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。Hangzhou is the resort where Longjing tea is produced. 杭州是龍井茶出產(chǎn)的勝地。Longjing is a famous tea in China, which is related not only to the climate and soil environment of Longjing, but also to the production technology of Longjing. 龍井是我國著名的茶葉,它不僅與龍井的氣候、土壤環(huán)境有關(guān),而且與龍井的生產(chǎn)工藝有關(guān)。亮點(diǎn)句型:It is good for people to keep healthy by drinking Longjing tea. 喝龍井茶對人們保持健康有好處。時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。請你根據(jù)表格信息,用英語為其寫一篇介紹,詞數(shù)80左右。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外,還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理,有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言,大小寫是否正確,格式是否正確,詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。修改潤色。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。初寫短文。有了提綱,我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求,抓住要點(diǎn),詞數(shù)符合要求?!军c(diǎn)睛】寫作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起:認(rèn)真審題。亮點(diǎn)說明:這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文,很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù),語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣,準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致,特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句,如bought sth for sb, be grateful to, be going to do, share sth with sb, be fond of, as far as I am concerned, on the one hand...on the other hand, from to以及we had a reading party,which was held on Friday in our reading room中which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句。Last Friday,we had a reading party, which was held on Friday in our reading room. Then we are going to hold an activity to share the feeling with others at 3:00 on Friday afternoon. All of us are fond of buying books on the Internet. We are going to buy some books on the Internet next month. As far as I am concerned, on the one hand, the books on the Internet are cheaper than those in the bookstore. On the other hand, there are all kinds of books, so we needn’t go from one bookstore to another .Best wishes!Yours,Cathy【解析】【詳解】本文屬于材料作文,向外教介紹俱樂部中讀書交流會的活動,并且告訴外教同學(xué)們現(xiàn)在喜歡網(wǎng)購圖書并闡述網(wǎng)購圖書的好處。4至少80詞。2可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié),使內(nèi)容充實(shí),行文連貫。3說一說網(wǎng)上購書有什么好處。(2)本周五的下午3點(diǎn),大家將共同交流讀書的體會。寫作要點(diǎn):1表達(dá)收到圖書后的喜悅與感激之情。俱樂部的同學(xué)們很喜歡網(wǎng)購圖書這種便捷的方式,并打算在本周五交流讀書后的感受。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系,語意連貫。動筆前先要認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn),圍繞要點(diǎn)組織材料,然后用正確的英語句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來,在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。參考要點(diǎn): 1保護(hù)自然,如:綠色低碳出行, 減少污染……2美化自然,如:讓天更藍(lán)山更綠水更清……3呼吁人人參與,從身邊小事做起,如:適度節(jié)約,拒絕浪費(fèi)……;做到人與自然的和諧。8.書面表達(dá)4月28日,國家主席習(xí)近平在北京延慶出席2019年中國北京世界園藝博覽會開幕式,提出綠色發(fā)展“五個(gè)追求”(fivepoint initiative on green development),為全球生態(tài)文明建設(shè)貢獻(xiàn)中國智慧。:短語:in order to,take part in,lots of,learn from,in the process of,What’s more,have a good time。學(xué)生除了要把所給要點(diǎn)提示都表達(dá)出來外,還要進(jìn)行適當(dāng)拓展,使文章內(nèi)容充實(shí)。某網(wǎng)站正在開展以“弘揚(yáng)中國傳統(tǒng)文化”為題征文,請你用英文寫一篇報(bào)道,介紹你校上周舉辦的“講中國成語故事”活動并談?wù)勀愕氖斋@與感受。7. 中國傳統(tǒng)文化源遠(yuǎn)流長,代代相傳。 support and our classmates39。Good afternoon, ladies and gentlemen, my dear teachers and fellow graduates. It is a great honour for me to make a speech on behalf of the graduating class of 2009. Thank you for listening!【答案】Good afternoon, ladies and gentlemen, my dear teachers and fellow graduates. It is a great honour for me to make a speech on behalf of the graduating class of 2009.It has been three great years for us to study in this beautiful school. Our teachers always try to make their lessons lively and interesting. We have learned a lot over these years, but we could hardly succeed without our teachers39。注意:1. 90詞左右。所以,考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn),要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式,盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)?!军c(diǎn)睛】書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英,也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。而I think it39。conditions)差5生活越來越好,環(huán)境(environment)越來越舒適.6你的感想…(寫兩到三句)Changes in Our HometownIn the past ten years,great changes have taken place in our hometown. 【答案】Changes in Our HometownIn the past ten years, great changes have taken place in our hometown. In the past, there used to be old houses. The river was very dirty. The roads were narrow and the living conditions were terrible. People were not rich. They