一點(diǎn)你的建議。江蘇中考模擬）書面表達(dá)假定你叫John，最近從報紙上得知英國某公司將在你的家鄉(xiāng)建一座工廠，請給該公司寫封電子郵件。英語作文，要忠實(shí)于材料，不必?cái)U(kuò)展，注意用好連詞，多用非謂語，慎用較難的句型，一定不能寫錯句。 【答案】The happy lifeMy school life is rich and colourful. We have a lot of fun studying in the classroom with our lovely classmates. All my teachers and classmates are friendly and helpful. We get on well with each other. We often help each other and learn from each other. Though sometimes there is too much homework, with their help, we always finish it happily. During our free time, We play ball games and sing songs together. I wish to have a job I like and I will share my success with my parents. I also hope that I can do a lot of meaningful work for the society in the future. At present, I must study hard to make my dream e true. 【解析】英語作文寫出的句子要達(dá)意，完整，語法正確，合乎習(xí)慣，特別是句式，謂語動詞形式要有根有據(jù)，選用比較有把握的詞匯，用恰當(dāng)?shù)木湫蛯懗龃_切反映內(nèi)容要求的句子。2. 希望將來從事一份喜歡的工作，和父母分享成功，也為社會（society）多做有意義的事情。要點(diǎn)如下：1. 校園生活豐富多彩，在寬敞明亮的教室里學(xué)習(xí)，老師和同學(xué)們都很友好，相處融洽，同學(xué)們互相幫助，互相學(xué)習(xí)，雖然作業(yè)多，但一起學(xué)習(xí)很快樂。全國中考模擬）三年的初中生活接近尾聲，回首過去你充滿依戀，展望未來你豪情滿懷。此處in the past, throw away, used to, on foot, try to do sth, remember to do sth, turn off等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。點(diǎn)睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。It is our duty to protect our environment. After reading a book about the environment, Ihave changed a lot. 【答案】It is our duty to protect our environment. After reading a book about the environment, I have changed a lot.In the past, I went to school in my father’s car because it was easy and fast. I always threw away the things which were old. And I used to ask for plastic bags when shopping in the supermarket.However, after reading the book, I have realized the importance of protecting the environment . I go to school on foot or by bike now. And I try to use things as long as possible and recycle them they are old. And I always remember to take my own bag when shopping.I think as students we should do something to help protect our environment. We should save water. And we should turn off lights when we leave the classroom.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，介紹我閱讀了關(guān)于環(huán)保的書后的很大變化。，做適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。假設(shè)下面是你閱讀了有關(guān)環(huán)保的書之后的變化，請根據(jù)表格內(nèi)所給內(nèi)容寫一篇短文。15．（本文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體，考生需要把所提示的內(nèi)容逐條翻譯成英文，要涵蓋提示內(nèi)容的所有要點(diǎn)，同時注意理順要點(diǎn)，防止漏寫。內(nèi)容包括讀書的意義、大部分學(xué)生目前的狀況、最后發(fā)出倡議。 open the mind增長見識.My dear friends,Reading is very important in our life, Let’s start reading now!【答案】My dear friends,Reading is very important in our life. We can gain knowledge through reading. It can not only open our minds but also make us cleverer and happier. Our study can be improved if we read more books. Reading also helps us grow as a person. However, it’s a great pity that many activities such as listening to music, watching TV and going online take up much of our reading time. So here, I would like to suggest that everyone should read more books and read good books. It will do us good!Let’s start reading now!【解析】本文是一篇倡議書。注意：詞數(shù)80左右；倡議書的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；倡議書須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，行文連貫，表達(dá)清楚。目前的狀況聽音樂、看電視、上網(wǎng)等占去了學(xué)生大部分的讀書時間。四川中考模擬）書面表達(dá)根據(jù)青少年讀書少的現(xiàn)象，請根據(jù)表格中所提供的信息，用英語寫一份向全校同學(xué)提出的倡議。可能用到的詞組：more and more, heavy traffic, obey the rules, look right and left, tell sb. not to do sth., walk on sidewalks等等。動筆前先要注意認(rèn)真閱讀材料，確定寫作內(nèi)容；文章必須包括要點(diǎn)中所給的信息，并補(bǔ)充個人的觀點(diǎn)。實(shí)際上就是要求書寫一份倡議書。s business. We must obey the rules. For example, we must walk on walk side, when we cross zebra – crossing, stop and look right and left, then go across fast. Don’t play football on the road .we can tell our parents not to drink before they drive, not to run through red lights, not to talk and laugh while driving etc.We can say cars are ing into our life, but only when everybody thinks traffic safety is everybody39。，讓短文通順，過渡自然。四川中考模擬）書面表達(dá)越來越多汽車進(jìn)入我們的家庭生活,改善了我們的生活,但同時也帶來了很多問題,如塞車和車禍,給家庭和社會帶來極大的危害。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。修改潤色。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。初寫短文。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。審題時要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求?！军c(diǎn)睛】寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。亮點(diǎn)說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如be good at, be ready to do, get on well with, be weak in, make friends with, make great progress, share with, learn from以及過去分詞作后置定語。 He is _________________________________________________【答案】Li Lei is a very good student. He is good at studying and ready to help others so he gets on well with his classma