【正文】 18．（最后必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫，有無拼寫錯誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。靈活運(yùn)用各種句式，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各個(gè)要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)?！敬鸢浮緼s students born after 1990, we have so many advantages. We are usually kind and helpful. When someone is in trouble, we always give him or her a hand. We are also active. We like to do sports and go traveling. Most of us can work hard in class and play happily after school. Besides, we are imaginative and creative. We always try something new and do everything differently. On the other hand, we also have some disadvantages. Sometimes we can’t express our opinions in proper ways。要求：，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。17．（而My friends and I usually have a talk face to face because we live near each other./ I think the best way to municate is the mobile ，使本文內(nèi)容豐富，表達(dá)流暢，是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)。How many ways do you know to municate with others?How do you usually municate with your friends? Which is the best way and why?【答案】There are some ways to municate with others, such as talking face to face, singing songs, using body and sign language, writing a letter, chatting on line, sending text messages. My friends and I usually have a talk face to face because we live near each other. We often send text messages, too. We can discuss our homework, talk about our interesting games. Sometimes we make phone calls. I think the best way to municate is the mobile phone. It is one of the most wele and useful inventions. After mobile phones appear, munication bees easier and rapider. With the help of the phones, people can keep in touch with anyone at any time and in any place. （118） 【解析】這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。假如你是李華，你對此很感興趣，準(zhǔn)備投稿，談?wù)勀闳粘５慕涣鞣绞郊澳愕母惺?。?dāng)今交流方式很多，但人們之間的情感似乎越來越淡。16．（同時(shí)要注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。文章時(shí)態(tài)要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過去時(shí)，人稱主要用第一人稱。首先我們根據(jù)給出的圖表確定要寫的內(nèi)容的提綱，包括：分享什么？為什么分享？怎么分享？然后根據(jù)每個(gè)提綱給出的一些關(guān)鍵詞，列出寫作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)可能用到的表達(dá)，拓展思維，寫出自己的看法。3. 文中不得提及有關(guān)考生個(gè)人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。注意：，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。15．（亮點(diǎn)說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如used to do, take medicine, as+形容詞原級+as, decide to do, because of, what’s more, be good at, take part in, not...any more以及make a great difference等?！敬鸢浮縎port makes a differenceXiao An is a Grade 9 student. He used to be very weak and had to take a lot of medicine. He wanted to be as healthy as his classmates, so he decided to do sports.He joined Zhao Yang Football club and practiced hard there. Because of football, his life has changed a lot. He finds himself much healthier than before. Now, he has grown into a tall and strong guy. What’s more, he is very good at playing football. Last month, he took part in School Football Match and won the Best Player Award. Xiao An needn’t take a lot of medicine any more. Sport makes a great difference to his life.【解析】【詳解】本文屬于圖畫作文，表達(dá)運(yùn)動讓小安的生活發(fā)生了巨大的變化。（2）詞數(shù)在80?100詞之間。請根據(jù)所給圖畫，展開適當(dāng)?shù)穆?lián)想，完成下面的短文。黑龍江中考模擬）（B）圖示作文：根據(jù)圖畫內(nèi)容，展開想象，寫一篇小短文。此處from time to time, pay attention to, lose heart, so that, in one’s opinion, share..with…等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少?！军c(diǎn)睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。How to Face Senior High School Entrance Examination The Senior High School Entrance Examination is ing. Are you ready for it? Although we have dreams, we may feel worried from time to 【答案】How to Face Senior High School Entrance ExaminationThe Senior High School Entrance Examination is ing. Are you ready for it? Although we have dreams, we may feel worried from time to time. Recently, because of the heavy schoolwork, many students are stressed. Moreover, more attention is paid to students’ language ability, so it is difficult for students to get high marks. As a result, some students are likely to lose heart. As to the problems, my classmates offer the following suggestions. First, we should not only work hard but also improve our learning methods. Second, we should plan our time carefully so that we can achieve a balance between schoolwork and hobbies. In my opinion, we should develop a healthy body by eating healthily and exercising more. Furthermore, we’d better share the worries with our teachers and friends.【解析】【分析】這是一篇給材料作文，以“How to Face Senior High School Entrance Examination”為題，用英語簡要描述如何面對中考，并適當(dāng)表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)。你的建議……（12點(diǎn)，做適當(dāng)發(fā)揮）注意事項(xiàng)：1. 征文須包含表格中所有要點(diǎn)。同學(xué)建議我們不僅要勤奮努力，更要改進(jìn)學(xué)習(xí)方法。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下表：現(xiàn)狀概述由于課業(yè)繁重，學(xué)生壓力較大。對于即將到來的中考，同學(xué)們既有期盼也有壓力。13．（開頭介紹了我最大的個(gè)人變化是喜歡上讀書，接下來介紹我小時(shí)候不喜歡讀書，最后指出現(xiàn)在書籍是我的朋友。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系?！驹斀狻拷Y(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過去時(shí)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：When I was……，my mother always read……，Gradually I began to……，Books are……等句式的應(yīng)用。山東中考模擬）每一次變化都伴隨著我們的成長，作為初中生的你，你感覺自已比起小時(shí)候有了哪些變化?請寫一篇文章描述一下你認(rèn)為最明顯的變化。此處be busy with, get on well with, be famous for, send sb sth, next time, take care等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。點(diǎn)睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：I39。m sorry I haven39。m sorry I haven39。、校名等相關(guān)信息?；貜?fù)郵件的開頭和結(jié)尾己經(jīng)寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。t heard from you since you arrived in Suzhou. I39。請認(rèn)真閱讀下面的郵件內(nèi)容，根據(jù)信中的內(nèi)容及你的實(shí)際情況用英語給Simon回復(fù)一封電子郵件。11．（（4）注意書寫的規(guī)范：大小寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號等的正確運(yùn)用。（3）切忌堆砌詞語、句子，注意運(yùn)用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞使句子流暢、連貫。（1）學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理。希望你能和我們一起參加。我們將會在周日8點(diǎn)在校門口集合，主要活動有和孩子們玩耍，講故事，贈送禮物等。注意把相關(guān)內(nèi)容用連接詞連接起來，使文章通順。提示詞語：gate，play，tell stories，gift提示問題：．When and where will you meet?．What will you do there?．What do you advise Peter to prepare for the activity 【答案】例文How is it going?I am writing to invite you to take part in the volunteer activity at the Hope House. We will meet at the school gate at eight this Sunday morning. We will play games with the children and tell them some interesting stories.We will also give them some gifts. Would you like to tell the children something about your hometown? You can prepare some photos and video