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而He spends more than seven hours a week reading all kinds of books because he thinks reading is helpful./ He hopes everyone can make some changes 。Zhang Yang is a student in Sunshine Middle School.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Zhang Yang is a student in Sunshine Middle School. He is in Class 2,Grade 9. He likes reading. He spends more than seven hours a week reading all kinds of books because he thinks reading is helpful. He enjoys watching birds. He counts the number of birds twice a year to study changes in the number of birds. He donated his pocket money to the Hope Project last month. His dream is to be the chief engineer of highspeed railway connecting my hometown to Shanghai. He hopes everyone can make some changes to protect the environment. We mustn’t throw rubbish everywhere.【解析】【詳解】亮點說明:這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰,內(nèi)容飽滿,表達(dá)流暢。優(yōu)秀事跡上個月把零花錢捐給了希望工程未來夢想1. 希望成為連接家鄉(xiāng)到上海路段的高鐵總工程師2. 每個人為保護(hù)環(huán)境都可以做一些改變。每周花七個多小時閱讀各種類型的書,因為……。靖江外國語學(xué)校中考模擬)書面表達(dá)根據(jù)以下提示,寫一篇介紹我的朋友張陽的短文。But;so that ;If,等的運用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理;同時語言流暢,內(nèi)容完整,是一篇不錯的范文。;from now on。點睛:這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語,為文章增色不少,如It’s necessary for us to save our valuable time.。語言力求準(zhǔn)確,簡潔。How to save time__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】How to save timeWe have ever heard of “Time is money. Time is life”.Time is very important to everyone. But we can see people waste their time everywhere. They spend much time playing puter games, drinking, sleeping late in the morning and so on. It’s necessary for us to save our valuable time. We have to listen to our teachers carefully in class so that we can save more time to learn others after class. We should make a plan to study at home so that we can learn more with less time. We should spend more time reading instead of playing games.If we can make good use of time we are sure to get more. To save time is to save life. Let’s save time from now on.【解析】本文內(nèi)容應(yīng)包含題目中所提供的所有信息。內(nèi)容包括:1. 時間的意義和重要性; (至少3種);3. 節(jié)省時間的方法(至少3個);4. 號召大家節(jié)約時間。17.(它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維,考查運用所學(xué)英語知識準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。ve improved our spoken English with his help./ Next week Mr. Green will leave for ,豐富了習(xí)作內(nèi)容,使表達(dá)多樣,是本文的最大亮點。而He came to teach English in our school three years ago./He is easy to get along with, but he39。s wish him a pleasant journey.【解析】亮點說明:這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰,內(nèi)容飽滿,表達(dá)流暢。s helped us a lot in our Englishi studies. We39。s worked hard. He39?!敬鸢浮縇adies and Gentlemen,First of all, allow me to thank you for giving me a chance to speak here. Mr. Green is from Australia. He came to teach English in our school three years ago. He is easy to get along with, but he39。重慶中考模擬)書面表達(dá)假設(shè)格林(Green) 先生是你班的一位外籍教師,在他回國前夕,學(xué)校將為他舉行歡送會。此處lift sb up, lose one’s way, cheer sb on, with the help of等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。點睛:本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,語言簡練。寫作中注意運用代詞,注意多種句式交替運用。s life. Friends are your part of life. Friends make you believe that there really is good in the world. My best friend is Mary. When I am down, she lifts me up. When I lose my way, she guides me and cheer me on. So cherish your friend, Do not save your loving speeches for your friends. With the help of friends, your life is colourful.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文,“ Friendship”為主題寫一篇短文,談?wù)勎易钫湟暤囊欢斡颜x。假如你是李華,請用英語寫一篇短文投稿,談?wù)勀阕钫湟暤囊欢斡颜x,主要內(nèi)容包括:你最好的朋友是誰,你們?nèi)绾纬蔀楹门笥训模约澳銥槭裁凑湟暷銈冎g的友誼。15.(最后必須認(rèn)真查驗是否有漏寫,有無拼寫錯誤及標(biāo)點誤用等。靈活運用各種句式,采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各個要點完整地表述出來,注意主次分明,詳略得當(dāng)?!敬鸢浮緼s students born after 1990, we have so many advantages. We are usually kind and helpful. When someone is in trouble, we always give him or her a hand. We are also active. We like to do sports and go traveling. Most of us can work hard in class and play happily after school. Besides, we are imaginative and creative. We always try something new and do everything differently. On the other hand, we also have some disadvantages. Sometimes we can’t express our opinions in proper ways。要求:,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。14.(在寫作時,需要注意書信體裁的格式,要符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣;注意表達(dá)的條理性、連貫性,要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡符合邏輯關(guān)系;盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式,同時也要注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化。時態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時,人稱為第一人稱。Dear Andy, Thank you for your . I am very glad to tell you something about my school life._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________How about your school life? I’m look forward to hearing from you.Yours sincerelyLiLei【答案】Dear Andy, Thank you for your . I am very glad to tell you something about my school life.I am busy preparing for the Senior High School Entrance Examination these days. I’m working harder than ever before so that I can enter my ideal senior high school. All of my teachers are willing to devote themselves to helping us. Of all the subjects, Engligh is always my favourite. In class we practise listening and speaking . My English teacher is patient enough to explain English grammar to I have some trouble, I often go to my Engligh teacher, she can always help me with my